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@PhoebeCarlisle I get it, that's how I used to roleplay to but trust me when I say it's a lot more fun being someone else and seeing what that creation becomes and learning what sides of yourself are being hidden and who you could be if given the capability. I like your CD but I would really like to see you try and expand your horizons and make something new and different and see what comes out of it.
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So what would I have to change it to make it different other than the Birth Date?
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ALL OF IT!!!!! Just kidding but all of it is you change as much as your willing to to make it not you. Or change nothing, I won't mind. I'm just trying to help you be a better roleplayer
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Lol, well the pictures not me anyway, I'm not that pretty, I'll change some of it lol. Plus I don't live in a tree house.
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@PhoebeCarlisle Even though the birth date and appearance has been changed, the personality is still you which was what I was hoping to change. I'm glad you made some changes though but I ask for you to add one thing. A backstory, I know how she would act, somewhat, but I want to know who this is and what she's done, add a little depth to the character you know?
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How did you know the personality was me the only introduction I've done was on the character but yeah sorry I couldn't think of what else to put. Sure I'll add a backstory right now :)
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I did the back story, and it's not me! YAY :)
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@PhoebeCarlisle Now your character has become kind of unbelievable, even though the show that this is based off of doesn't follow all rules of logic they still have rules that they are bound to and the humans aren't that special. Its hard for me to believe that this baby managed to escape a river, feed itself at a young age when it could barely move, and somehow learn the skills to build a tree house. So unless this protector did everything for her then her backstory is not possible, and if he did then there should be more about him.
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Ok nevermind, I will change it again.
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More believable now?
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@PhoebeCarlisle Yes, thank you for putting up with me. That's one of the reasons why I'm co-GM, because I will correct every flaw your character has until they are perfect (besides the good kind of flaws that add character depth of course)
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If anything, I was getting a bit sad at how many flaws I did have. Thanks for correcting me and leading me down the right path. Anything else?
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@PhoebeCarlisle Kronshi not Kroshni but the only problems are some continuity problems like, how does she have a tattoo, a black hoodie, and skinny jeans, if she lives in the woods but that can be overlooked.
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Well there are forests around Mohs Town so the living in the woods works and if she got a job in town or something it would work. She could have made a concious choice to stay in the tree house even with money. Kind of like a sentimental thing

Just throwing out ideas so it works and you can keep everything as is
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Ok I'll fix that tomorrow I got to go to bed, goodnight.
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That's a wonderful idea! Thanks a bunch. I'll put that in tomorrow!
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Well there are forests around Mohs Town so the living in the woods works and if she got a job in town or something it would work. She could have made a concious choice to stay in the tree house even with money. Kind of like a sentimental thing

Just throwing out ideas so it works and you can keep everything as is

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If she does that then it makes sense but I expect her to stick to that story then.
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Morning guys! Did I miss anything oh and any advice on trying to jump back in
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@Saarebas Well, Spinel spooked Sodalite (who dropped her concealed weapons everywhere in her fright), Eve (who nearly dropped Amber's gemstone in hers), and Emerald, Aquamarine's come out thanks to Howlite decided that axing the window would be the best 2nd escape plan since Eve was covering the door, and they're trying to cover up what happened to Aquamarine, who is also now out. We also got to see some flashbacks from Bloodstone.

Also, I woke up and was swarmed with posts everywhere. Just like two days or so ago. XD

I just want to let you all know that I'm going to be kept on the road for the next few hours, so I'm not sure when or if I'll be able to post. Feel free to drag Eve where ever you please.
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You can jump back in at anytime. They all just got out of the van and kind of have been waiting for him to reform. Just have his gem start glowing and reforming back to life ^_^
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