Another small batch of khookies.
@Vec for
this postSpelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 8/10 (I particularly liked the beginning! Good imagery all around)
Story Line Advancement: 7/10 (Similar to your other post Ull is just sitting in his own world, but this post did at least establish what he had been doing and make a hero and such, so I'll give you credit for advancing the story by a fair bit)
Character Development: 8/10 (I saw a very good amount of development for Ull'yang's personality in this post, but as far as Luna went, we only saw that brief snippet after she became a hero. Still, you did give us a taste for what she'll be like.)
Independence: 6/10
Total: 39/50; 78%; 8 Khookies for Luna
@BBeast for
this postSpelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 8/10 (Always been a big fan of your writing, all the way back to reading about Detuiron's shenanigans all those years ago! Keep it up! And kudos to Kangutso as well in that post; it's good to see Kyre finally doing his war-god stuff.)
Story Line Advancement: 9/10 (Moving steadily towards the battle; I'm looking forward to it.)
Character Development: 7/10 (Interesting to see Gerrik in the presence of another strange guy whom he suspects of being a god, training once more)
Independence: 8/10
Total: 42/50; 84%; 8 Khookies for Gerrik
