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--letter of cancellation--
Alright, everyone. I hate to do this, but I think we all know it's been coming for a long while.

Heroes of a different story is dead. We've lost too many players too many times, the planned plot is at least another 5 months off course, and I have entirely lost my motivation and inspiration as a GM.

It's been a good run, and I had a lot of fun while it lasted, but I am not the GM you all deserved, and this roleplay is a shadow of what it could have been.

If I were to try and keep it going, I feel like I would be leading you all on, delaying the inevitable.

In all honesty, I wish we could keep going, but... I just don't have it in me. You all probably noticed I was online less and less frequently, responding late, entirely forgetting to say anything about progress.

With this apology, I would like to officially close the curtain, and release you all to find role-plays with worthy GMs.

Sincerely, Sean Stevens.

PS. I might see you guys around, might not. But one thing is certain; you can find me on the RWBY wiki if you ever decide to come rip my throat out for wasting your time.

---For any randoms who stumble across this thread in the future---
This character sheet was designed as an ongoing collaborative effort by the members of the RWBY wiki, covering every possible detail a RWBY OC might ever need. If you are at a loss when designing a template of your own for a RWBY roleplay, use it. It was designed with the aim of unifying efforts and enjoying the series as a collective, and I urge you to carry it on going forward, just try not to use its power for evil.
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@Phantomlink959 I'll submit a character specifically for this RP, if that's alright, I'd rather not use Diana
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It is both alright and technically preferable.
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@Phantomlink959 how is he? Because I have a couple of other options if he's too much
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Waiting on Sprit and Fox to both be online so we can go over him together, and so they can decide who's team he'll be on.
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ok
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Well, all the people went home early, so I'm officially online for the day
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So is Argent accepted?
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Okay Mad, just a few things to tweak.

First, can you specify how his aura is supposed to be unusual? Is it supposed to be unusually large? The sentence seems a bit unfinished on the character sheet.

Edit: Liking the fact that you pointed out how he has bad control with unusually large reserves.

With his fighting style, he seems to be very heavily based on a paladin type of character. With this in mind, we have a few suggestions.

For Michael, his sword, is to have it turn into a handcannon rather than an smg due to your paladin motif. A paladin is based more on slow but high damage rather than fast but low damage, so a shotgun or handcannon would fit better with this theme. Also, does he dual wield Michael and Raphael when they are both in gun form?

Edit: Wait, I see you answered that question. Okay. Cool. Do you still want to keep the SMG?

With the Semblance, we suggest either turn it into either a buff for himself and his teammates or a sort of hardlight shield, which would create a directed forcefield rather than a protective buffer. As his aura control grows, so too would his ability to protect his team mates. In the case of the visual effects; his aura control doesn't seem like it would be good enough to create complete angel wings to encompass the area. Perhaps it could start off as feathers floating around himself and his teammates and as his control gets better it forms the wing motif.

Edit: I see you updated the semblance. Makes sense, though we till think the wings might be a bit too much for his current lack of control. It might be better save for when he has better control.

Other than those few things, he's a decent character with plenty of room for character growth as the roleplay progresses. Do you have a preference for which team you'd like to go on? His initials will fit either NCTR or CLRT.

Edit: Whoops. Silver eyes in canon have been hinted as slightly important due to Ruby Rose having them. Might need to change them. Maybe you could go with a pale blue, or a glasz colour (which is a mix between blue, green and grey, and seem to change colour occasionally. It's a real thing too)
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Ok, I guess Michael can turn into a large revolver, I can see where the visual effect can be an indication of his control level, and I think I'll go with light blue eyes, I have no preference as to what team he ends up on, just put him on the one you guys think he should be on
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Okay Mad, let me know when you've updated his info and I'll add him to CLRT's team list.
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updated
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Coolies, we're just trying to sort out bbcoding at the moment. It's not liking us lol

Edit: Done. He's attached to the CLaReT hider.
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I made an edit to Michael's possible/planned upgrades section
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They've been added
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ok
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And I'm back!!!
Was kind of shocked to get home from club to find the old one had closed.

Sooo……… I'm going to recheck and edit Tamn a bit and see what you think, kay?

I do however have a small suggestion relevant to post order, instead of having the order 'set in stone' you could just make it we can post in whatever order we want, so long as we only post once per round.

No promises on getting her in tonight though.

Although I have to ask, am I the only one who thinks her weapons and semblance don't match? Giving her an awkward fighting style?

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Welcome back Silver! Yay!

Yeah, the old one closed because Phantom realied he'd made some serious mistakes in his plotline, information availability and rules for the characters - such as all of them having to have tragic backstories, which doesn't particularly lend towards team players.

We'll see what Phantom thinks of the idea for the posting order, but I don't particularly have a problem with it. It might be a bit difficult keeping track of whether the new round has started or not though.

I'll have a read through Tamn and see what you mean by her semblance and fighting style.

Edit: I'm not seeing a problem with the fighting style and semblance combination, as it seems to me that she'd use the second form of movement (the roller blading thing) to move very quickly towards and around her opponent, hitting them hard and then moving out of the way. Somewhat like a mix between Ruby and Weiss's fighting style, if you need an example.

Phantom's asleep right now anyway though, so it wouldn't be until sometime tomorrow that we'd be able to sit down and discuss Tamn even if you did get her submitted tonight. So don't stress and rush her through.
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Okay. :)
I'll think on her.

Talking about characters, I thought Mad's was named Agent Roan. not Argent Roan. Which makes me thing Agent Phil from the Avengers. …

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