[OOC] Bleach: A New Dawn

[AbigailTenshi]

Expllo said
That ain't even the CS though....

^

[Jangel13]

then why not tell me what needs to change. im using a template from a different site completely, I asked the creator of this rp and he seemed okay as far with the basic in formation

[Zane620]

Jangel13 said
then why not tell me what needs to change. im using a template from a different completely, I asked the creator of this rp and he seemed okay as far with the basic in formation

About 98% of it

[Expllo]

Jangel13 said
then why not tell me what needs to change. im using a template from a different site completely, I asked the creator of this rp and he seemed okay as far with the basic in formation

Well if Kurisa is fine with the template then I'm fine with it, I'll deduce innabit.

[AbigailTenshi]

Jangel13 said
Name: angelo OrtegaAge:18 Position in Academy: 1st yearBackground: when he was reborn into the society he thought he was cheated out of heaven thinking this was just an afterlife better then hell but only after asking around the different people they told him that the highest honor was being in the soul reaper society to save innocent people to pass on here and when he heard highest honor he wanted to do it. a man of high honor that protects the innocent, sounded like an angel to him so he smiled and when he went to be recruited they told him that his spiritual energy was something unique that they haven't see in a long timeLooks: dark brown skin with jet black short hair and jade green eyes with a slim but muscular frame with a body meant for the speed and stealth of squad 2Other: carries an gold 'angel' necklace around and will loose it if his necklace is takensealed state: double bladed spear called: Purotekutā ni kurushin power of an electrical shield as a defensive spike wall to receive the power of an attack and return it back to the enemy but if the spear doesn't move fast enough then it causes pain to the userbankai: Purotekutā-ō ni kurushin a blue handled double bladed spear with the blades as curved stiletto blades but with an ultimate armor technique that covers the user and although the user feels pain is instead turned into a euphoria and enjoys it while the pain is given to the one who attacked the user feel the pain the user would have felt

Well welcome dude ^_^

To start off with, there is already a set CS template to use that all Rper's must use. Here's the template:

Name:

Appearance:

Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by)

Height: (optional)

Weight: (optional)

Hair Colour:

Eye Colour:

Race:

Rank: (Start off unseated)

Spiritual Energy Colour:

Personality: (Would like to be done but can be done later)

History: (Would like to be done but can be done later)

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name:

Type:

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: (optional)

Spirit Appearance: (optional)

Inner world: (optional)

Sealed appearance: Either Katana or other traditional Japanese sword but can sometimes be something different...

Shikai appearance:

Bankai appearance:

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.

Bankai skills:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu:
Kido:
Hakuda:
Hoho:

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

Now just copy the template and fill in the sub-headings ^_^ Simple~

[AbigailTenshi]

Expllo said
Well if Kurisa is fine with the template then I'm fine with it, I'll deduce innabit.

No, he isn't XD He said he was going to build on the CS, he didn't say to use a different one.

[Jangel13]

Name: Angelo Ortega

Appearance:http://ts1.mm.bing.net/th?&id=HN.608051405143935195&w=300&h=300&c=0&pid=1.9&rs=0&p=0

Age:190

Height: (optional)

Weight: (optional)

Hair Colour: obsidian black

Eye Colour: jade green

Race: shinigami

Rank: unseated

Spiritual Energy Colour: green

Personality: (Would like to be done but can be done later)

History: (Would like to be done but can be done later)

Other: wears a gold angel necklace

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name:Purotekutā ni kurushin (suffering protector)

Type: defense kido type

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: suffering strengthen my resolve!" stab the sheath with the small blade

Spirit Appearance:

Inner world: graveyard with a hill overlooking all the graves with one grave and a knarred tree

Sealed appearance: http://www.chinasamuraisword.com/images/large/CunYwushidao1.jpg small blade but larger sheath

Shikai appearance: http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120905010133/finalfantasy/images/8/87/Manikin-Chaos_Blade_2.png

Bankai appearance:http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs22/i/2007/316/0/3/Low_Poly_double_bladed_sword_by_Raverunner.jpg

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1.giant spiked shield that absorbs damage and returns it, although it hurts the user if it doesn't spin enough at the point of impact (lasts 3 posts and takes 3 for cool down)
2. increase speed by 20% (lasts 3 posts then takes 3 for cool down)
3.pain resistance 30% (lasts 5 posts but takes 4 turns to cool down)
4. health buff by 20% (lasts 2 posts then needs 4 to cool down)
5.
6.
7.
8.

Bankai skills:
1.same skill as shikai but it goes through the blade itself
2. increased speed 40: lasts 5 posts and takes 3 to cool down
3. increased pain resistance 50% (lasts 6 turns takes 4 to cool down)
4.Electrical paralysis attack (only if physical resistance is below 40%) (lasts 3 turns if works and takes 6 for cool down)
5.
6. ultimate: dark blue armor forms around the user and can handle pain. whatever pain the user is meant to feel from an attack turns instead to ecstasy and instead increases defense and attack exponentially. lasts 8 posts and cant be used until next bankai summoning

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu:
Kido:
Hakuda:
Hoho:

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

[AbigailTenshi]

There ^_^ Now, build upon that CS, this is a Casual level RP remember so if you can't write longer than atleast three sentences then this level of RP isn't for you f(^_^') That's more of a Free section thing ^_^

[Jangel13]

im new but I have other rps here. I just don't know what more to put under skills, im trying to say im part of squad 2 using pain to my advantage

[DeathstrokeSW]

YORUSOI FTW!

Edit: SORRY! I'm a big Suí-Fon/Yoruichi fan

[AbigailTenshi]

Jangel13 said
im new but I have other rps here. I just don't know what more to put under skills, im trying to say im part of squad 2 using pain to my advantage

That's fine ^_^ Just take a look at the approved characters here http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/9076/posts/ooc check out the CSs to give yourself an idea of what to add in yours and where ^_^

[DeathstrokeSW]

Kaien

My 2nd character. I can edit if necessary.

Name: Kaien

Appearance:

A handsome man with close cropped black hair and dark green eyes, Kaien wears the traditional gi of Soul Reapers with a white fingerless glove that extends to his entire torso and the bridge of his nose. It leaves his left arm and shoulder bare

Age: 240.

Height: 6'2 or 187.96 centimeters

Weight: 200 pounds (90.718 kilograms)

Hair Colour: Black

Eye Colour: Green

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Unseated

Spiritual Energy Colour: Orange

Personality: With a zeal for combat and cold exterior, Kaien can be hard to get along with at first. He is cold when calm, but has a temper which results in a permanent tremor in his right hand when not in battle. However, after warming up to others, Kaien can come across as a sociable, if obsessive individual. He spends most of his time near Squad 11's barracks and wishes to join them. When in battle, Kaien is utterly still, moving only with what is required to kill his opponent, attacking with ferocity when necessary; but the ferocity of his attacks are recognized for what they really are: a release for his rage. He sees violence as the only logical response to a threat due to his kill-or-be-killed upbringing.

History: WIP

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: 影の輝き(Kage no Kagayaki) Literally "Radiance of Shadows"

Type: combat

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Imprison

Spirit Appearance:

Inner world: (optional)

Sealed appearance:

Shikai appearance: Ignore the stand and focus on the sword.
Bankai appearance: Bankai not achieved.

Shikai skills:
(Start off with no Shikai or 4 to 5 Shikai skills)
1. The blade is wrapped in shadows that take the shape of flames, allowing the blade to be instantaneously summoned from his shadow. This is purely a summoning ability and the flames are useless without Ability 3. They are however, a part of the Shikai appearance and do not dissipate until the sword is sealed.
2. Increased Strength (5 post use, Ten post cool down)
3. Through ability #1, Kaien can charge his Reiatsu into the flame-shadows and increase the striking power of his Zanpakutō . (2 post use, 3 post cool down)
4. Increased Speed(2 post use, 3 post Cooldown)

Bankai skills: Bankai not achieved

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu: Shitonegashi
Kido: Kaien scorns Kido, a result of his upbringing.

Hoho: Shunpo.

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

[Jangel13]

Is it better?

[Zane620]

Jangel13 said
Is it better?

Eh cooldown are great to have and his ultimate Bankai skill sounds ungodly op.

[Zane620]

Also joinign a squad isnt a mission you join a squad in the Ic

[Jangel13]

Forgive me for what I don't do right cause this is likely the biggest and most specific rp I've ever done

[Zane620]

Jangel13 said
Forgive me for what I don't do right cause this is likely the biggest and most specific rp I've ever done

Well first of all, I think you meant to post Shinigami in the race section. and you stilll need cool downs for your shikai moves, we can be over powered alll the time. And I still feel iffy about that ultimate Bankai move, but just my advice I aint co gm

[Jangel13]

Is their a different rule set or story for visors?

[Zane620]

Jangel13 said
Is their a different rule set or story for visors?

You pm Kurisa if you can be one.

[DeathstrokeSW]

Imma sound stupid fer a sec, but Vasto Lordes, are they a type of Arrancar or....vizored, or what?