[OOC] Mark of the Demons - A World Turned to Hell

[Awesomoman64]

CS on the way. Noticed we have a lack of magic characters so I'll probably try a battle mage.

[Lady Seraphina]

Silvana

Name: Silvana Ravensblood
Age: 27
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Mark of the demon: One green eye, one silver eye (not blind)
Profession: Blacksmith/Fighter
Personality: Silvana is meticulous when it comes to her craft. She will often double and triple check her work. In her personal life, she is reserved and observant, a trait further pressed to the surface given circumstances. But once she makes friends with someone, those barriers begin to drop and she will protect her friends.
Appearance: 5'9, 167 lbs. Has several scars.

Notice: I do NOT own the image above
Bio: Silvana was a Blacksmith by trade before the fall, brought to Veiron by her father when she was only twelve. She trained her trade under her father for four years becoming a proficient and successful blacksmith in her own right. But when the King formed this new army, she knew things were about to take a turn for the worse. She packed up her tools, against the protest of her father and began making preparations, basic leather armour. On the day the kingdom fell, she was close to epicentre and was exposed to the tainting, body and mind warping power from the Daemons Realm, she barely managed to escape. In the years since the fall she has slain many an Orc that decided to push their luck and attack her, though she always moves when she sees Demons nearby. She has fought one though, and injured it, but had to flee due to the injuries she sustained.
Equipment: Hammer set, Leather Armour, other smithing tools, dagger.
Notes:

@Saint Girralo

Could be a bit more fleshed out but otherwise looks good except for one thing. The mark is a form of disfigurement resulting from exposure to demon elements. It's supposed to make others feel uneasy or distrustful of you as though you are in demon thrall. Some include eyes changing to blackened or bloody colours. Demonic runes burned into the flesh. Blackened arm or other body parts, change in hair colour, hideous scar. That sort of thing. A single silver eye doesn't really scream demons which is what the mark is intended to do.

[Saint Girralo]

I'll edit it shortly.

[Saint Girralo]

@Prince of Seraphs

Updated.

Most of her backstory isn't interesting or truly relevant which is why there is so little.

[Lady Seraphina]

Mark of the demon: One green eye, one silver eye (not blind), much of her upper body has become coal-like in colour, specifically her Torso, her left arm and most of her right arm. Down her back are Daemonic Runes the meaning of which are not know to her, though one is the name of the Demon warrior she fought in their language.

@Saint Girralo

I kinda meant for you to pick one not give her all of the examples.

[Lady Seraphina]

@Nevix Where you still interested in joining this RP?

The heart she had beating within her chest was ripped out that day.

@Laue

This is a figure of speech right? With the scar on her chest it's difficult to be sure. Assuming it is you are good to post your character to the tab.

@Medjedovic You're CS is good to be posted to the Character Tab.

[Saint Girralo]

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I kinda meant for you to pick one not give her all of the examples.

@Prince of Seraphs

She was close to the epicentre, closer to the warping Daemonic energies, it would stand to reason that she might have more warping than others

[Nevix]

@Prince of SeraphsSorry dude, I'm in a fair few right now and I don't want to hold you guys back with mediocre writing because my attention is split. Best of luck guys.

[Lady Seraphina]

She was close to the epicentre, closer to the warping Daemonic energies, it would stand to reason that she might have more warping than others

@Saint Girralo

The epicenter was in a building a couple hundred feet in the air.

[kkbird123]

im intested, will post CS tomorrow

[Laue]

@Nevix Where you still interested in joining this RP?

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This is a figure of speech right? With the scar on her chest it's difficult to be sure. Assuming it is you are good to post your character to the tab.

@Prince of Seraphs

It is a figure of speech, yes.

[Saint Girralo]

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The epicenter was in a building a couple hundred feet in the air.

@Prince of Seraphs

So the warping powers of demonic energy isn't that strong? Cause this sounds like the kind of civilization that I'd be allowed to walk up to the base of the King's tower before the fall. Much closer than many other survivors were.

[Lady Seraphina]

So the warping powers of demonic energy isn't that strong? Cause this sounds like the kind of civilization that I'd be allowed to walk up to the base of the King's tower before the fall. Much closer than many other survivors were.

@Saint Girralo

Valeria was prosperous not stupid. The citadel is walled off from the rest of the city and was guarded to prevent just random people entering. Remember this is the King's palace, his home.

Ignoring that for a moment though the marks didn't simply appear, they formed with a great deal of pain. Having all of that happen to her body (assuming she survived) would leave her in no condition to fight or run and if she was close enough to the epicenter to get that scarred then she likely didn't survive.

When the demons broke through in Veirion they didn't just enter and leave. The demons treated the city like their personal smorgasbord of destruction. They left the city in ruins and slaughter anyone they could find. Those that survived only did so because they were either very lucky or very close to the edge of the city.

[Saint Girralo]

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Valeria was prosperous not stupid. The citadel is walled off from the rest of the city and was guarded to prevent just random people entering. Remember this is the King's palace, his home.

Ignoring that for a moment though the marks didn't simply appear, they formed with a great deal of pain. Having all of that happen to her body (assuming she survived) would leave her in no condition to fight or run and if she was close enough to the epicenter to get that scarred then she likely didn't survive.

When the demons broke through in Veirion they didn't just enter and leave. The demons treated the city like their personal smorgasbord of destruction. They left the city in ruins and slaughter anyone they could find. Those that survived only did so because they were either very lucky or very close to the edge of the city.

@Prince of Seraphs

There is the information I need. Thank you. Now I can balance the mark out.

[Saint Girralo]

Name: Silvana Ravensblood
Age: 27
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Mark of the demon: One green eye, one silver eye (not blind), much of her left arm has has become coal like in colour, while down her back are a few, four, Daemonic Runes, the meaning of which are not know to her.
Profession: Blacksmith/Fighter
Personality: Silvana is meticulous when it comes to her craft. She will often double and triple check her work. In her personal life, she is reserved and observant, a trait further pressed to the surface given circumstances. But once she makes friends with someone, those barriers begin to drop and she will protect her friends.
Appearance: 5'9, 167 lbs. Has several scars.

Notice: I do NOT own the image above
Bio: Silvana was a Blacksmith by trade before the fall, brought to Veiron by her father when she was only twelve. She trained her trade under her father for four years becoming a proficient and successful blacksmith in her own right. But when the King formed this new army, she knew things were about to take a turn for the worse. She packed up her tools, against the protest of her father and began making preparations, basic leather armour. On the day the kingdom fell, she was closer to the epicentre than most who escaped Veiron and was exposed to the tainting, body and mind warping power from the Daemons Realm, she barely managed to escape. In the years since the fall she has slain many an Orc that decided to push their luck and attack her, though she always moves when she sees Demons nearby. She has fought one though, and injured it, but had to flee due to the injuries she sustained.
Equipment: Hammer set, Leather Armour, other smithing tools, dagger.
Notes:

[Laue]

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Valeria was prosperous not stupid. The citadel is walled off from the rest of the city and was guarded to prevent just random people entering. Remember this is the King's palace, his home.

Ignoring that for a moment though the marks didn't simply appear, they formed with a great deal of pain. Having all of that happen to her body (assuming she survived) would leave her in no condition to fight or run and if she was close enough to the epicenter to get that scarred then she likely didn't survive.

When the demons broke through in Veirion they didn't just enter and leave. The demons treated the city like their personal smorgasbord of destruction. They left the city in ruins and slaughter anyone they could find. Those that survived only did so because they were either very lucky or very close to the edge of the city.

@Prince of Seraphs

Shouldn't I change Alicia's bio then? Considering Alicia was a Royal Guard, the people that guard the King, and according to her bio she more or less was at the ground zero. Though most castles and especially noble homes would have emergency escape paths which invaders would have no knowledge of...

[Lady Seraphina]

@Laue I don't think that would be necessary. Alicia as you say is a Royal Guard which means that she's had a great deal of training in combat and would fair quite a bit better against demons than say a blacksmith visiting the city. She is also intimately familiar with the citadel itself and so has home turf advantage. As you say the Citadel most likely has a number of escape routes that she may have made use of to get away. Besides as a Royal Guard she would have been in or around the Citadel but the breach occurred in the very tallest tower so she wouldn't have necessarily been exposed to more demonic energy unless she was on one of the top floors. Plus the King did order an evacuation of the city so she may have been away from the Citadel facilitating that. It's not like she was fighting all of the demons either. In the numbers that they come in she'd more just be trying to escape them. And you did say she was one of the only guards to escape from Veiron alive.

[kkbird123]

Still open or too many characters?

[Lady Seraphina]

Still open or too many characters?

@kkbird123

There can never be too many players.

Well there can but we're not there yet.

[Lady Seraphina]

@Saint Girralo I'd say that looks good. Go ahead and post it to the CT.

This goes out to everyone. Please put you're CSs in hiders. It makes the CT easier to navigate.

If anyone is interested I've loaded my CS to the CT. It contains rather a lot of information so if you have any questions feel free to ask.