[OOC] The First Strike (Ebonfort)

[Twhirtley]

@Blizz

[Blizz]

@Twhirtley*clap**clap**clap*

Nice intro

Nice name

(I'm still gonna use silken wolf as an alias if that's okay)

[Twhirtley]

Dude, you gotta put more effort into your posts. 3 sentences is wholly unacceptable, this is casual/high casual, 2 proper paragraphs at minimum. Proper grammar, formatting as well, and please don't tag in an IC post, this isn't Free. You have to put effort forward, so please try harder and take this seriously.

[Blizz]

@TwhirtleyTag as in this thing? <<<@Twhirtley>>>

[Twhirtley]

yes

[Blizz]

@Twhirtleyoka-hold on a mo-oh wait, never mind

As for the length(heuheuheu) of the posts, sorry ;n;

[Twhirtley]

Maybe you misunderstood. I would like you to improve your post, fix it to be better, add more content, and until this is completed, I won't be replying.

[Blizz]

@Twhirtleykay but can I ask you something?

[Blizz]

@TwhirtleyOkay, how's that?

[Twhirtley]

Alright I can do a bit more with that. If it helps, one of the ways I try and do my replies to people is 1 Paragraph your character reacting to what is written, and a 2nd Paragraph, your character doing something new to the story, moving it forward.

[Blizz]

@Twhirtleyok, that's helpful, thanks T.

[Blizz]

@Twhirtleyoh sweet love of heck ._.

[Twhirtley]

I'm marking this as Inactive. Should you decide to continue, post in it, and send me a PM, as I'm unsubscribing it now.

[Blizz]

I assume that no matter where I hide ill be found considering stormgaze couldn't hide in anything but snow :P

[Twhirtley]

Foraging:50
Stealth:20
Camouflage:50

Stealth and Camouflage are the skills your character has, so I wouldn't count it out.

[Blizz]

mememaker.net/static/images/memes/4398..

I can meme

[Twhirtley]

Once again, I'm marking this inactive and unsubscribing. If you wish to return, you know the drill.