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The Stalker fell a moment late Spotting another one slightly further up the road she aimed at that one as well, taking the risk of an imperfect calculation in favour ...... care much about the groups reaction to the zombies ahead of them falling out of apparent nowhere. They were too far away by now to hear her gunshots.
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From these couple sentences it made me deduce, it was over a mile long shot, since they were 1. Too far to hear it, 2. 50. Cal snipers are loud as fuck. Suppressed or not.
Also it is plausible a ten year old to kill a zombie with a bat. Taking into consideration that 1. kids have killed living adults with a bat before, 2. Bones become more brittle longer after death. 3. It only takes 16 to about 198 psi to crack a skull. 4. Adrenaline can greatly increase ones strength (being attributed to mothers holding up cars that would crush their children) also she being a softball player swinging a 2 lb bat often increases her muscle mass of by a little. So yes it's plausible.
I'm sorry if I sound like a dick, not my intention. Just bring up the reasons why I had an issue with the realism in it. I actually enjoy some of your posts I read up on so I'm not attacking your writing.
Another reason I bring it up is because it is a fantasy fiction, and people often use fantasy as a crutch to not think on how their characters now how to do something. Or making assumptions on like (sorry wick) figuring out what branch of military someone is in just by looking at him for a couple seconds. If that said person had a military background and can notice the difference in uniform or stance or even standard issue weapons.
Just little things like that can really flesh out a character and make them more real. (I fall under that trap as well.) but becoming better writers is to remember to make it as realistic as possible even in a fantasy setting.
I also understand we are at different levels of writing and that's fine. I was just pointing out a (too me) a major flaw that conflicts with my character and not wanting to impose on others because in reality Jason really wouldn't leave 10k behind unless absolutely told to by her, but with the fact of the saying the group never heard the shot cause they are too far away, yet they are well within a mile and that weapon is as loud as it is. It just made it hard for me to decide, do I ignore that and piss you off by doing what Jason would really do or go against my characters nature and ignore her entirely.
Sorry if I sound like a dick again, I'm not meaning to be. Just explaining my delema