I wanna post for Emily, but not sure if I sure how many people should post after us before we can post again. Since other people haven't done their first posts yet...
Two posts really.
I am better enough to get along in life, so I'll be catching up to everything
Needs more weaknesses, in magic especially as well as personality wise. The negatives should always be the same amount or more than the positives (that's just my general rule to keep things balanced) also the personality needs more flaws. And I need more depth in the biography. I don't think that wizards go to University and I don't think that it translates to muggle schools either. So, I would find another reason for them to go to Salem: such as his mom taking a job in America and so they have to move.