[OOC] Waeldeshore 1.0 [CONCLUDED]

[Blizz]

@IcePezzyo pezzant(budum TSS)remember me?

I PMed ya

[The Fated Fallen]

@IcePezzyo pezzant(budum TSS)remember me?

I PMed ya

@Blizz

Ouch, out of nowhere too. You two seem to have a history, a story worth telling maybe?

[Blizz]

@The Fated Fallenperhaps
But really(don't take this as offense)does it matter,if you wanna hear a story......SUREEE ^_^

[Dragoknighte]

Story time?

[Blizz]

Uhhhm

[IcePezz]

@The Fated FallenLOL no story that I know of, I've just bumped into him in the chatroom ... but to anyone who needs anything. I'm at work today and a dinner date tonight. I'll be around when I can, but if I can't get back to ya'll right away, thats why :D

[The Fated Fallen]

So, shall I post in a couple of hours without waiting for you, @IcePezz?

[IcePezz]

@The Fated Fallen I don't see why not. I'm not sure I'll be able to post, but either way, there isn't much for me to add, other than "follows Tirarrian to try and catch up with Durin" lol once we're there at the healing shop, or once you post, that should give me a bit more to write up on. but you're more than welcome to post if you'd like. Would be good to keep this moving. Happy we have momentum back!!

[Blizz]

Yorik Darkhart

Age:12

Gender:male

Appearance:Yorik is somewhat tall, he has brown hair and tan-ish skin, his eyes are a deep vivid shade of indigo.He wears a black cloak and cowl that tend to trail in the wind, under Yoriks right eye shows a pattern of purple tree branches rooting out from his eye in all directions,this pattern glows brighter when angry and dimmer when he is calm.

Clothing/armor:Yoriks signature clothes are a black cloak and cowl which hide a layer of chain mail underneath.He often has this cowl back behind his head and only wears it in dangerous Territory, however the cowl does not cover the branch pattern on his face.

Weapon:
scythe
Yorik wields a scythe just a few inches taller than him, this weapon is sheathed upside down on his back like a bow, his scythe is colored with a radiant hue of silver,the blade however is bright grey

Alignment:currently neutral(this can change at anytime if either side wants him in their ranks, first come first served style :3)

Skills/abilities
Illusion magic:Yorik has a knowledge of magic revolving around the deception of the mind and it's weaknesses to reluctance(meaning he could do things like make a troll think they were a duck or scare someone with what isn't there)

Healing/mending wounds
Yorik has a brief understanding of wounds that ends at anything past something such as a fatal wound, he can help someone stabbed by a spear as long as they aren't losing tremendous amounts of blood

Magic
Illusion(powered by a black eagle claw talisman)

Backstory(takes place in dreams, 99.99% exactly)
Yorik awoke in a strange place, the land was dark and the sky darker, the trees were bare and grim, spotted a path and decided to walk down said path,

A short while later he found a cave in which all he could see was the bright yellow flame of a lantern,Yorik grabbed it and saw that there was a skull on the ground, he saw something shining in the skulls mouth.Yorik picked up the skull with his free hand and saw that inside was an eagles talon, void of all color,no tints, not hue, no evidence of ot being torn from an eagle, only a black string tied to it.

The strange amulet began to float out if the skulls mouth and around Yoriks neck moments later the skull sprung to life and said:"You have been given a gift boy, I hope you have fun, the skull than melted in Yoriks hand.

Yorik awoke in confusion as he noticed a black eagles talon on his neck

[IcePezz]

@Blizz currently, I am not going to accept him as is. I'm a bit weary on his age. Being 12 years old, I'm not sure how much he can fend for himself, with or without his talisman. I'd also like a bit more information than just one sentence for each section.

[Blizz]

@IcePezzhis talisman is what gives him the power to use illusion magic,so with it he's stronger but without it he is almost just as fine,

I'll get to adding more detail some other time,right now I'm a tad busy so sorry if that gets in the way. ;(

[IcePezz]

Thats abolustely fine. things in general get in the way, I understand. When you have a finished cs, we'll talk then :)

[Blizz]

Ok,every now and than I will poke at the CS and make little changes, and I stress little.

[IcePezz]

@Blizz... as I had mentioned, he won't be accepted as he is now, so whatever changes you do make, will let me know how serious you are about joining our rp as they'd have to be significant enough to change my mind from no to yes.

[The Fated Fallen]

@Blizz Could you specify race in your CS?
Maybe throw out even the smallest amount of backstory, like how he got the Talisman?

[Blizz]

@The Fated Fallenwould a story of his making it count(just joking)

@IcePezzGOTCHA -determined face of determined determination >:|-

[Blizz]

Edited,though I'm not sure to call it final

[IcePezz]

@Blizz so tell me more about the tree branches on his eye? Why are they there? Why do they glow brighter when his moods change? Tell me more about his knowledge of magic? How did he learn it? Where did he learn it from? How does the talisman effect it? If the talisman was such a significant gift, it should be something more than just "strengthens" his power right?

@IcePezzhis talisman is what gives him the power to use illusion magic, so with it he's stronger but without it he is almost just as fine,

@Blizz

without it, if he is just as fine, then why is the talisman so significant?

These are some things that I'd like you to put into your cs, whenever you have the chance.

[Blizz]

The branches are of unknown origin,i will put below a chart to explain

Not glowing-asleep

Very dim-awake

Dim-calm

Glowing-annoyed

Bright-frustrated

Luminous-angry

Radiant-furious

Sparkling-mindless(mindlessly rampaging until he calms down)

Any thing more and loud whispers can be heard speaking in incomprehensible tongues when near him,this is simply spirits warning people nearby to run,nothing more
"Run"
"Flee now!"
"Get out if here"
"You must run!"

[Blizz]

@IcePezzthe talisman is what gives him the power to use illusion magic

It's not exactly so important, Yorik considers it a good luck charm, it isn't but that's why it's always on him