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Elwood is truly an ass lol I suppose I now have to make my sample canon...
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I'm having a lot of fun.

And as far as samples go - hey, I always do.
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Forgive my lateness, y'all. I've just been privately fleshing out my 'crime family' so I can have some consistancy.

I even enforced that samples must be historical in a recent game I started.
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I even enforced that samples must be historical in a recent game I started.


I generally don't go that route since with this particular RP the characters aren't starting with their powers and some players may want to display them in their samples.

Honestly I wasn't going to make my sample canon as I borrowed it from another character who is a lot more aggressive than I was planning on making Alexis (I just didn't have any ideas for a sample at the time... shh!)
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Makes sense, but in fandom games or at least ones where everyone knows what to expect, I feel like it can be a good opportunity to build the world and your history from the get-go. Otherwise makeserfect sense since you want histories shared via the IC though.
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I'll wait until something comes up before I post as Maria and Tanya again.
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I'm torn on this sheet. What bothers me the most about it is that I can't help but feel that an ability with such a wide range of applications should be better fleshed out and limited. While you have weaknesses and some limits stated, outside of tiring Matt in battle, none of them are really exploitable. I think I'd like to see that fleshed out more before accepting.
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I'm torn on this sheet. What bothers me the most about it is that I can't help but feel that an ability with such a wide range of applications should be better fleshed out and limited. While you have weaknesses and some limits stated, outside of tiring Matt in battle, none of them are really exploitable. I think I'd like to see that fleshed out more before accepting.


Understood. I not only agree with your critique but expected it. I was hoping that I might get a little more direction with what you'd like to see as an exploitable weakness, because I struggled writing some for this power to the point where I almost changed to invisibility & forcefields; but faced the same problem. If you or any accepted players have any pointers or recommendations (for either power, I'm open to switching), I'd be grateful. Because I've hit a bit of a wall.
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First thing that came to mind was something about if he's in contact with the ground but if he flies through use of his power then he's kind of always grounded without access to his abilities. But perhaps certain material or materials block or hinder his abilities.
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His power shrinks his dong.
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First thing that came to mind was something about if he's in contact with the ground but if he flies through use of his power then he's kind of always grounded without access to his abilities. But perhaps certain material or materials block or hinder his abilities.


His power shrinks his dong.


Both interesting suggestions, but I chose to change his power entirely. It took me twice as long because after I first wrote it up, I accidentally hit 'Cancel' whilst previewing the edit. Because I'm kind of a genius like that.

Please let me know if you prefer this edit.
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@Tyler All good to me. throw it up in the character tab!
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Both interesting suggestions,


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I get the feeling you're being sarcastic. lol
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@Tyler All good to me. throw it up in the character tab!


Excellent, thanks. I'll get an IC post up soon.

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@Tyler Looking forward to it!
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@Tyler Looking forward to it!


Hopefully you won't find my character too much of a self-insert fuckboy. I'll do my best.
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@Tyler Ha, you've got Joseph and Elwood to compete with that for.
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It's gonna be hard, since every character's a fuckboy.

(Except mine)
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Posted. You'll notice I changed Matthieu's backstory in the post so that he's been living in The Shallows for a little longer than his character sheet implies. He's now entering his second term at NLCA rather than his first. Frankly, I really couldn't be arsed with the whole "Look at me, I'm the new kid" thing. Hope this is OK.

Also, if anyone wants to add me on Skype, I'm at facebook:upsetboulevard.
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