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Sometimes there just aren't things worth discussing, so nobody says anything. I'm not going to treat the OOC as my personal diary and i doubt anyone else will.

I'm rather torn between making a post and moving towards the candystand or just staying put. On one hand, i'd be going against the thing i've said about not making posts until everyone else has had a chance to, and it's kind of a massive coincidence that the magical girls in the crowd would meet up with each other, but on the other hand sugar and spice and everything nice.
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Okie doki, so...
Full disclosure: I have no idea if this wish will be accepted considering... well, you'll see. I tried to make it as balanced as possible given its nature. I'm also fully aware of how "totally creative" her name is, and I am not proud of the description of her appearance. I had it slightly better written before, forgot to save the edits, turned out this. (Which is basically a description of the character her image is taken from with her Magica form added on)
I'm totally okay with redoing any portion of her, so much so that I have backup rough drafts in case of any problems. Please point any issues out that are there or that you have with anything.
However I'd like to ask if it's possible to give her a higher starting despair and/or minor preexisting afflictions. (Due to her history)



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Added the afflictions desired to have so I won't have to add them later on. Also added my suggestion for higher despair level. Both within brackets.
Added a sub ability I forgot to re-include after the loss of edits made.
Added quotes to Personality to give a snapshot of her thinking. Within hider.
Added kill count to Experience.
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Seems I'll have to tweak the idea a little and use a different idea... instead of that image. Hmmm...
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Seems I'll have to tweak the idea a little and use a different idea... instead of that image. Hmmm...


Sorry. Too similar?
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Sorry. Too similar?


No, just shitty rolls on my part. I wasn't even paying attention to your character :P
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No, just shitty rolls on my part. I wasn't even paying attention to your character :P


Ah. Good, the less attention the better. :P
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105 pounds is 50 kilograms, not seven. if she actually weighed that much, she'd be lighter then some babies. Might want to correct that quickly.
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105 pounds is 50 kilograms, not seven. if she actually weighed that much, she'd be lighter then some babies. Might want to correct that quickly.


Geez. Thank you. Fixed it. The converter I used gave me 47 and I didn't notice the typo.
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I find it amusing that there are more foreign MG's than natives.

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I'm assuming you've listed the Signature and Finisher moves for later use, since Violet doesn't have enough experience to use them yet? And does the power drain only take effect when her hits connect with a magical girl, or does it also connect on hitting magical constructs?
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I find it amusing that there are more foreign MG's than natives.

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I'm assuming you've listed the Signature and Finisher moves for later use, since Violet doesn't have enough experience to use them yet? And does the power drain only take effect when her hits connect with a magical girl, or does it also connect on hitting magical constructs?


Correct.
Technically, it's a side effect of absorbing the corruption, rather than a direct drain of power, so at first only a source of magic. But if she survives long enough, maybe. Since the wish was specifically "corruption" based, it would take a lot of experience using it to use it more flexibly for constructs. Or potentially a lot of borrowed power?
I noted labyrinths specifically since witches are made from the corruption of soul gems, so I assume their magic works more on that wavelength than that of magical girls.
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Alright then. I can imagine Violet going "LEND ME YOUR POWER" While charging some kind of super spell and everyone holding their Soul Gems out to her DBZ-style.
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Alright then. I can imagine Violet going "LEND ME YOUR POWER" While charging some kind of super spell and everyone holding their Soul Gems out to her DBZ-style.


Hehe. But in a monotone voice, (assuming I can get those preexisting afflictions) and it would probably turn her into a witch afterwords.


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Imma Reroll TOF and hope I can tweak it a little. Here's the preview sheet



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I smell conflict a-brewing.

Can't wait to see these two in the Rp.
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Feel the need to state I edited my post to include more of the things I left out/forgot to re-include after losing those edits.
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Wow. Wow. That's incredibly dark and I love it and feel terrible and don't know how to respond to that. Wow.
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@DarkwolfX37 I'll let ha know, the teleportation was removed and reworked with some help from Cleo.

Now she's even more powerful xD
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Feel the need to state I edited my post to include more of the things I left out/forgot to re-include after losing those edits.
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Wow. Wow. That's incredibly dark and I love it and feel terrible and don't know how to respond to that. Wow.


Yeah, It's still a "loopy meguca". But with a little of Urobutchi-esque treatment. Now, lemme see if i can reroll better TOF.

And then she'll whore herself to veteran megucas for protection.
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@DarkwolfX37 I'll let ha know, the teleportation was removed and reworked with some help from Cleo.

Now she's even more powerful xD



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Yeah, It's still a "loopy meguca". But with a little of Urobutchi-esque treatment. Now, lemme see if i can reroll better TOF.

And then she'll whore herself to veteran megucas for protection.

I can imagine Julia taking Dariya as her slave apprentice and then play with her ride on her shoulders.
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I can imagine Julia taking Dariya as her slave apprentice and then play with her ride on her shoulders.


Heheh, anything to keep the stupid guard doggy mistress happy <3

...aren't we being like Kirika/Oriko? :P
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