[OOC] Bleach: A New Dawn

[DeathstrokeSW]

Smaller people are faster, true, but that's usually due to our (generally) shorter stride. I have Cerebral Palsy, or brain damage causing (in my case, moderate) bad balance. Expllo, I put the revisions you requested up there.

[Zane620]

Morningggg

[Axel]

*Appears* I am alive!!!!!

[Axel]

Zane620 said
Morningggg

*Backhands* The hell yo!! You just morning post blocked me XD

[Expllo]

I too, am a morning.

[Zane620]

Axel said
*Backhands* The hell yo!! You just morning post blocked me XD

Indeeed XD

[Axel]

Zane620 said
Indeeed XD

You should be ashamed of yourself. Morning post blockers are the most cruelest blockers ever known to man and they should be destroyed (Dafuq did I just say? Other me: Looks fine to me. Me: Oh...just making sure...)XD On the serious note, I need to start using those time-skip points on my chars so they can jump in so...yeah.

[Zane620]

Axel said
You should be ashamed of yourself. Morning post blockers are the most cruelest blockers ever known to man and they should be destroyed (Dafuq did I just say? Other me: Looks fine to me. Me: Oh...just making sure...)XD On the serious note, I need to start using those time-skip points on my chars so they can jump in so...yeah.

Oh yeah and apparently Hzumi gonna rek ya

[Axel]

Zane620 said
Oh yeah and apparently Hzumi gonna rek ya

As in who again(Please don't say Titan XD)?

[Zane620]

Axel said
As in who again(Please don't say Titan XD)?

Rinkei XD and maybe Leaf considering Hozumi don't like no one touching Aya apparently XD

[Axel]

Zane620 said
Rinkei XD and maybe Leaf considering Hozumi don't like no one touching Aya apparently XD

So you're telling me that a four year old kid is gonna wreck Rinkei? Pffft please, he's not afraid to fight to stoop down to his level and kick Hozumi's ass just for trying to get a little of his coffee XD He would go through hell and back if his Coffee depended on it XD Hozumi's gonna love leaf though, I can see him calling her "Mama 2" already XD

[Zane620]

Axel said
So you're telling me that a four year old kid is gonna wreck Rinkei? Pffft please, he's not afraid to fight to stoop down to his level and kick Hozumi's ass just for trying to get a little of his coffee XD He would go through hell and back if his Coffee depended on it XD Hozumi's gonna love leaf though, I can see him calling her "Mama 2" already XD

>.> You let that adorable boy pretend kick your ass

[Axel]

Axel said
So you're telling me that a four year old kid is gonna wreck Rinkei? Pffft please, he's not afraid to fight to stoop down to his level and kick Hozumi's ass just for trying to get a little of his coffee XD He would go through hell and back if his Coffee depended on it XD Hozumi's gonna love leaf though, I can see him calling her "Mama 2" already XD

It's going to be a big surprise once it's revealed why he would go so far for one cup of joe XD

[Zane620]

Axel said
It's going to be a big surprise once it's revealed why he would go so far for one cup of joe XD

<.< You would be up a child who simply wants to meet you? Lucky Aya don't know Bankai otherwise shed kick your ass <.<

[Axel]

Zane620 said
<.< You would be up a child who simply wants to meet you? Lucky Aya don't know Bankai otherwise shed kick your ass <.<

If it comes down to it, Rinkei most certainly would for he pities no one XD Like a wise man once said, if you know how to initiate a fight then you better be prepared to back it up. And I don't know about that last part XD

Zane620 said
>.> You let that adorable boy pretend kick your ass

He most certainly will unless it's over his coffee or....hmmm...maybe he might just see potential in him but I'll have to for decision on that(Doesn't this like contradict the first one?).

[Zane620]

Axel said
If it comes down to it, Rinkei most certainly would for he pities no one XD Like a wise man once said, if you know how to initiate a fight then you better be prepared to back it up. He most certainly will unless it's over his coffee or....hmmm...maybe he might just see potential in him but I'll have to for decision on that(Doesn't this like contradict the first one?).

<.< No it doesn't.

[DeathstrokeSW]

ROSE VERSION 2

Name: Rose Shirayuki (literally Rose of the White Snow)

Appearance:

Age: (Keep it sensible! Think of it like this. 10 Shinigami years equal 1 of our years so a 19 year old would be 190. Just what we go by) 180

Height: 6 feet, 1 inch

Weight: 154 pounds

Hair Colour: Black

Eye Colour: Green

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Unseated

Spiritual Energy Colour: Deep orange

Personality: Like Yachiru, Rose often nicknames people, and her personality is humorous, but serious when need be. She prefers to keep her hair in an orange ribbon ponytail or down, Has an obsession with the color orange and is laid back most of the time. When she was at the academy, her teachers noted on her rapid growth; but she was most often found under a tree reading Shakespeare. She enjoys literature.

When on missions, she tends to try to outhink her opponents, mostly using terror tactics.

History: Born into district 70, Rose faced hardship head on with a stubborn, headstrong outlook. This isn't to say she was happy-go-lucky, but she had her good moments and her bad. Her mother was a Shinigami stationed there, while her father was a civilian living there. When her mother's term was up, and she returned to the Seireitei, Rose stayed in the Rukongai with her dad.

Unfortunately, her father was murdered a month after her mother left, and Rose became homeless, living on the streets. She survived through thievery and violence, and it was at least five years until word that her daughter had gone missing. Worried to the point of literal pain, she set out to find her daughter, who had spent the past five years learning to be a ghost (in the tracking sense).

Rose, on the other hand, spent her time avoiding her mother, believing her mother had purposefully abandoned her in the month before her father died. Eventually she was caught by her mother and taken to live with her. She was then sent to the Academy where she excelled in Kidō.

Finally getting over her sense of abandonment, her true nature emerged; she was witty, insanely smart, and knew how to handle herself. She graduated within a year, and within 3 months, gained shikai. Once she gained shikai, however, her humor turned dry and dark. She now makes her way to the Seireitei to request a position in one of the 13 Court Guard Squads. She feels that squad two's assassination tactics don't suit every situation.

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Kubikiribōchō (首斬り包丁; Literally meaning "Decapitating Carving Knife")

Type: Fog/Mist

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Butcher,

Spirit Appearance:

Inner world:

Sealed Appearance: Sealed, the hilt is substantially longer than most others, and is 17 inches. The blade is 3 feet long and Katana style.



Shikai appearance: THE HILT IS THE SAME AS SEALED.

Bankai appearance: Bankai not achieved yet.

Shikai skills:
1. Mist generation: the Kubikiribōchō generates mist and fog, reducing visibility and allowing the user stealth and terror tactics. (3 post use, 4 post Cooldown)
2. Butchering Blade: Kubikiribōchō's blade glows with its user's Reiatsu and it unleashes a massive strike of vertical energy. (1 post use, 5 post cooldown)
3. Increased Strength by 10 percent for strike durability (4 post use, 4 post cooldown)

Skills:
Kidō:
Zanjutsu:
Hōhō:

Points log:
Mission Log
Skills learnt:

[Zane620]

Its not bad, a few things im curious about. First of all her history how old is she when she takes of thievery and violence? Depending on that answer I may or may not find a problem with it. And her first shikai skill, could you elaborate a bit more on terror tactics? Like being scary is quite simple. Does it do anything in particular?

And personally I wouldn't make everyone above 6 feet tall, but that's just me.

[DeathstrokeSW]

As in she uses the mist/fog and her voice plus her knowledge of anatomy and pressure points to systematically terrorise, and subsequently kill.

She took to thievery and violence at the relative human age of eight.

Her new height is 4'8 and a half while her new height is 73 pounds

[Zane620]

DeathstrokeSW said
As in she uses the mist/fog and her voice plus her knowledge of anatomy and pressure points to systematically terrorise, and subsequently kill. She took to thievery and violence at the relative human age of eight.Her new height is 4'8 and a half while her new height is 73 pounds

Okay that I guess could be scary to some, and are the people she is being violent toward younger than her? Or older? Cause I doubt a person around the age of 8 would be able to beat a grown ass man, and didn't have to lower it that much XD