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Phew! Finished, I hope it's acceptable.

On a separate note I was wondering if anyone wanted to already know my character just to make things a little easier (if she gets accepted ofc)

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Phew! Finished, I hope it's acceptable.

On a separate note I was wondering if anyone wanted to already know my character just to make things a little easier (if she gets accepted ofc)



I'd like to know her :P
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So, assuming you guys are still accepting, I think I would like to join Ya'll would have to give me some time to throw a character together, but I like the premise and I do think I'd quite like to join up.
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Weaknesses/Drawbacks:
Cora has no added toughness to prevent being stabbed/shot etc and her skin is as fragile as any other, if you can catch or trap her then she would be all but defenceless.
Cora's body burns through calories, at a very fast pace, to power what she does and she has an almost constant need to eat and regain the burned fuel. If she doesn't she begins feeling weak and dizzy and will eventually pass out.


These aren't really much of weaknesses. I don't think starving her would be an effective strategy.

Other than that, the character is pretty solid.
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So, assuming you guys are still accepting, I think I would like to join Ya'll would have to give me some time to throw a character together, but I like the premise and I do think I'd quite like to join up.


Sure.
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@Mr Allen J Fair do's. I'll take away her strength making her physically fragile, would that be okay? Also do you have any other suggestions for extra weaknesses as Im having a brain blank lol
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It is okay for a character to be a part of one of the pre-established gangs, or nah?
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@Mr Allen J Fair do's. I'll take away her strength making her physically fragile, would that be okay? Also do you have any other suggestions for extra weaknesses as Im having a brain blank lol


Nerfing her strength would be a start. I'll have to come up with some weaknesses. You could say that her bestial instincts interfere with her social skills.
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It is okay for a character to be a part of one of the pre-established gangs, or nah?


Yeah, your character can be one of the gang members.
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@Mr Allen J I was toying with making her behaviour more feline than human. So bestial instincts affecting her social skills would work.

Adding that and physically weak, plus the others already there, is that enough?
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@Mr Allen J I was toying with making her behaviour more feline than human. So bestial instincts affecting her social skills would work.

Adding that and physically weak, plus the others already there, is that enough?


Yeah sure. The power isn't overtly strong, I was just pointing out that those weren't really weaknesses.
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Yeah that's cool, I'll edit the sheet now.
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Alright, keep me posted.

A reminder:

Anyways, I still heavily recommend you guys make second characters if you have any ideas. The more the merrier.


I'll be making another character. Just spit balling ideas in my head.
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Aaaannnd edited
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Aaaannnd edited


I think you should cut out the two things I mentioned (Because the first one sounds silly, and the second would be better off as a limit).
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Ah I misunderstood, ok on it.
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Ok, got rid of the first one and put the other one under limits.

I appreciate the feedback and help tweaking my sheet btw.
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@Virani Cora is accepted. You may place her in the character tab.
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Awesome thanks

@Wade Wilson I'm happy for Cora to already know you. Any ideas how they know each other?
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Awesome thanks

@Wade Wilson I'm happy for Cora to already know you. Any ideas how they know each other?


Well, while looking for a place to call home, Colton checked out Eastover Woods as an option. He could've bumped into her and been his awkward self there. We could even RP it out via PM in order to get the full satisfaction of their opinions on each other :P
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