Alright,
@Doc Doctor. I'm trying to imagine the height difference between Trixi (5'7") and Gonad (7'2") which is about 1'7" difference, and something about your description is driving my inner artist nuts and messing up my image in my head. If it didn't create a huge issue, I wouldn't nitpick but I want to make sure there's not going to be an issue with my movements in the long run. In addition we're not imagining two different pictures in comparison. >_>
One sentence really bothers me as it makes the difference about an additional foot, or more which is this one:
His hips would be nearly at the level of her chest, each leg probably thicker than her waist.
In my head, when I imagine that, Trixi's head top falls about just under his ribcage since proportion wise there's less than a foot between the head and chest middle. This would make the difference between head tops more than the mention difference and extends his reach much greater than I think is humanly reasonable. Originally I thought it was me, and still wondering if it is me, so I asked a friend about that sentence while telling him the height of Gonad and Trixi. He also felt it was off as I explained, with a 1'7" difference that would make Trixi's head top just below (think) his chest middle at most, not at his waist which your post would've indicated.
I'm trying writing a reply, but I'm having trouble as my inner self wants to tweak the proportions to how I'm seeing however while trying not to disrespect you or give Trixi any additional advantages due to imaginary issues.
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Nvm, someone helped me a bit and currently sorted that out.
