[OOC] Closed.

[Silent Whispers]

CLOSED.

[Virani]

Awesome, I'm working on my char sheet now.

[Sugar and Spite]

I would like to reserve a spot for a female Divergent. I will also be making a... I guess you could say regular male.

[Silent Whispers]

@Virani
Awesome! Cannot wait to see him or her.

@HaleyTheRandom
No reservations. This is not first come, first serve. :)

[Sugar and Spite]

@HushedWhispersNo problemo. I'll just get right on the form xD

[CLIW]

Working on a character right now. I'm going on a leg and assuming that someone can be not-Divergent, Dauntless, but still a geek.

[Silent Whispers]

@CLIW
Yes but all of our characters will be either Dauntless born or Dauntless transfers. :)

[Virani]

Kayla Mackenzie

“If you don't want to know the answer, don't ask the question”

Name:

Kayla Louise Mackenzie

Nickname:

Mack

Age:

21

Gender:

Female

Sexuality:

Heterosexual

Original Faction:

Candor

Aptitude Result:

Inconclusive

Faction Chosen:

Dauntless

In Depth Appearance:

Long wavy hair (dark brown to black) worn mostly loose or in a braid. Pale skin with a tendency towards redness in the cheeks and frequently dark circles under her eyes. Her eyes (vivid blue) take an otherwise quite ordinary face and make it somewhat less so. She has a slender figure with bust and hips on the smaller side but she is not so thin as to appear skin and bone. She is 5'9 in height and is a healthy weight for her height. She has no scars, tattoos or birthmarks.

Likes:

The outdoors, running, drawing, Food, Brain puzzles

Dislikes:

Deceit, Being cooped up, Arrogance, Criticism, Failure

Personality:

♦ Direct ♦ Passionate ♦ Sarcastic ♦ Distant

Unsurprisingly Kayla is direct when she speaks, pulling no punches and saying it how it is, having been raised to be so in Candor. She doesn't see a problem with this and often struggles to understand why others around her are not the same. Though she doesn't lie outright lie she has become very good at evasion. She will usually either make a sarcastic comment and avoid the question or she will deflect it back at you. She's not anti social as such, being more than happy to talk to others, but she does so whilst ensuring she gives away as little as possible about herself.

She has intense emotions, whether it be anger or love etc, she feels things passionately and is always struggling to reign in this side of her nature. She doesn't trust easily and though she is often well liked for her sarcastic humour she has few close friends. The ones she has she trusts implicitly but if any broke her trust they would not get it back. She is quite lonely and wishes she had a closer family, or friends but has spent so long keeping everyone at a distance that she doesn't know how to open up anymore. She has a deep need to succeed and will push herself to the brink to do so. She takes rejection or losing very badly and sees it as her weakness for not succeeding.

History:

Kayla was born into Candor faction to David and Anna Mackenzie, her father was a prominent figure in their faction and as such had high expectations of his daughter. Her mother was a quiet woman who preferred not to be noticed whenever possible, this is due to Kayla's father. Throughout her life he has been a looming, overwhelming presence in her life, his harsh discipline and unreasonable expectations ruling her life. An extremely controlling man, he had his wife cowed, and constantly sought to mold his daughter into what he saw as the perfect child of a Mackenzie man. This included trying to make Kayla lose her passionate nature and become more cool and collected, as well as stamp out anything he saw as flawed. Kayla grew up in an environment of constant criticism, demands and abuse(verbal) taking the brunt of his frustrations at not having any more children (particularly a son) to succeed where Kayla had failed.

Though she does not specifically know she is Divergent, she knows she is different and understands this is why she struggles to fit into the mold of Candor. She has tried for years to be the same as everyone else but there has always been something off... She imagines being in Erudite and finds what they do fascinating, she admires Amity's gentle ways and finds Dauntless exciting. Kayla doesn't know where she is meant to be or where she can fit in but all she knows is that she is determined to get away from her father. She is terrified that if she doesn't then she will become like her mother. A once vibrant woman whose sparkle has been worn away.

[Sugar and Spite]

Raven Ryan Regan

"I always knew that I was stubborn. I just never realized that stubbornness was another word for determination"

Name: Raven Ryan Regan

Nickname: Trip.

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Pansexual

Original Faction: Erudite.

Test Results: Inconclusive.

Faction Chosen: Dauntless.

In Depth Appearance: With strikingly dark hair and pale skin, Raven stands at a total of 5 foot, 6 1/2 inches. Full lips and thick lashes, as well as eyebrows, make for an interesting appearance as well. Trip prefers to wear as much dark colors as possible, contrasting with the pale skin of her body. Mascara, eyeliner and gray or silver eyeshadow decorate her face on a daily basis. With a bright smile and dark Hazel eyes, the girl would appear to be the most kind person imaginable. Side Note: A large birth mark runs from her waist to the underside of her arm.

Likes: Books, being a Erudite, that's natural, really.
Sweets- Trip is a Junk-food junkie.
Sports- Trip, despite striving for knowledge, is very athletic and loves to run, as well as an adrenaline rush.
Pranks- Trip will be the one to plan out a elaborate prank, then have a good laugh after it happens.
People- Trip is a people person, usually seen talking or performing some other social action.

Dislikes: Amity- She feels that they are to peaceful. Where is the fun in being overly peaceful?
Stupidity- No question is a dumb question? Please. There is a difference between curiosity and stupidity.
Stuck-up people- There is people who have pride, and that is not a problem to her, though when it comes unbearable and certain people have their noses in the air, that's her breaking point.
Bullies- People do things their way, and have their own beliefs. The way Trip see's it, who are you to judge anyone when you, yourself is not perfect?
Betrayal- Trip trusted you with something, don't go messing that up. If you do, you're pretty much dead to her.

Personality: Raven (Trip) is the type of girl that is social, supper stubborn and athletic. With a perfect body shape, the girl would be one of the ones that is said to take a toll on anyones self esteem by just walking in the room. However, Trip is not one of the stuck-up types. Helping everyone with everything, the girl is very kind, really unless you offend something dear to her or there is a debate on which she will participate. Be prepared to hear lots of random facts spewing from her mouth.

History: Born to Trillian and Eliza Regan. A some-what happy family, Trillian hid the fact that he was a alcoholic behind closed doors. Everyday he would shout and throw things across the room, scaring the family's only child half to death. At the time that she was ten, Trip began house-hold chores. If these were not done, her father would beat her. Pretty over extensive measures, if you ask her. Eliza would say nothing, as she feared for herself and herself only. Almost everyday, Raven would manage to get the chores done, but somehow still make her father angry. At the age of 14, the girl had had enough. Her father came home drinking once more, just as always, the house clean.

"You disgust me," Trillian would say in her direction, his voice full of hate.
With a confused look, Trip would ask: "But why, father? I'm your child. I make good grades in school, prove my worth to everyday and yet you still come home and... do these things." Her fists were balled at her sides, her nails creating marks into the palm on her hands.
"Do not talk to your father like that, Raven."
"Mother....," Trip would say through clenched teeth. "This is no time for your self centered acts'." Her father would come towards her, with fist's of his own. Side stepping, her father would stumble, falling onto the floor in his drunken state. "No more. Not today, not another day for as long as I live in this house, will you ever beat me again, Trillian," she said, her voice shaking.
The man laughed. "And what would you do? A helpless little girl?"
"I would expose you. To the government, the officials, your friends, co-workers, everyone. Try me."

Her voice was convincing enough this time so it seemed. The look on her father's face changed. "Go to your room, Raven."

Raven did as told.

Her 16th birthday getting the test results Inconclusive a few day's before, she would choose Dauntless.

[Silent Whispers]

Okay. So since we have two female Divergents, I'll makes mines a male and I am not accepting anymore Divergent characters.

[Sugar and Spite]

@HushedWhispers

Would you like me to move Trip over to the official characters?

[Silent Whispers]

@HaleyTheRandom
I am on my phone so I really couldn't see much other than they were Divergents. I'll let you know shortly though. :)

[Sugar and Spite]

@HushedWhispers

Oh, I'm sorry xD I didn't mean to rush or anything, I was just double checking.

[CLIW]

Edit: Scrapping character and making a male. w00t

[Silent Whispers]

@HaleyTheRandom
No, no. I knew you wasn't rushing me. It's all good. ^_^

@CLIW
Yay! Finally, male. Haha. Wewt!

[Silent Whispers]

@Virani@HaleyTheRandom
Both of your girl's characters are accepted. You may move them to the Character Tab.

I'll get to making my characters tomorrow and hopefully have them tomorrow, as well.

[CLIW]

I'm almost done, but stuck on a nickname!

[Sugar and Spite]

I'm almost done, but stuck on a nickname!

@CLIW

What's the guys name?

[CLIW]

Rudy. :'D

[Sugar and Spite]

Rudy. :'D

@CLIW

Hm... Rud? Rudster?