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Is it the name, the writing, or something else that makes you think, I am female?


No self respecting man would call themselves "BurningDaisies"! (Well, this is you we're talking about....)

Mind you, you can use whatever pronoun suits your fancy, but I was just curious.


Good, I'll go on tumblr and find the stupidest pronouns I can find!




I edited the power a bit :). Let me know your thoughts.


You might want to put the weaknesses to their forms in - you know - the weakness section. lol

Also, anyone want to work on some pre-established relationships :)?


Well, Alice can know Jen, they both have interests in gaming and shizz. Meifeng could lead to some interesting conversations because she wants to become a NEST Agent, and how her mother is with NEST. She could know Trevor, and my new character, Cindy (When I put her up).




@Zombiedude101 Both characters seem fine to me but....

BLACK PEOPLE DON'T HAVE BLUE EYES

ONLY WHITE PEOPLE REALLY HAVE BLUE/GREEN EYES

That is all.




Now, since there isn't really a lot going on in the ball, I think I'm going to end it soon and just kick freemode into motion, and start building up towards the main plots!
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@UrbanEvolution @Mr Allen JGod dammit, ignore that error. It was late when I wrote the description section and I kinda mixed up the character with someone else I wrote a while back, only just noticed. Fixed.
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@UrbanEvolution @Mr Allen JGod dammit, ignore that error. It was late when I wrote the description section and I kinda mixed up the character with someone else I wrote a while back, only just noticed. Fixed.


Alright then, you have quelled my growing rage. They are accepted.
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The one thing I'd like to point out about her character are the potential psychological effects that should be occurring as times goes on. Since the issue is still fairly fresh it's passable that she hasn't suffered from anything yet- but as timeskips occur and as she settles into her new life as a disabled citizen I'd personally like to see that disaster be played with respect in her character. Allen and I were talking and we have no problem with her being in such a calamity- so long as that affects her.

Being shot several times is kinda really bad, but knowing her friends were shot and killed (even if she did or didn't see it, since it's not really stated if she witnessed their deaths or not) should be playing some role in her person. Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (cant stop remembering the night in her dreams), depression (It's my fault they died, I came up with the plan to go to the fair that night. It's my fault it's my fault it's my fault...), general trust issues with people (what if they pull a gun on me? Do I want to run the risk of losing them?), and crowd discomfort (Because she was in a crowded place during the shooting).

A real person would probably have ALL of these things. I'm not a GM, so my word isn't law, but I'd really like to see her character's issues be played with more respect as time goes on- because while it might not be eating her now (two weeks after) it SHOULD be at the one month mark.

Just some food for thought.


That is indeed part of the plan Urban, it's going to be an interesting role to play because of the nature of the trauma, but it will be a challenge, and I always enjoy that, I think right now she's more likely in a state of shock, but it is something that I intend to play more into the RP, as time moves on she will have to learn to come to terms with what happened. Hopefully I can do it justice :)
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Yeeeeees

Ignore the head pimp, and pay attention to that pseudo-pimp's rambling.
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Yeeeeees

Ignore the head pimp, and pay attention to that pseudo-pimp's rambling.


I think being able to make people think you're a pimp without actually being one might be more impressive than actually being one.

Like shit man, thanks.
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God damn it.
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But yeah, @Nosuchthing, just make those few small edits I mentioned, and Alice is accepted.
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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Mind swap allowed? :) @Mr Allen J
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Mind swap allowed? :) @Mr Allen J


Depends on what you mean by mind swapping.
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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@Mr Allen J, the ability to swap bodies/minds with the target, stealing their body for a time.
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@Mr Allen J, the ability to swap bodies/minds with the target, stealing their body for a time.


Then no.
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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@Mr Allen J, I'm creating a prone to die pseudo-serial killer guy who's in the fear business. Should I create a CS for any possible "pawns" in his game?
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@UrbanEvolution @Mr Allen JGod dammit, ignore that error. It was late when I wrote the description section and I kinda mixed up the character with someone else I wrote a while back, only just noticed. Fixed.


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I have the timeskip post ready, it's not the best, but it gets everyone to the next day. Is everyone cool with me posting it?
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@Mr Allen J I'm okay, as long as I can finally have reason to have Marcus show up somewhere so I can post.
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Timeskip is cool, my character is still in the works but I don't think she would have a very good reason to show up to this gala. :P
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Holding off on posting it just a bit.

Gonna add a pov or two to my post.
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Anyways, here's Cindy's sheet:

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Oh, I just noticed something, @Nosuchthing, you didn't specific which neighborhood that Alice lives in.
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