Axel said
Three Characters Here
Okay, so the last two are accepted since they have no moves yet xD But when you do add moves, let us know.
Hiezogawa Perstruda
Shikai Skills
1) Acceptable
2) Right soooo if a bit of the stain got onto skin, that part of the skin disappears? xD So like, limbs could be erased? Can Zanpakuto's be erased too? o.o
3) Acceptable
8) Acceptable
Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills
Rebirth - Welllll, if you want this skill, I think there should be a limit of how many times it can be used o.O Like, it can only be used 3 times and that's it since this skill means the guy wouldn't be able to die xD Which is OP since, no matter how strong a character is, there must be atleast one way for them to die. I know that looking at some of the characters in the RP *cough* may give the impression that some of them are invincible but that's never the case xD They all can die too :P
Way of Travel - This should have a post cooldown o.O Since this could be spammed badly xD Like have it so that he can use it up to 4 times in 1 post or back-to-back posts but then once he has, the cooldown is 3 posts. This is my take on this move.
Rewind with the hourglass - Is there a certain amount of time that he can stay in the past for? So if he exceeds that time (Post wise) then he'd be trapped in the past? o.O Maybe the hourglass would take 5 - 6 posts before it runs out.
Light at the end of the tunnel - I'm cool with this ^_^
Soooo here's my opinion, we can work something out though if there's a skill that you need to stay as it is for story purposes only ^_^