[OOC] Mid/High Casual - Divinus: The Deity Roleplay Mk.II

[Kho]

@pandapolio You can post it here if you like - the GMs can give you feedback, and so can players. If you would prefer that fellow players not see the work in progress, you can PM it to any of the GMs or all of them (that is, Antarctic Termite, Muttonhawk, BBeast). It's all up to you.

[Lauder]

I’m just wondering if I should post my new character in the same post as Keriss or make a new one.

[Kho]

@Lauder if their stories aren't connected, it's best to make them separate posts. Surprising fact: shorter posts are easier to read. But I can't really talk >.<

[Lauder]

@Lauder if their stories aren't connected, it's best to make them separate posts. Surprising fact: shorter posts are easier to read. But I can't really talk >.<

@Kho

must I show you the Cykholabs?

[Frettzo]

@Lauder, love that character mang. You can be sure she'll never have any shortage of work!

[Kho]

@Lauder THE CYCKHOLLABS WERE ALL CONNECTED. IN A ROUNDABOUT SORTA WAY. I SWEAR.

_{it's all cyclone's fault. it's always cyclone's fault.}

[Kho]

@Lauder For a second I thought panda had misunderstood my previous post and put his wip CS in the Characters Thread >.< whew.

But yeah, you know what - she's like a combination of Belvast and Chroma. There's a real innocence about her, and then all that I'm a Hero! stuff. Chromvast. Chromahameha.

EDIT: WAIT. YOU MEANT... WHETHER TO POST THE NEW CS IN KERISS' CS POST?
OH.
WHOOPS.

It's still fine >.>

[pandapolio]

Hey here is my wip cs

Amon

ALIAS^{None as of now}

AGE ^{(IF APPLICABLE)} | GENDER ^male HEIGHT ^5’11” | WEIGHT ^185lbs

Dᴏᴍᴀɪɴ & Pᴏʀᴛꜰᴏʟɪᴏ

e.g. Fear (The Unknown)

Description

Fear is something all creatures are born with. It is what divides two tribes, or brings them together to fight a common enemy. For some it is immobilizing, for others it causes them to flee, and for a brave few it makes them rise to the occasion and overcome their challenges. Amon has the ability to influence the fear people feel. He can raise it to where all but the bravest will flee, or eradicate it from his allies. With his portfolio being that of the unknown he uses people's fear of the strange and new against them. The monster under your bed as a child, the strange person you are instantly weary of.

Aʟɪɢɴᴍᴇɴᴛ

Neutral Evil

Pᴇʀsᴏɴᴀʟɪᴛʏ

Amon is not one to jump into action in most cases. He is slow and deliberate in most things he does. While some may call him lazy he prefers to be called energy efficient. He is of the mentality that the ends justify the means. And the ends are justified if they benefit him.

Aᴘᴘᴇᴀʀᴀɴᴄᴇ

He appears to be a slightly taller than normal human male with lean muscle. He has dark brown hair cut short, and a clean shaven face. Around his eyes there are scars going outwards. His eyes are pure black, if one would look closely they would see the blackness in his eyes appear to move like an ocean.

Dᴇsᴄʀɪᴘᴛɪᴏɴ

Amon seems to at times seems to not care, but he constantly is alert. He seems to pick and choose his words carefully as if every word could have huge repercussions. He exudes an aura of fear and dread. Normally people will feel something is just inherently wrong, but they are unable to pinpoint why. The longer Amon is there the more the effects grow. Eventually people will start distrusting each other. This will grow into outright hostility.

Mᴜsɪᴄᴀʟ Tʜᴇᴍᴇ

youtu.be/iRja4HUsRu0

Cᴏɴᴄᴇᴀʟᴍᴇɴᴛ & Dᴇᴛᴇᴄᴛɪᴏɴ Lᴇᴠᴇʟ

Did you read the OP? Did you read it properly?

[pandapolio]

And I forgot the name part... His name is Amon.

[Kho]

I have to say I don't think Fear is really Domain material. It is more (Portfolio). From your description of the Domain(Portfolio), it's probably a (Portfolio) of a Domain like Emotions - because as far as I can see, emotional manipulation is effectively what Amon does. We already have Lifprasil as a Demigod of Emotion though.

Perhaps we can tenuously justify Fear being his Domain by having him emerge somehow from Lifprasil (perhaps Lifprasil, in his damaged state, became so fear-ridden [perhaps by the idea that he was done, that there is no future for him beyond whatever crippled state he's in] that those dark emotions manifested into a new being).

So yeah, I honestly don't think Fear is Domain material. You also forgot to put something for Concealment and Detection.

Edit: Lifprasil's CS - roleplayerguild.com/posts/3444354

[pandapolio]

@Kho That sounds cool. And as for concealment and detection I am currently looking for that in the op. I thought it should be a portfolio, but was worried it was too broad. I'll change that when I get the chance. Thank you.

[Kho]

@pandapolio This is just my opinion, don't take it as divine decree ^^' in the end, it's the GMs who'll be judging your CS not me
*runs away from the OOC and gets back to reading*

[Lauder]

@Lauder For a second I thought panda had misunderstood my previous post and put his wip CS in the Characters Thread >.< whew.

But yeah, you know what - she's like a combination of Belvast and Chroma. There's a real innocence about her, and then all that I'm a Hero! stuff. Chromvast. Chromahameha.

EDIT: WAIT. YOU MEANT... WHETHER TO POST THE NEW CS IN KERISS' CS POST?
OH.
WHOOPS.

It's still fine >.>

@Kho

WHAT DID YOU THINK I MEANT DINGUS?!

@Lauder THE CYCKHOLLABS WERE ALL CONNECTED. IN A ROUNDABOUT SORTA WAY. I SWEAR.

_{it's all cyclone's fault. it's always cyclone's fault.}

@Kho

You mean the love of horses? I think that’s what I remember the most from them, the fucking horses.

@Lauder, love that character mang. You can be sure she'll never have any shortage of work!

@Frettzo

I thank you! She is gonna be one of the busiest of the divine, I’m sure.

[Kho]

You mean the love of horses? I think that’s what I remember the most from them, the fucking horses.

@Lauder

The Rukbans are literally called 'Horse People'. If Rukban posts didn't leave you thinking of horses, I'd have done a terrible job.

Since you're talking 'bout horses here's some horses to help you think more about horses

[Vec]

@Kho



Add that to the mix.

[Kho]

@Vec You dare insult a GOD!?!

BLASPHEMY. RUKBANY WILL HAVE YOUR ENTRAILS FOR THIS.

SEND IN DA GOATS

[LokiLeo789]

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The Rukbans are literally called 'Horse People'. If Rukban posts didn't leave you thinking of horses, I'd have done a terrible job.

Since you're talking 'bout horses here's some horses to help you think more about horses

@Kho

I always thought they where literal horse people, like, bipedal horses.

[Kho]

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I always thought they where literal horse people, like, bipedal horses.

@LokiLeo789

...they're definitely humans. Largely a mixture of Native American/Mongol/Bedouin culture.

Rough Visual Aid

[LokiLeo789]

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...they're definitely humans. Largely a mixture of Native American/Mongol/Bedouin culture.

Rough Visual Aid

@Kho

Yeah, cyclone cleared that up for me. Chick in the first pic lookin good tho, who is she?

[Kho]

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Yeah, cyclone cleared that up for me. Chick in the first pic lookin good tho, who is she?

@LokiLeo789

She's not an ingame character as far as I'm aware. Though she may well become so >.>

Also, @WrongEndoftheRainbow

Is...is it safe for those orbits to be crossing like that?

Edit: tfw Galbar has survived moons being chucked at it, gods warring, space invasions, and who knows what else... gets wrecked in a space car crash