[OOC] Bleach: A New Dawn

[Expllo]

I'm using that photo already for an NPC

Just pointing that out before I read the CS.

[AbigailTenshi]

EXPLLO WE NEED YOUR D-D-D-DDDD-DEDUCING POWERS!!!

And Dokay ZaneyBaby :3

[AbigailTenshi]

O you're already here xD Good!

[Kurisa]

Expllo said
I'm using that photo already for an NPC Just pointing that out before I read the CS.

Yeah but...that NPC likely gonna die right? xDDD I mean if they wont be around long...and no one will remember them...this could slip past..if not...damn O.o he outa luck xD

[Zane620]

AbigailTenshi said
EXPLLO WE NEED YOUR D-D-D-DDDD-DEDUCING POWERS!!!And Dokay ZaneyBaby :3

Aya being all sorts of intimidattttting

[Expllo]

Kurisa said
Yeah but...that NPC likely gonna die right? xDDD I mean if they wont be around long...and no one will remember them...this could slip past..if not...damn O.o he outa luck xD

Absolutely not

'Tis apart of Hikari dickery dock's side plot of death, doom and destruction and death, yep.

[Kurisa]

Expllo said
Absolutely not 'Tis apart of Hikari dickery dock's side plot of death, doom and destruction and death, yep.

Well...sucks for him then xDDD

[Garrison]

Great.........

[Expllo]

Garrison said
I have no idea how to link my profile to a hyperlink so you can just click and go to my template so I'm copying it below so I can get help. I need someone to look at it and for one, tell me if it's alright (i know its unfinished) and the other thing is, I kinda need help. I'm really rusty and on top of that, you guys have created like 20 characters so I don't know if I'm copying anyone. For some reason it wasn't letting me put this in a spoiler because i already have a spoiler on here or something.Name: Shusuke HotokaiAppearance:Age: 185Height: 6'2Weight: 185Race: ShinigamiRank: UnseatedSpiritual Energy Color: OrangePersonality: (Would like to be done but can be done later)History: (Would like to be done but can be done later)Other: ~Zanpakuto~Zanpakuto name: HyoujinToku (Sharp Shield)Type: Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Spirit Appearance: (optional)Inner world: (optional)Sealed appearance: See my appearance above, red lace handle, rectangle tsuba, black sheath.Shikai appearance: Bankai appearance: Will add once Bankai is achieved. Shikai skills:(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)1. Has the power to temporarily neutralize the wielder's pain receptors and halt any blood loss, this doesn't actually heal the wound however. This ability allows the user to remain in combat and fight at his full potential even if wounded. Once the ability or dismissed or the zanpakuto is sealed, all the pain and blood that was withheld rushes through the user.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.Bankai skills:1.2.3.4.5.6. (Ultimate Skill)Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:SkillsZanjutsu:Kido:Hakuda:Hoho:Points gained from missions:Mission log:Points spent and skills gained:

Looks ok so far, just add how long your ability can go on for.
If it goes on for as long as he wants (Until he seals the Zanpakuto) then he's pretty much invincible aaaaaaaand we can't have that. So add a number of post for how long the ability can last, my take on it anyways.

[Garrison]

I can do that if you want but it isn't as invincible as you think, if he get's ran through say the heart, or his head is cut off, or he's cut in half, he's screwed. All the damage is real to him, he just doesn't feel it, the main purpose to keep the user focused in battle rather than flinching from the pain. He can very much die, so if he gets 100 cuts all over his body in not lethal areas like the heart and throat. He'll keep fighting like he's never been cut, think like Kenpachi Zaraki. However, those wounds can stack and eventually he'll drop even if he can't feel it. But now I gotta change my picture, I still don't know what else I'm doing, this is considerably harder than I anticipated.

[Kurisa]

Garrison said
I can do that if you want but it isn't as invincible as you think, if he get's ran through say the heart, or his head is cut off, or he's cut in half, he's screwed. All the damage is real to him, he just doesn't feel it, the main purpose to keep the user focused in battle rather than flinching from the pain. He can very much die, so if he gets 100 cuts all over his body in not lethal areas like the heart and throat. He'll keep fighting like he's never been cut, think like Kenpachi Zaraki. However, those wounds can stack and eventually he'll drop even if he can't feel it. But now I gotta change my picture, I still don't know what else I'm doing, this is considerably harder than I anticipated.

Appearances can be annoying but seriously if you can't think of loads of Shikai skills learn them through out the RP (basically create them, have em approved then add them. Allows you more time to think them up.) As for the general skills (Zanjutsu, Hakuda, Kido and Hoho) just add all the unseated level skills as that is what level your char is at and I think that really is about all that's left...History and personality are appreciated but not a necessity xD

[AbigailTenshi]

Posted as Femme and Cherry XD

[Zane620]

Poor Souta XD Known as Cherry now

[AbigailTenshi]

Sango is hard-core! She chases sharks for fun!!!!!!!!!!! Dat #BearGrillz

[AbigailTenshi]

Zane620 said
Poor Souta XD Known as Cherry now

Souta's abit of a dick so I don't feel that bad about it XD

[Garrison]

My original idea for this power was crated like a year ago and it wasn't to be used on the user but a victim. You make it so they can't feel any damage you inflict and over the course of the fight, you disable the power and all that pain rushes to them and depending on the wounds suffered, could cripple them completely. I thought making myself a more proficient fighter seemed better. I can change my picture, it's just a big inconvenience because I got attached to that one lol. But how many post's is fair for that, I don't know your scale for what merits what number of turns/posts. I'm not wanting to be OP because I know how annoying that is but I'm pretty much a child with a sharp stick at this point. I can't compete with the lowest seated member of this RP lol.

[Zane620]

AbigailTenshi said
Souta's abit of a dick so I don't feel that bad about it XD

DUN DUN

[AbigailTenshi]

Zane620 said
DUN DUN

Ignore that, read wrong o.O XD And posted as Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaangoooooooooooo!

[Expllo]

Garrison said
I can do that if you want but it isn't as invincible as you think, if he get's ran through say the heart, or his head is cut off, or he's cut in half, he's screwed. All the damage is real to him, he just doesn't feel it, the main purpose to keep the user focused in battle rather than flinching from the pain. He can very much die, so if he gets 100 cuts all over his body in not lethal areas like the heart and throat. He'll keep fighting like he's never been cut, think like Kenpachi Zaraki. However, those wounds can stack and eventually he'll drop even if he can't feel it. But now I gotta change my picture, I still don't know what else I'm doing, this is considerably harder than I anticipated.

Well Kenpachi kept fighting because the cuts actually didn't do anything to him, high Spirit Energy and all.

But I don't see how he'd drop if he couldn't feel pain dealt to him, unless an attacked actually caused him to drop. Brute force, achilles heel cut, etc.

The ability itself doesn't make him invincible, but if he could keep the ability going for as long as wants, that's what'll make him invincible because no matter how many times he's attacked he won't be hurt or weakened in the slightest unless it involved death or a body part getting chopped off (Which would be his only disadvantage in the fight). He risks nothing in a fight, there's no challenge, it's pretty much your character will enter any fight certain that he would win because I doubt you'd want to kill him off or get a body part chopped off. Which is why it's required to have a cooldown, and a duration, so we can avoid all that. What's the point of dangerous missions if you can just activate one ability the whole time that avoids him being hurt? Durations bro, they're needed.

[Zane620]

AbigailTenshi said
Ignore that, read wrong o.O XD And posted as Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaangoooooooooooo!

? what did you think it said.