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Okay, @Unoedipal one last check.

Since you guys don't know, my original ideas didn't work, so I had to chance and went with this Servant instead.

Name: Achilles

Class: Lancer

Gender: Male

Appearance: 



Alignment: Lawful Neutral

Personality: 

Lancer is described as being broad-minded and audacious, often displaying a carefree smile on his face. He is a headstrong and rebellious spirit, Even if ordered by his Master, he is a Servant who will not accept tasks he does not wish to complete, showing his nature as a "hero." He thinks little of those called kings. During the course of a regular war, the first clash would likely have been between the two of them. In such a way, he once openly ignored orders from a king he disliked, only taking up arms for the sake of a slain comrade. While he is able to stand stern against those he has marked as enemies, he becomes soft when faced with those whom he has already marked as "good people" when they temporarily remove themselves from being his ally.

He has striven to live his life in such a way that he is constantly the target of killing intent and hateful animosity, and he has become accustomed to it. He was one who stood out alongside other heroes, displaying confidence in any battle and a great will to fight. His thirst for blood is such that normal humans will have their spirits utterly crumble before him. He freely boasts before his opponents and mocks them severely, even while outnumbered and not fighting at full power. He was one whose one true friend and the women who loved him meant all the world, so such things are nothing to him. For the opponents of the war whose scornful glares are directed at him, the only difference compared to those who directed animosity towards him in his life are the time in which they existed and the weapons they wielded. He views them as all the same, and plans to cut them down like they are nothing.

He wishes to fulfill the vow he made with his mother, "live like a hero and die like a hero" and to fight against Chiron.

History: 

Lancer's True Name is Achilles, one of the famous heroes in the Trojan Wars. Born from the sea goddess Thetis and the hero Peleus, Achilles was blessed by the gods from birth. His mother Thetis, having greatly loved her son, had warmed him within holy flames in order to try and make him immortal. But her husband Peleus had opposed it, saying “Then that would destroy Achilles as a human”, and in the end Achilles grew up while only a certain part of him remained human. Eventually, when war broke out between Troia and Achaea, Achilles was asked the following by his mother Thetis: "Do you wish to live a long and peaceful life without having your name recognized by the masses? Or do you wish to live the short life of a hero with brilliant achievements in battle?" Achilles choice went without saying. At the same time as his mother felt pride in his decision, she also felt heartbreakingly sad, because his fate had been predetermined since he was born. If he lived as a hero, he would have a short life, as if sprinting through it at full speed.

When Achilles was a young child, his mother Thetis returned to her home at the bottom of the sea, due to discord with his father Peleus. Chiron, who had raised many heroes, was an old friend of Peleus. Peleus requested Chiron to train his son and Chiron happily accepted the role of mentoring Achilles for nine years.

After having grown up, he participated in the Trojan War as part of the Achaean army and continued achieving many great feats. He was a human who was exceedingly close to the level of the gods. A fast-sprinting hero with an invincible body, his body blessed by all the gods could never received any wounds, but his heel alone was this hero's vital weak point. The spear his father had given to him pierced through all other heroes. With his chariot led by three steeds, consisting of two divine horses given to him as a gift from the sea god Poseidon and a famous horse he stole while assaulting a certain city, no one could chase after him from behind.

Hector was one of the greatest heroes in the Trojan War, being equal in strength and skill with Achilles, even when his weak point was exposed. Hector was the killer of Achilles' close friend Patroclus. Achilles, enraged with his friends death, challenged Hector in a one-on-one fight. Even after killing Hector, the way Achilles insulted him by dragging his corpse around with his chariot was a foolish and intolerable act. As a result, he incurred the displeasure of the sun god Apollo, but despite being repeatedly warned to restrain himself, Achilles continued slaughtering the Trojan army. So the enraged Apollo aided the Trojan army's bow expert Paris, and guided him to shoot Achilles' only weak point—that is, his heel. Having his heart pierced by arrows one after another afterwards, Achilles sensed his own death, but continued fiercely fighting and using all his strength to kill the soldiers of the Trojan army around him. Just as predicted, he had a short life, but his legend as a hero was carved into the world.

Weapon: Spear, Shield (Armor)

Parameters:

Strength: C+ (B+)

Endurance: B (A)

Agility: B+ (A+)

Mana: C

Luck: D

Class Skills: 

Magic Resistance C 

Personal Skills: 

Battle Continuation: A 
Doesn't know when to give up.
Even after being being struck in his weak points, heart and Achilles Heel he continued fighting for a while. 

Bravery: A+ 
Ability to nullify mental interference such as coercion, confusion, and glamours.
Also damage in hand-to-hand combat also increases. 

Goddess's Affection: B 
Affection is from his mother Thetis. 
Other than MAN and LCK, all stats are passively treated as Rank-Up. 

Divinity: C 
The child of the Sea Goddess Thetis and human hero Peleus.

Noble Phantasm(s): Name: Diatrecon Aster Logche
Title: Speartip of the Stars Traversing the Sky
Rank: B+
Type: Anti-Unit
Range: 2-10
Max Targets: 1
Description: The spear of Achilles. In its passive state, wounds dealt by it sustain a "curse of mortality" which makes healing impossible when wounded by the spear, as the wounded state is treated as the optimal state. In other words, it can be considered the functional equivalent of a certain Irishman's yellow spear.
With invocation of the true name, it creates an arena cut off from all of the surrounding environment and time, which isn’t released until one of the combatants is defeated. In terms of magical theory, it is a High Thaumaturgy Bounded Field that is close to a Reality Marble. It can be called the ultimate contest of pure strength and skill that negates even “flukes” caused by things like divine blessings or luck. Achilles used this when he fought Hector. 
Also, since Achilles killed the Amazoness Queen Penthesilea with this spear, he cannot invoke the true name against women. In the first place, this arena can only be used against “those who Achilles wants to fight one-on-one against”. In other words, if Achilles doesn’t “wish to fight them” and the opponent doesn’t have enough courage and skill to respond to his challenge either, Achilles won’t use this spear. Furthermore, even if Achilles himself wants to fight them, he won’t try to forcefully bring his opponents into the one-on-one arena if they don’t want to. It is a Noble Phantasm with a narrow range of enemies it can be used against.

Name: Dromeus Kometes
Title: Comet Style
Rank: A+ 
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Range: 0
Max Targets: 1 person
An embodiment of the legend that Lancer is the fastest among all heroes of all eras.
He can run through a giant battlefield in one breath, obstacles on the field will not slow him down. This does not require invocation to be activated, but while active, prana consumption rises tremendously.
It must expose his weak-point, the Achilles Heel, however there aren't many heroic spirits that can keep up with his speed. 

Name: Andreias Amarantos
Title: Amaranth of the Brave
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Range: 0
Max Targets: 1
Description: The Noble Phantasm that maintains Achilles’s immortality. It grants his entire body, excluding his heel, the blessing of immortality, and negates all attacks from those who don’t possess the “Divinity” skill. Also, if the skill’s rank isn’t equal or higher than Achilles’ own “Divinity” rank, the damage won’t go through completely, reduced to 75% of the damage for D rank “Divinity” and to 50% for E rank. Additionally, even without Divinity, damage will be dealt as long as the attacking weapon is a divine armament. In that case, the damage calculation would depend on the rank of the divine armament. It is also ineffective at defending against attacks that are "signs of friendship".

Name: Achilles Cosmos
Title: The Miniature World Enclosed by the Azure Sky
Rank: A+
Type: Barrier
Range: 0
Max Targets: 1
Description: Achilles’ trump card which protects the wielder by deploying a miniature world. A divine armament created by the hands of the blacksmith god Hephaestus. It can event against nearly any attack, whether it be from an Anti-Unit, Anti-Army, Anti-Fortress or even Anti-Country Noble Phantasm. Any such attacks of equal or lesser rank to this Noble Phantasm can be defended against effortlessly, and ones of higher rank can be blocked a single time, at the cost of breaking the shield immediately after. 
However, due to this Noble Phantasm’s nature, it is weak against Anti-World Noble Phantasms alone. An Anti-World attack of equal or lesser rank will be blocked, but break the shield, and an Anti-World attack of greater rank will destroy the shield without being blocked.
In addition, when Achilles alone wields it, this shield can be used to “attack” as well through invoking the true name. After deploying the Noble Phantasm, he would aim to crush the enemy with that miniature world by continuously pushing forward. Most likely, Hephaestus never thought of such a method of using it.

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