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In the spirit of the "Advanced Section", we stress quality over quantity. If you get too heavy into dialogue and you're in danger of dropping low on the paragraph count, just do a collab with someone. Makes reading the conversation a helluva lot smoother.
It's also worth noting that adding fluff -- especially fluff with no real substance -- to pad your paragraph count to 2 or 3 is really unnecessary. It's like adding gristle to a perfectly fine, lean steak.
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I'll come up with more believable crap for his biography later. My brain's not working properly right now, plus no inspiration.
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<Snipped quote by Mr Allen J>

I could be overstepping/wrong here, but isn't the bare minimum for Advanced somewhere along the lines of 2-3 paragraphs? A minimum of one seems to be a bit too casual for advanced, no?

In any case, expect my sheet to be up sometime late-Saturday, early to mid-Sunday.


"Generally two paragraphs, but usually longer."

Like Daisies said, Quality over Quantity. And I'm not going to be anal over a few paragraphs, because, to me, a short post consisting of three paragraphs is preeeetty much the same as one paragraph length-wise. Dunno. And sometimes people won't really have enough material/energy to make a super long post, and I'm fine with a quick one to bridge the jap.




@Wade Wilson I'm not sure how you addressed my claims of Shadow powers not making sense (Since, unlike other elements, it's literally nothing). Personally, I'd use Shadow powers for stealth abilities, and whatnot (Like making the area darker, and such and such).

Tendrils - One of his combat powers, Colton's shadow tendrils allow him to disarm his opponents, strangle them, or more.


"Or more" in this situation means tentacle porn.




@DJAtomika Now, I'm not trying to force everyone to make their sheets hyper detailed like mine (Nor am I sure that you're even finished), but Marcus's sheet seems a little barebones for the advance section, don't you think? His appearance could use more about his body than his build and hair. What about his gait? Or his facial features? Other distinguishing features?

He does seem to be pretty one-note in the personality area, too. He's pretty much just a nice guy troubled by his brother's death? Don't you think there could be a little more to him? What about his morality? Or anything he fears? Or how he acts when alone? Or how he acts when angry? And so on...

Same with the power section. You just said "Bone manipulation, enhanced cellular regeneration, dulled pain". That doesn't say a lot about what he can do, and it can go a lot of different ways. Can he shape his bones, and violently make them burst out of his skin to turn them into weapons? Or does he telekinetically control his own bones? See? It can go a lot of different way. And I want to know about the regeneration. Is he like wolverine, or does he have just enough regeneration to survive, and bounce back from his wounds?
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@Wade Wilson I'm not sure how you addressed my claims of Shadow powers not making sense (Since, unlike other elements, it's literally nothing). Personally, I'd use Shadow powers for stealth abilities, and whatnot (Like making the area darker, and such and such).

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"Or more" in this situation means tentacle porn.


1. Yeah, sorry if I'm being too rushed with it or whatever, my brain's trying to develop and juggle multiple things going on at once. I'll keep tweaking it, and thanks for the ideas :P

2. Apart from that. XD
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Also, I'm kinda paranoid of being too OP n shit, so that's also a factor.
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@UrbanEvolution You couldn't jump back in if you tried.

You're just not cool enough.


You wanna bet, motherfucker?

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<Snipped quote by Mr Allen J>

1. Yeah, sorry if I'm being too rushed with it or whatever, my brain's trying to develop and juggle multiple things going on at once. I'll keep tweaking it, and thanks for the ideas :P

2. Apart from that. XD


Also, I'm kinda paranoid of being too OP n shit, so that's also a factor.


Thank you for understanding. Most people just try arguing, or just ragequitting, than making tweaks to it.

You can discuss any ideas with me over PMs.

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You wanna bet, motherfucker?



Fucking accepted.
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Whatado. I'm stuck working on a farm in Maine without a computer, but in like, five days my phone should arrive in the mail so I'll be able to write tiny shitty posts with my thumbs. Here's Mark.

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Mark was also born with wings.


Is that a heromachine character I see? Is that actually? *faints*
I thought I was the only one
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@DeadBeatWalking Just remove the part about the suit being "entirely" bulletproof like I said before, and we're golden, baby.
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Shit. I forgot to edit that before I left, lemme patch that up right now. Glad Mark checks out, I'm sure we'll all have some good old babysnatchin' fun.
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@DeadBeatWalking

How does one glide with your wings being vertical.

Do you mean fall?
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@DeadBeatWalking

Do you mean fall?


... with style.
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@Zombiedude101 No relation section updates, either?

Speaking of which, I made some changes to my character's relationships. If you want your characters to have pre-existing relations with mine, then gimme a shout.
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@Zombiedude101 No relation section updates, either?


God! You're so needy... This is why things didn't work out between us. =/
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It's never me who's the problem.

It's always you fuckers.

ya'll need to know to bend forward for me.
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It's always like this with you. Not even the decency to use lube.

Bastard.
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Das yo fault, tho.
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That's the secret to the loving relationship Allen and I have.

We're both assholes.
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