@Alina13 You're missing the important question. I've seen this type of character played different ways, some of them very well. The concern is you dictating how Nikki, for example, feels about you. That's generally in poor taste. You say how Eden acts, and I tell you what Nikki thinks about it.
We're more concerned with the fact that self-insert characters often create problems, and mean that criticism of the character is taken personally. Also, you completely neglected to answer Mokley on whether the sheet is from Eden's point of view, or your own. The way you're coming across is consistent with a certain type of person, and while you may be a lovely person and a skilled rper, many of us have unpleasant experiences with that sort of person in the past.