Everblight said
This is all I have right now, obviously most of it has to be completed. - Name - Irako Saito - Appearance - - Age -230- Hair Colour -Black- Eye Colour - Light Brown- Race - Shinigami - Rank - Unseated - Spiritual Energy Colour - Green - Personality -- History -(TBC)- Zanpakuto name - Aobōzu (Blue Monk)- Shikai - Nagashi, Aobōzu (Sink, Blue Monk)- Shikai skills - 1 - The blade is encapsulated in water that circulates its surface at extreme speed, this makes the water violent and capable of abrasive attacks. Whats more the water on the blade can be manipulated to almost change the shape of the blade allowing Irako to adapt to different situations. 2 - The water around the blade glows and sinks into the metal. Irako fights as if normal however when he strikes and cuts his opponent water shoots out from the blade violently at an incredibly high pressure ripping and tearing apart the inside of what is cut. 3 - Irako can also point his sword towards his opponent to allow a jet of water to extend from the blade. Whipping from side to side this allows a much greater range for his attacks as the water jet sharpens and is capable of cutting what he whips. 4 - The water across the blade steams and explodes in evaporation creating a thick mist in the immediate area. Whilst in this mist Irako can control the water vapor in the most subtle way. He can create feint shapes allowing him to trick opponents, however its true ability is the manipulation of osmosis, allowing him to forcibly drain or increase the mount of water in any object that is within the mist. - Bankai -Aobōzu no Yagyō (Blue Monk of a Hundred Demons)- Bankai skills - (TBC)- Skills - Zanjutsu -HōzuriShitonegaeshiKido - Bakudo up to No.26Hado up to No. 4Hakuda - TesshōHoho - ShunpoPoints gained from missions:Mission log:Points spent and skills gained:
Um, I think it's pretty ok so far. Just a few things, as in two:
The water around the blade glows and sinks into the metal. Irako fights as if normal however when he strikes and cuts his opponent water shoots out from the blade violently at an incredibly high pressure ripping and tearing apart the inside of what is cut.
That last part I'm not sure how I feel about it.....Mostly because I'm confused by it? For example, when it happens to a blade, what happens to the blade? Is the blade damaged, or what? Same with a living opponent, does it like....Eat them from the inside out sort of thing? It may just be me over thinking it cause I'm tired as fuck right now....Not because I was fucking though <.< would never do thaaaaaaaat >.>
The water across the blade steams and explodes in evaporation creating a thick mist in the immediate area. Whilst in this mist Irako can control the water vapor in the most subtle way. He can create feint shapes allowing him to trick opponents, however its true ability is the manipulation of osmosis, allowing him to forcibly drain or increase the mount of water in any object that is within the mist.
As long as he isn't able to suck it out of beings who depend on it to survive (Not right away atleast, like super quick, like zip zip) then I'm fine with the ability.
'Tis pretty much it, so all that's left is adding Post durations and cooldowns.