[OOC] Stand Proud - Pleasant Valley Sunday

[Captain Jenno]

Man, you are really not picking up my hint to leave, here.

[The_written_John]

Man, you are really not picking up my hint to leave, here.

@Captain Jenno

Actually i did, i just wanted to play around a bit, il see you around darling! :p

[Captain Jenno]

Ah, good. Anymore posts and I'd have gotten the staff involved.

To everyone else: I'm sorry if I've set a bad precedent through this but my ire came from the fact their own misunderstanding were directed to me as accusations as opposed to questions. But now kindergarten's over with, I'll ask for the sake of clarity: is there anything about this roleplay, the plot and the setting you guys don't get? Don't be afraid to ask questions, I'm perfectly happy to answer them, especially if it means avoiding that scenario again.

[Mr_pink]

Don't worry about it, I've seen john around before and he always does this self centered arrogant thing. No fault of yours what happened. I'll change my app and answer your question later, just heading off right now.

[Ben]

I'll post a CS later today if you're still accepting, and can I just say, that was a very satisfying read.

[Mr_pink]

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Loving the concept of Tied Up in Nottz, but I'm worried your stats and your power are conflicting a little. If you want those chains to be "close to unbreakable", you definitely need a higher durability. How powerful are these chains, by the by?

@Captain Jenno

Sorry, I suppose I worded it strangely. What I mean is that as well as the energy chains he can also manipulate any chain or rope-like object in the near vicinity. I'd say the chains are strong enough for a B or higher stand to break but with some difficulty. I've upgraded the durability to a B, will have the app finished later if possible.

[Card Captor]

Would have had this up earlier, but I lost internet.

Name: Lewis "Maz" Mazzaferri
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Brief description of appearance: Lewis has a mop of blond hair on his head. He has a slim build, and a fair complexion. His green eyes lie behind a pair of glasses.

Or...if you'd rather see a picture

Personality summary: Lewis is a very soft-spoken boy. He tries to solve problems with words, although he is not afraid of resorting to force should it come to that (he does so reluctantly though). Lewis likes to see the people around him smile. As gentle as he is, one thing he can't stand is people pushing around those who can't fight back. In fact, he normally skips trying to talk things out, and goes straight for the violence.
Short biography: Lewis was born to a financially stable family, so he never had to worry about going hungry growing up. Although for some reason, his mother often looked sad, which she just brushed off whenever he asked about it. When Lewis was just 8 years old, his baby sister was killed by an intruder who broken into the house. After that, his parents began to argue a lot more. That came to an end when his mother was badly injured when she got into a car accident. Eventually, Lewis and his dad moved to Pleasant Valley, for his father's job. Lewis has no idea how he got his Stand, as it simply appeared one day, after he had gone through a really bad fever that had lasted a few days.
Dark Secret: Please, don't make me tell you.

Stand
Name: Power Of Love
Description of Appearance: Power Of Love takes the form of a pink humanoid dragon, made out entirely of newspapers.
Power: On it's own, Power Of Love has no special powers. However, once It's user comes into contact with someone that they have a strong desire to protect, it's true power will activate. Power Of Love will bind them self to this person, and defend them as an Automatic Stand. If used on a Stand User, this does not interfere with their Stand directly. Unless the other Stand has an ability that is hindered by Power Of Love protecting it's user. As an Automatic Stand, Power Of Love will respond only to things that will cause harm to it's charge, and will respond with an appropriate level of force. Power of Love will return to it's user when he wills it.
Stats:

Destructive Power: B
Speed: C
Range: C
Durability: B
Precision: A

[Captain Jenno]

Would have had this up earlier, but I lost internet.

Name: Lewis "Maz" Mazzaferri
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Brief description of appearance: Lewis has a mop of blond hair on his head. He has a slim build, and a fair complexion. His green eyes lie behind a pair of glasses.

Or...if you'd rather see a picture

Personality summary: Lewis is a very soft-spoken boy. He tries to solve problems with words, although he is not afraid of resorting to force should it come to that (he does so reluctantly though). Lewis likes to see the people around him smile. As gentle as he is, one thing he can't stand is people pushing around those who can't fight back. In fact, he normally skips trying to talk things out, and goes straight for the violence.
Short biography: Lewis was born to a financially stable family, so he never had to worry about going hungry growing up. Although for some reason, his mother often looked sad, which she just brushed off whenever he asked about it. When Lewis was just 8 years old, his baby sister was killed by an intruder who broken into the house. After that, his parents began to argue a lot more. That came to an end when his mother was badly injured when she got into a car accident. Eventually, Lewis and his dad moved to Pleasant Valley, for his father's job. Lewis has no idea how he got his Stand, as it simply appeared one day, after he had gone through a really bad fever that had lasted a few days.
Dark Secret: Please, don't make me tell you.

Stand
Name: Power Of Love
Description of Appearance: Power Of Love takes the form of a pink humanoid dragon, made out entirely of newspapers.
Power: On it's own, Power Of Love has no special powers. However, once It's user comes into contact with someone that they have a strong desire to protect, it's true power will activate. Power Of Love will bind them self to this person, and defend them as an Automatic Stand. If used on a Stand User, this does not interfere with their Stand directly. Unless the other Stand has an ability that is hindered by Power Of Love protecting it's user. As an Automatic Stand, Power Of Love will respond only to things that will cause harm to it's charge, and will respond with an appropriate level of force. Power of Love will return to it's user when he wills it.
Stats:

Destructive Power: B
Speed: B
Range: E
Durability: B
Precision: A

I took an E in Range (think King Crimson's Range) to get a B in Speed. I hope that's okay. If not, then I can change it. Also, should I PM you his dark secret now, or if he get's approved?

@Card Captor

I really like the idea of a stand that works for other people as opposed to its user! But I'm afraid you'll have to stick to the 1A, 2B, 2C system. Is speed particularly important if the stand is bound to who it's protecting? Overall I like your CS, though!

Also, feel free to send me your dark secret! But as a note for those still writing their CS', I'd prefer if your dark secret weren't "they killed a guy", given their current goal will undoubtedly require some levels of preternatural violence. If you can make killing that person seem bigger than just a wanton murder, then obviously an excuse can be made - I'd just like to see you all mix it up a l'il. It can be anything that somebody could use against them: did they hang out with a dangerous crowd? Make a powerful enemy back home, steal something from somebody who doesn't forgive or forget? Mix it up!

[Captain Jenno]

Don't worry about it, I've seen john around before and he always does this self centered arrogant thing. No fault of yours what happened. I'll change my app and answer your question later, just heading off right now.

@Mr_pink

There's a relief - and here I was worried my stand ability was to bring the worse out in people. Thanks for upgrading your durability stat! But you now have 3 out of 2 Bs. If I was to make a recommendation I might say drop Speed to C? Given once your chains have them, it's not like the speed stat will be particularly important.

Looking forwards to seeing the completed CS!

[SwordfishKnight]

Oooooh finally a jojo rp. I'ma get started on my CS soon and pop it up.

[Captain Jenno]

Great, I look forwards to it! I'm probably gonna put a cap on this group soon - we'll hopefully be starting IC by Monday.

[Fish of Oblivion]

If the cap's not up yet, I'll see about making a CS for this!

[Captain Jenno]

You're perfectly welcome to submit! But I'm gonna mark this as a closed thread, now.

[SwordfishKnight]

The worst part of this is coming up with a stand that has a relevant power to its name.

[Captain Jenno]

Eh, don't worry too hard about that. If you can do it, great. If you can't, I'm not gonna ride you on it.

[Card Captor]

The worst part of this is coming up with a stand that has a relevant power to its name.

@SwordfishKnight

Are you kidding? That part is the most fun! Just listening to a song one or two times to discover the Stand that lies within.

[SwordfishKnight]

Eh, don't worry too hard about that. If you can do it, great. If you can't, I'm not gonna ride you on it.

@Captain Jenno

I'm givin it all she's got captain!

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Are you kidding? That part is the most fun! Just listening to a song one or two times to discover the Stand that lies within.

@Card Captor

Funnily enough I think I got an idea mostly ready for the stand in between the time I posted that and now.

[Captain Jenno]

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Are you kidding? That part is the most fun! Just listening to a song one or two times to discover the Stand that lies within.

@Card Captor

Funnily enough I think I got an idea mostly ready for the stand in between the time I posted that and now.

@SwordfishKnight

The stand was in your heart the whole time!

[SwordfishKnight]

Now that I got the stand appearance and power fully fleshed out it feels nice and sound, and a tad original (I hope.) Anyhow, just need to finish up the actual character and i'm good to go.

Edit: So...uh, my laptop decided to update while I was asleep and I lost my entire cs. back to the drawing board.

[Fish of Oblivion]

Edit: So...uh, my laptop decided to update while I was asleep and I lost my entire cs. back to the drawing board.

@SwordfishKnight

Oh wow, that sucks. Any chance you might be able to recover it, or were you typing it up on Notepad/the Guild itself?