@LokiLeo789 Quay:
Spelling and Grammar: 6/10 (keep writing, and read more, and you'll definitely improve ;D)
Writing Quality: 7/10 (Good for the most part, but there are some parts that don't make sense or are a bit confusing, leaving one guessing as to what happened from the context.)
Story Line Advancement: 9/10 (very good, you've contextualised the kingdom and introduced Quay, and he's the first to head off for the Summit which is currently taking centre stage, it would seem)
Character Development: 7/10 (interesting, there will be a great amount of development. Already he has gone from the simple prince to the hero blessed by Arguis and Escre, he has left behind all he knows and ventures into a brave new world. Very good)
Independence: 10/10 (don't think I could give you any less than 10, as harsh as I try to be xD)
10 Khookies earned
Zek'Ri:
Was just a paragraph in that post, but I will grant 9 Khookies to him.
@Cyclone Added holy sites and worshippers to the end of the demigod hider. If you have any questions, feel free to grill me.