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Fixed that for you ;)


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Alright, y'all... We are SOOOOO close. Sort of. xD Just waiting for two people on characters.

@ActRaiserTheReturned and @Dark Light, are you two close?
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@WhiteStar19 I have submitted both characters, let me know what needs to be changed. Thanks.
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NEvermind. I withdraw.
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@Dark Light
Okay, I'll start with the easy one first. You need two more fears for Levi.

Now, you kind of made both your character's a little bit OP. The Anti-Matter, the Shadow Pocket and the bring monsters to life a.k.a practically all of the darkness power you described? I'm going to have to veto all of that. Also, the Shadow Step. I was about an inch away from vetoing that also, but I'm willing to keep it if he doesn't go to another dimension. I would like to keep it one dimension please. If he just hides in the shadows and blends in better there, that would be fine.

Now onto Lilly. She is fine minus two things: I'm a little apprehensive on the escape and sustain versions of her powers. Honestly, one or the other. That's what I'm going to say to that.

Besides that, everything else looks fine. I don't mean to be harsh, but I want to give everyone a fighting chance you know?
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Heyyy! You almost done? :)
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Not quite there yet, sorry. I've run into a few blocks, and I'm trying to break through them. I'm not entirely sure how long I'll be. I hope this isn't an inconvenience, but I understand if it is. I'll hopefully get it done within the next day or so.
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@GreenGrenade
Nope, you're fine!
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@WhiteStar19 Done, Harsh or not your the boss.
Sorry didn't realise 3 fears was a thing.

Please let me know if there is anything else you would like me to change or add.
Had no intention or interest in being OP or even winning tho.
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@WhiteStar19 Just a quick question for my bio. Would the Council be the kind of government that publicly executes people for treason? The way I imagine it, Gareth's mother was framed and killed for plotting against them. Is that plausible?
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@Dark Light
Great! It's five in the morning here and I'm awake cuz I'm dropping off my exchange student but I'll check it sometime today.

@GreenGrenade
That's plausible, but it is mainly people who try to protect Leviathans or become increasingly violent over the years who are executed. No fighting thing taken to an extreme punishment. xD
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@WhiteStar19 I've added some more to my powers if it's allowed, if not I'm fine.
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@Stein
No turning yourself invisible,sorry. I'm trying to avoid that as much as possible.

The seeing wavelengths is fine though.
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@Stein
No turning yourself invisible,sorry. I'm trying to avoid that as much as possible.

The seeing wavelengths is fine though.


Awesome sauce!

Honestly, the invisibility was just more of a "Meh, can I do this? If I can, why not?"
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What's the word, bird?
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Just gotta touch up the bio and finish the personality section, and I'll be good. I'm out for most of the day, but hopefully I'll have it done before tonight. Sorry for the delay :P.
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@GreenGrenade@Stein@Dark Light@Lord Wraith@fij707@Hillan@Mach2@hoppiholla391@Virani

Alright, so we will be starting some time within the next three days. Grenade is almost done with their character and Mach and I are almost done with the first IC post. Your first post should be your reaction should the Choosing and being lead onto the train and heading toward the Training Facility. Collabs are recommended since other people from your Sector are on the same train and going through the same thing. Just be thinking about this stuff. :)
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Ugh collabs :P
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@WhiteStar19 Just wondering how you were going to handle the combat. Particularly since our chars are actively trying to kill each other?

Also I'm up for collabs though currently on my own from sector eight!
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