[OOC] Bleach: A New Dawn

[Jangel13]

No, thank you for the suggestion, so your suggesting that I start my own side story. What do you mean relate to gio? What I don't know is what I'm limited to in my side story plot

[Zane620]

Jangel13 said
No, thank you for the suggestion, so your suggesting that I start my own side story. What do you mean relate to gio? What I don't know is what I'm limited to in my side story plot

As long as you arent like blowing up Soul society in it, without approval, then you are good. Like Abi for example has this past going on with Fumio about his clan.

[Expllo]

Zane620 said
As long as you arent like blowing up Soul society in it, without approval, then you are good. Like Abi for example has this past going on with Fumio about his clan.

Also no making arrancars, quinces (etc.) showing up.....Those are off limits, they can be mentioned though O.o

But maybe do something that relates to your characters past? That's what me and Abi are doing for Fumio and Hikari.
Yeah, shit like that.

[AbigailTenshi]

Jangel13 said
No, thank you for the suggestion, so your suggesting that I start my own side story. What do you mean relate to gio? What I don't know is what I'm limited to in my side story plot

Okay and well, Gio was an example, I mean your side plot would open up a background for your character, gives them a little more life and something to relate to others with. For instance, my characters Fumio an Souta can relate to Zane's characters Aya and Chie due to similar things happening in all of their pasts which is family issues. But that was just a suggestion, I don't think you should build your character on the basis of someone else's.

From what I see of your character, they're eager to become the Captain of Squad two, maybe only because you like the Squad in general. But, what I'd suggest is that you build upon your characters want, like why does he want to become a Captain so bad? Why Squad two in particular? Does he idolise the Squad two Captain? Or is his family trying to force him into a higher rank due to their high expectations of him? Or does he feel that become a Captain will help him achieve something other than just a high rank? Maybe someone's looking for him? Maybe he made a deal with someone from an outside organisation that ended up in them taking his family hostage or as slaves and he feels that he needs the power of a Squad two Captain to rescue them?

Seriously, the possibilities are endless and having a side plot is fun to play out. Not just for you, but for other people reading or other characters witnessing it play out ^_^

[Jangel13]

AbigailTenshi said
Okay and well, Gio was an example, I mean your side plot would open up a background for your character, gives them a little more life and something to relate to others with. For instance, my characters Fumio an Souta can relate to Zane's characters Aya and Chie due to similar things happening in all of their pasts which is family issues. But that was just a suggestion, I don't think you should build your character on the basis of someone else's. From what I see of your character, they're eager to become the Captain of Squad two, maybe only because you like the Squad in general. But, what I'd suggest is that you build upon your characters want, like why does he want to become a Captain so bad? Why Squad two in particular? Does he idolise the Squad two Captain? Or is his family trying to force him into a higher rank due to their high expectations of him? Or does he feel that become a Captain will help him achieve something other than just a high rank? Maybe someone's looking for him? Maybe he made a deal with someone from an outside organisation that ended up in them taking his family hostage or as slaves and he feels that he needs the power of a Squad two Captain to rescue them? Seriously, the possibilities are endless and having a side plot is fun to play out. Not just for you, but for other people reading or other characters witnessing it play out ^_^

Love it all thank you, I'm going to steal one of those and see how everyone reacts to it

[Jangel13]

I appreciate ask the suggestions guys, I'll get a side story going soon but someone else needs to reply cause u can't reply again for another 2 posts

[AbigailTenshi]

RIGHT, I've got something to say about Hasayo's and Nicias's recent posts.

Gio is not a Lieutenant.

Hasayo you can't give out Lieutenant positions for Shinigami's not in your squad XDD If he wants to become Lieutenant, he'd have to join Squad 13, work for it first, then Hasayo can give him the position in his own squad. However, you can give him a recommendation, but he hasn't even worked for the Squad 13 Captain sooooo why would the Captain give him one? XDD Hasayo, hun, you're a Bleach Captain remember, you know Bleach more than the vast majority of us XD Heck, you called me and Zane out on the 'Communicating with our Zanpakuto's outside of Jinzen' thing XD So Com'on. I know it's been a while but you are still a Captain, you're allowed to say no xP

[AbigailTenshi]

Jangel13 said
Love it all thank you, I'm going to steal one of those and see how everyone reacts to it

No problem ^_^ I just thought I'd give you a little nudge since the more side plots, the more interesting characters become :P And you seemed to be having problems with finding things to do ^_^ And go ahead, I suggested them for you, it'd be interesting how you'll play it out :) Also, you can have more than one side-plot or have more plots stem off of your main one, that's what I'm doing, it'll give you more room to make more characters and that increases your chance of interacting and become a part of the RP's overall story.

[Jangel13]

AbigailTenshi said
No problem ^_^ I just thought I'd give you a little nudge since the more side plots, the more interesting characters become :P And you seemed to be having problems with finding things to do ^_^ And go ahead, I suggested them for you, it'd be interesting how you'll play it out :) Also, you can have more than one side-plot or have more plots stem off of your main one, that's what I'm doing, it'll give you more room to make more characters and that increases your chance of interacting and become a part of the RP's overall story.

Well I already have an idea on what I'll do, kinda like a flash back when I see someone familiar walk by the barracks

[AbigailTenshi]

Jangel13 said
Well I already have an idea on what I'll do, kinda like a flash back when I see someone familiar walk by the barracks

Okidoki, go for it ^_^

[Jangel13]

Well I will when someone else replies

[AbigailTenshi]

Jangel13 said
Well I will when someone else replies

Someone else character orr? o.O

[Jangel13]

No I just mean I was the second to last person to reply in the ic and I really can't do posts back to back

[AbigailTenshi]

Jangel13 said
No I just mean I was the second to last person to reply in the ic and I really can't do posts back to back

Oh Okidoki ^_^

[Vongola_Hasayo]

AbigailTenshi said
RIGHT, I've got something to say about Hasayo's and Nicias's recent posts.Gio is not a Lieutenant.Hasayo you can't give out Lieutenant positions for Shinigami's not in your squad XDD If he wants to become Lieutenant, he'd have to join Squad 13, work for it first, then Hasayo can give him the position in his own squad. However, you can give him a recommendation, but he hasn't even worked for the Squad 13 Captain sooooo why would the Captain give him one? XDD Hasayo, hun, you're a Bleach Captain remember, you know Bleach more than the vast majority of us XD Heck, you called me and Zane out on the 'Communicating with our Zanpakuto's outside of Jinzen' thing XD So Com'on. I know it's been a while but you are still a Captain, you're allowed to say no xP

I didn't give him alieutenant position. I have him a recommendation dumdum xD and for his squad xP

[AbigailTenshi]

Vongola_Hasayo said
I didn't give him alieutenant position. I have him a recommendation dumdum xD and for his squad xP

Why'd you give him that? Gio hasn't even done anything for your Captain xD Make him work for it boo~

Recommendations ain't candy dawg xD Especially not Lieutenant position recommendations xD

[Vongola_Hasayo]

Well for one, as a captain Daishin would know the background of shinigami in high positions such as the kick corps commander so there's no real need for some kind of test. Two, Daishin is the kind off person to give chances based on his impressions of people. I'm just playing this as Daishin would go about it. And three i was too lazy to come up with some kind of test out mission or even have them spar. Besides Gio has obviously already shown that he's responsible enough being the kido corps commander and running squad 5 with his 3rd seat rank. It's a recommendation. Whoever the recommendation goes to should be the one to test him.

[Vongola_Hasayo]

Also why would Daishin have him doanything? It's not what gio did for al another squad that makes him with of being the lieutenant of his squad.

[AbigailTenshi]

Vongola_Hasayo said
Well for one, as a captain Daishin would know the background of shinigami in high positions such as the kick corps commander so there's no real need for some kind of test. Two, Daishin is the kind off person to give chances based on his impressions of people. I'm just playing this as Daishin would go about it. And three i was too lazy to come up with some kind of test out mission or even have them spar. Besides Gio has obviously already shown that he's responsible enough being the kido corps commander and running squad 5 with his 3rd seat rank. It's a recommendation. Whoever the recommendation goes to should be the one to test him.

Vongola_Hasayo said
Also why would Daishin have him doanything? It's not what gio did for al another squad that makes him with of being the lieutenant of his squad.

Okay well,
For one, this is an example of why you need to test Shinigamis first instead of handing them recommendations due to 'what they say'. Gio isn't the commander of Kido Corps and there are other people in Squad five... I'm pretty sure Gio hasn't been running the Squad or else he would be giving them missions instead of going to other Captain's 24/7 for missions from them.

For two, so first impressions of people then? The first impression would always be a good one but doesn't necessarily mean that the person is actually like that (Look at Lelouch for goodness sake! Does he look crazy?! Didn't think so... He's mental literally). Also, that would mean Daishin is easily deceived which isn't good considering he's a Captain an' all. He has to give recommendations out based on skill, not impressions. Plus, what has been happening in the IC is that Shinigami have been turning on the Gotei 13 recently sooo Captain's would naturally think more about giving someone of a position of power now more than ever.

For three, weeeeelll you can't be lazy with a Captain, you could of just told Gio to do something for him or show him his skills, that way Gio would have to think on his feet and show Daishin stuff so then you wouldn't have to come up with a mission. Gio isn't Lieutenant level yet, you would know if you tested hiiim, just super-sayin'.

Welll, look at it this way, if he recommended someone and they certainly wasn't up-to-par with the position recommended, that would make Daishin look bad and worse than the Shinigami recommended would look sooo it wouldn't look good for your Captain's reputation. ^_^

[Vongola_Hasayo]

But he has been taking on most of the responsibility in the squad being the highest rank present has he not?

Argument invalid when the person in question is not bad. Plus i didn't know about what was happening in the ic. Why i didn't ask? Well before when i asked it was usually nothing. Since i did not know this i didn't want to make a drawn out process just for a recommendation. Ultimately it's gonna be the head captain's decision(cuz there's no 5 captain) and recommendations aren't going to guarantee getting the position. At least i hope that's not how you guys are doing things.

Daishin doesn't care about his reputation as a captain. Nuff said.

Now that i know about the recent betrayals I'll give some test.