[OOC] Imperfect World (New Players Always Welcome!)

[Temporary]

I would get a post up, but there is something I need @Vulkan to confirm before I can.

[Jeep Wrangler]

@Vulkan I'll get a post up late sunday, after the rememberance Sunday March and stuff....veeeery formal. :3

[AtlasRedfox]

Just edited and added a little more to my last post. Hope you guys don't mind.

[Hillbilly12]

I may post something later today since I haven't posted recently. Its been difficult figuring out what I should post.

[Vulkan]

@Hillbilly12

Feel free to ask for help.

[Jeep Wrangler]

@Vulkan I'll be posting tomorrow if I'm lucky, Remembrance is getting large...

[Error]

Name: Doctor Charles Richardson, CO of Seventeenth Skylarks, 1174 - Suspected MIA

Age: Time of death 34, would be 38 this year
Faction (if any): New Order Affiliated

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Nationality: British

Personality: A calm and collective man, according to records he has never killed a man in cold blood. Often taking the time out of his days off to visit the family's to kill them to. A man without a conscience or any rational feeling. Despite his major personality flaws he is seen as a shy and self centred man often only talking to people outside his unit or army when he is shot up on stimulants, when he is talking you can see he is filled with a glee as he talks about his perfect future world. Do not engage alone, believed to be extremely dangerous.

Equipment: A range of drugs and syringes that are hidden on his person, a pre world Webley revolver, Assault Rifle, Medium armour covering all but his face, for that there is a blast proof glass that can project the orders. Mini Plasma Cutter

Skills: Medicine, Commanding, Hand to Hand Combat, Shooting, Peak physical phytness, Poker Player, Luck master.
History: Born in the poorer areas, he had a very hard life. He was born and conceived in the same alley way between a brothel and a Church. From a young age he was alone, often as his mother was to drunk to know he exsisted. He was taken into gangs when he could walk and talk where he learnt the more important skills any solider needs, your who you look out for and that brutality works 100% of the time. He would take part in savage muggings and beatings to make him a better fighter. Despite all this he still attended school and did quite well, his "Friends" diddnt like this, not one bit. So as quick as he made them they turned on him, tried to beat him to death in the same alley way, well, they had taught him far too well, be protected himself and fought his way out of that alley way. Attending school full time he decided to leave and study surgery at medschool alone with Biological and Chemical Warefare. When he left he immediately joined the army where he was snatched up as a Skylark, the only airborne unit not dead. From there he swiftly became a feared and hated solider, his name carrying weight, despite the fact he is meant to be dead.
Other:

[Vulkan]

@Error

Looks decent enough. However, London hasn't existed for the last few hundred years, so might want to amend that.

[Error]

@Vulkan Then we shall say the ruins!

[Error]

Name: Sargent Victor Valistove, 17th Skylarks

Age: 25
Faction (if any): New Order

Gender: Male

Appearance

Nationality: Russian

Personality: A slow foot slogged, he is no where near legend, the only thing people know about him is that he can carry weapons far and is strong. What else would you care about? He is not very smart, takes orders easily but also knows his place and loyalty. A friend through and through, can mock him and he wont know.

Equipment: Heavy Pistole, Heavy Armour, Mini-gun, Bowie Knife, Extra Armours and ammo, Tons of grenades

Skills: Suppression, Heavy lifting, Crushing skulls, Drinking, Charging, Destroying walls
History: Born in a small farm outside the city, he was a boy to a wheat farm. Given how they diddnt have that many friends to help he was forced from a young age to buck the barley sacks into the cart. However, one day he fell off the cart and banged his head, given his family's poor standards and location they never sent him to hospital and instead let him because slow. Instead of letting this deter him he pushed on and grew up his body and muscle tone through training and work. When he was old enough to enlist he left his parents and joined the army, ready to fight whatever war they give him with ruthless and stupid moved.
Other:

[Temporary]

I really hope Victor is allowed, because that gives Nick someone to order around. He can be the Nickel Matrixs' personal hulk ^_^

Also, I am gonna enter sleepwrite mode. I'm tired, so it's the perfect time to write an IC post xD

[Error]

@Vocab HAHAHA NOPE! I am going to have the Doctor boss him around. He would split you in two

[Temporary]

@Vocab HAHAHA NOPE! I am going to have the Doctor boss him around. He would split you in two

@Error

Split Nick in 2, you say? Let's weigh the guys options. He can either obey his commanding officer (since that is about Nicks rank) or be executed on the spot of insolence. Which is the more appealing option? ^_^

[Vulkan]

@Error

No, sorry. The last country is all that is left, composed of a single huge city and a hundred or so of small settlements surrounding it. No one has lived outside it for a VERY long time. And no one knows exactly where it is.

And laser pistols and miniguns? I can just about grasp the latter, but the first one is a no no.

The armor looks a little advanced too, so im gonna say no to that. Maybe replace it with a heavy blast suit/juggernaut suit etc? Im happy with one of those.

You might be able to get nicer toys later, but not now. A little extra detail here and there would be nice for both bios, but i can live without that.

@Vocab

For the record, executions are used in the new order military, but only if the offending soldier resists arrest by their commanding officer in some way.

[Hillbilly12]

@Hillbilly12

Feel free to ask for help.

@Vulkan

Its not a huge problem just something I have to think about a little. Right now not much more going on past character interaction and discussing the possibility of that night being a terrible night to party lol.

[Error]

@VulkanThe armour isn't that advanced for the Russian. It is just like a more sci fi looking juggernaut suit, heavy and can stop lots of bullets. No special metal that deflects bullets. I've added to the bios so they are more focused on the city but you never really told us where in the world the city was... The laser pistole was a silly idea anywho

[Temporary]

When I said execution, I meant shoot the guy point blank in the street for disobeying orders. That is the kind of person Nick is, even if he hasn't actually done that to anyone before.

[Jeep Wrangler]

@ErrorJust a heads up...it is 'Sergeant' not 'Sargent'. I also think that you should at least downgrade the armour. Juggernaut Suits are designed for bomb disposal, not bullet protection. Especially how oddly advanced Marcus' is for the time period, which I agree can be ludicrously annoying for others.

@VulkanSorry I failed to post today, my family issues got the best of me, as well as being robbed of my Wallet and Debit Card. : /

[Error]

@LetMeDoStuffReally dont see what the whole problem is. Its armour, sci fi looking armour. Its not OP. You just think it is becase thats what you see. Its just heavy armour. Please, if you have critisism about it then make them logical not just "I dont like the armour". I am not saying it fired rockets out its shoulders, just that it can stop bullets. He is a tanker of bullets and for a sci fi rp I thought that would be fine.

[Temporary]

Your problem lies in the fact that it can stop bullets. There is nothing, not even with the technology they scrounged up after the 6 minute war, that can entirely stop a bullet. Sure enough, it can force it to deflect away, but sooner or later a bullet will pierce the armour. I am saying this because the technology in this RP is of about equal to our current technology, if a bit more advanced, since the war decimated it all. With current tech, we have bulletproof vests, which in of themselves are not "bulletproof" but can instead take multiple shots before giving in.

In conclusion, just write out a list of strengths and weaknesses on your CS so it is easier to get a grasp on ^_^