I keep meaning to tell you, cussing doesn't bother me as long as it is tactful. So long as it's not every other word, I'm fine. :)
Your post was pretty long too, you should totally be proud of it! I know I got carried away with my last, but I was trying to set up the twist. Oh, and I think I have a feeling I know what twist you're setting up, and I like it! :D I think this meeting will be much more intense. Though I'm not sure yet how Avina will respond. I see two different ways for her to approach him, I just have to figure out which one is more like her. :) it will be fun though!!
She probably will be dominate in the relationship. Lol. It's how she is used to functioning. Though I can see her showing him her soft side when they get closer, a side no one has seen in 400 years. :)
I think going in with no solid plot has made this rp so interesting! Never knowing where it is really headed, not even a tunnel vision of what's to come. It makes it so unpredictable and fun. :)
By the way, I'll start working on a reply after me class. :D