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Sorry about that, haven't been on RPG in quite some time it seems. Is there actually a delete button somewhere I'm not seeing, or should I just stick with editing everything out?

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Fell Obereon

PHYSICAL FORM
Vaguely humanoid in shape, Fell is comprised of a patchwork of bits and pieces. The mass of his body is largely made up of separate chunks of wood, stone, bone, and crystal inscribed each with a different rune or sigil indicating some demonic presence. His right arm is made of what appears to be solid gold, moving in impossibly organic ways. Stretching from his back are a pair of silken wings, framed in stone. In place of real feet, Fell sports a pair of iron spikes protruding from his legs, on which he seems always able to balance. Resting on his left shoulder is a blackened skull, which seems to constantly drip ash from the eye sockets. Through gaps in his mismatched body, one can see the harsh yellow glow of Fell's heart. The only visible part of Fell that remains human are his eyes -gentle hazel irises can be seen staring out from behind his iron mask.
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ABILITIES
Fell relies on the abilities granted to him from the many of sacrifices he has made in the past to demons, devils, and the like. These numerous sacrifices have left him with many boons which he uses to great effect.


WANTS AND NEEDS
Fell has one primary driving force behind his actions -power. Throughout his life, Fell has fought and won thousands of battles. But for each victory, he faces dozens of losses on a personal level. Because of this constant cycle of loss with which he is cursed, Fell seeks out any way to empower himself in the hopes of someday becoming a decisive victor and winning back that which he has lost. Along with this, he has a strong sense of vengeance, and goes after those who wrong him with a fiery passion

RELATIONSHIPS
He is widely known among demons, and generally respected for his dedication and perseverance -as well as the fact that he always keeps his word. Nonetheless, many are wary of him, due to his uncanny knack for killing them. He has very few relationships with others, as those around him tend not to last long.

BACKSTORY
Fell has a history of sacrifice to the infernal, almost written in his blood. Coming from a long line of diabolists, the name of Obereon had incurred many debts. As such, the birth of Fell was no act of love, nor happy accident. Fell was planned as a sacrifice to a more insistent demon hunting the family. Instead of accept the sacrifice, the demon was disgusted by the Obereon family's attempt to go back on their word, and slaughtered them -leaving the child alive. Hearing of the incident, the church thought it only just that they take in the child -not only to save it from obvious starvation, but to also set it on the righteous path.
Growing up in the church, Fell had his past hidden from him for his own protection. However, demons tend not to stay hidden for long. In the many months leading to Fell's 10th birthday, he was haunted by recurring nightmares, of a goat-like figure, standing over him and laughing. It was on the morn of his 10th birthday that this nightmare became reality -as Fell awoke, he saw the entire community of his church on the floor, surrounded in pulpy gore -but not before he smelled them. The irony scent of blood mingled with a distinct odor of rot to paint a disgusting image in the boy's head, something he would never forget. In the orgy of blood, Fell saw the figure again, a deep throaty laugh filling the room.
It was here that Fell made his first deal with a demon. He lost very little in exchange for the return of his 'father', an elderly priest who had shown the boy nothing but unadulterated love. In exchange for a simple favor that the demon would later cash, Fell's 'father' was returned to him.
Eight years of recovery followed. When it seemed that the two would finally be able to return to their normal lives, Fell heard the dreaded laugh once more. The demon returned, demanding it's debt repaid. Taught to honor his word, Fell fell to his knee and swore he would do anything to please the demon. This elicited only more laughter. When Fell looked up to the demon, he saw it was gone -in its place, a violent blade was impaled in the ground. In the reflection of the blade, he saw only his 'father', no matter what angle he looked. When Fell realized what it was the Demon wanted, he screamed, kicked, and swore, refusing. The only response he received was a flashback of the original gore, and the realization that the demon could do far worse.
So it was, that Fell parted a second time with his father. Over the course of years, he sought out every possible way to bring his father back, and exact revenge upon the demon who had torn apart his life. Endless searching through tomes and libraries lead him to only one solution -one he loathed.
And so it was, twelve years after the death of his father at his own hands, that Fell now stood over the body of the demon who wrought this destruction upon him, his father at one shoulder, a figure robed entirely in red at the other. Fell turned to the demon clothed in bloody crimson to ask the price. Before he could open his mouth to speak, he was faced with a nauseating sensation that sunk deep down, permeating his bones, and a scent of ozone. The demon was gone, and with it, his left hand.
And so begun an endless cycle for Fell. A violent loss, followed by a victory that inevitably cost more than he gained.

More detail on the backstory can be added, if you'd like.
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@R31GN, very nice. The backstory is amply detailed for this RP. His powers are also very well thought out and detailed.
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@R31GN

Very nice, of course it's accepted.

To my knowledge there is no delete button anyhow, but now that you're accepted you can just edit the sheet back in. I'm not mad or anything, but just be aware that for future RPs it's good etiquette to not post in the character section until told. It helps keep the place clean and it can get awkward if you post a character in that section but it gets rejected.

But now, at this point I always ask newcomers how they plan to introduce their character IC, and offer my help if it's wanted. Considering that the Horde's master is a demon, perhaps Fell gets dragged into his service through some sacrifice or deal?
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@Cyclone

Great, thanks!

I'll keep that in mind, thank you

That sounds like the best course. Perhaps something along the lines of my character getting his head kicked in by orcs, then somehow contacting the Keeper to save him/grant him more power, that way my character is already near the rest of the horde and the dragon upon their alliance? If that sounds good, any idea as to how my character would be contacting the Keeper, so I can start writing up an intro?
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@R31GN

Saying he's had the orcs capture him while he was in the middle of those mountains or something could work, sure. It just doesn't make that much sense, but if you're fine with it I won't object.

The Master certainly isn't the only demon in his stereotypical horde of monsters, dark cultists, and the like. Perhaps Fell has been bound to another demon in the horde for a while now, but eventually kills that demon as he is wont to do?

You don't need my stamp of approval for the intro; feel free to just roll with any of these ideas you like and I'll follow your lead IC. I just always try to help newcomers figure out how to begin since I've been in that position before and know that sometimes it's hard to do the introduction.

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Alright, cool. I'll get that written up ASAP. Might be a few hours though, just got called in to work
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So... What's everyone up to lately?
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@Kangutso

My birthday was two days ago.
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Happy late birthday, mate. Happy 32nd?
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So... What's everyone up to lately?


I had some big tests going on, hence my relative inactivity for the past week. Don't worry, I'll definitely get a post out soon.
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Happy late birthday, mate. Happy 32nd?


Thanks and it's 22.
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I had some big tests going on, hence my relative inactivity for the past week. Don't worry, I'll definitely get a post out soon.


Alright.

Whatever happened to @Lugubrious? Still kind of waiting on his response to Faeles.
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Though I have been pretty busy, this has been admittedly neglected by me as low on my priorities. Tomorrow you can expect me to contribute once again.

I do not hesitate to confess that the unreliable method of replying only when called out has been wholly adopted by me in regards to this RP. You guys really do deserve more from me, and for that I apologize. Despite this, I am sure I'm not the only one struggling to get hyped for this RP anymore.
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@Lugubrious

Still planning on posting today? I'll wait on you if so.

And for the record, as my sporadic posting has attested I'm perfectly fine with this RP advancing at a slow pace. One post every week or two is enough from each person.
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Slow and steady is good. Beats going to bed on page 12, and getting up on page 23. Puts a girl like me right of the RP, that.
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I'm still lurking. I just don't have too much to do.
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I'm still lurking. I just don't have too much to do.


Could do something to Gormlag if you want. Or try to snitch on Faeles.
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First I can't talk about fight club, and now I can't even let people know when I'm spanking it? What has this world come to?
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