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Just to add a couple "fun facts" for this thread:

1. Long Beach is a real city in California in LA county. I love going down there with family either to the beach or the shopping centers. It's actually a really good city, I just used it for the purpose of the thread so I could plan things in my head better. XD

2. The smoothie incident is 100% real, this happened to me four days ago, getaway car and everything. XD Only difference is two men came into the store and the third was in the getaway car. This did not happen in Long Beach. XD
Ally was surprised by the big convicts reaction, his mimicry of her actions. Her heart melted- now she really felt bad for the man. Had he never felt an affectionate touch from another human being? She couldn't imagine never feeling that sort of affection, and she couldn't imagine how that could traumatize someone.

Then the incantations began again and her throat was grabbed. Though it was uncomfortable, the man wasn't putting anywhere near the pressure it would take to successfully crush a throat of solid titanium. She doubted he could produce that kind of force, and decided this fight wouldn't be won through fists, but possibly through words.

"Seduce?" Ally asked, disgusted by the head's vulgarity, "There is a large difference between seduction and compassion."

She felt the grip tighten on her throat, which meant the head was only getting angrier. He continued speaking, saying the man's only purpose was to destroy. "You and me know that isn't true! Monsters aren't born, they're created! This man is no monster, this man is a man who has never felt love!"

The pressure began to tighten, and Ally became worried. Was this his full pressure, or was he still holding back? The titanium wasn't denting, but the pressure scared her. Her breathing became shallower, more out of fear than actual strangulation. She felt her metal form slipping slightly. No, don't go back now! You'll die! she screamed in her head.

"This head lies about you!" she urged the fat convict, voice audibly raspy, "I want to help you!"

As the pressure seemed to tighten further, she heard a screaming from above.

Another convict? I'm done for, she thought, and now tried to peel back the brute's fingers.
After Ally recalled her story, she listened to her friends' responses. Each of them had their own tale to tell regarding the excessive crime rate in the city. Marcus compared the crime of the smoothie snatcher to a GTA Heist, which made her chuckle. His story then moved onto his recently passed father, and his struggle with running the shop. "I'm sorry, Marcus," she said, just like she had said a million times before, and placed a comforting hand on his shoulder. It wasn't hard to see he was holding back tears as he consumed all of the fries. She gave his shoulder a squeeze, as she now felt like an idiot for bringing the smoothie up. He had lost so much more in the recent violence, what right did she have to complain over a smoothie?

Ally then listened to Trip's story about a purse snatcher, and slowly shook her head. A lot of the crimes mentioned were petty, but they still affected people. Ally laughed at Trip's attempt to make his cup of coffee. "You call that a shot? Watch this!" The young woman picked up her own empty cup and threw it at the trash. It would've made it, if the trash can was three feet to the left. She quickly popped up from her chair and threw her cup away, teasingly nudging Trip to the side as they crossed paths.

As Ally walked back, she caught Alvina's story. She scoffed, hearing the pointless action of breaking into a car just to steal twenty bucks. "I'm just glad they didn't take your car." Many people knew that if their cars were stolen in this city, there would be little chance in ever getting it back.

After Alvina's story, Alan pulled up information on crime rates and revealed them to the group. Although they highly dissatisfied Ally, she wasn't surprised at all by the results. Everyone here was a victim of crime in one way or another. Actually, the woman was more surprised that it didn't raise any higher than that. Then again, the city had many years to expand and grow.

At Alan's mention of a lost life, Ally looked down at her hands and thought again of Marcus's dad. She couldn't even imagine her father passing and they didn't even live together. What exactly was Marcus feeling?

"I hope it doesn't either," Ally agreed with Aimee. She looked at her friends and thought about losing one of them. The thought nearly brought tears to her eyes. The young woman looked away and thought on Alan's words.

"Someone needs to punish them," Ally said, returning her gaze to her friend's, "Or maybe not punish, so much as stop this. I wish... I wish we could have super powers or something. Then we could stop crime much better than these cops."
@Fury Panda Really awesome character! One thing, the group of friends hasn't become heroes just yet, but they will very soon. So she wouldn't be Zero just yet. You don't have to edit anything, I just wanted to make it clear. :3 You can move her to the character tab and reply IC when you're ready.


Gotta go to work, but I'll finish it off tomorrow for sure.
@Conscripts Alright, everything looks great! You can move him to the character tab and begin role-playing whenever.
@Poi Very neat character! Her costume is so cute. XD Definitely accepted!

@Slingshot @Crossfire @candlelitcraft @Poi

As for a first post, I'm not sure if I made it too clear in the intro and OOC first post, but all of our characters are good friends already, they have been for a while. Everyone is sitting at the metal table in the shopping center I mentioned in the first IC post. (Last couple paragraphs)

Basically the idea is everyone jumps in with Ally, explaining how they've been wronged by these crooks and how they're fed up with it. Everything will then take off from there. :3

Let me know if there are any questions.
"Scum like you could never kill me," Ally said, looking down at Percy with anger. She couldn't feel hatred towards him, at least maybe not yet. She looked to the demon who was now morphing it's arms into... well, the young girl wasn't exactly sure, but she didn't want to find out. Hurting Percy didn't seem to harm the demon, but his anger did transfer to the momster. Damn, she thought, watching it transform Hopefully it'll become more reckless, easier to dodge.

Ally was preoccupied with watching the creature transform, so much so that she jumped a bit when she heard the whispers again. The whisper addressed her, and she turned to face the huge convict. He got close to her, and she prepared herself for an attack. That was when he revealed his face. A flash of fear ran through her own face- this was truthfully the last thing she expected, especially after assumingly hearing his whispers. He looked terrible, and she couldn't help but feel bad, even though she had no idea how he got them. "In sorry," she murmured to him, wishing she could heal his scars.

The convict then opened his hand and revealed the shrunken head. Because of the extreme disfiguration of his face, the shrunken head didn't scare her so much. Ally had seen a couple in the thrift stores around the city, so it wasn't as strange, but it did catch her off guard when it began talking.

Being called "delightful" was definitely a better change from the curse words of Percy, although she wasn't sure how to feel about it considering it was from someone who was also trying to kill her.

The incantations started. As quickly as they came, as quickly as they left, and Ally was sent flying through the air by a gust of wind. She flew straight back, slamming right into the concrete building about forty feet behind her. Her back and the back of her head slammed right into the building, creating small cracks and indentations. She fell on her face, and began to get up in what looked similar to a push up. As she tried to stand, her metal skin returned to flesh. The pain intensified to a level she had never felt in her life. The young woman wanted to cry, not necessarily out of pain, but in frustration. She needed to recover a bit before going back into her metal state. She moved to all fours, her arms visibly shaking with the struggle. It took her a bit of time, and a lot of effort, to get into a kneeling position and finally, she stood against the wall and faced the scarred prisoner.

"If you're going to kill me!" Ally shouted, resting against the building, "I at least want to know your names! Please give me that respect!"

Ally didn't expect them to answer, but she also didn't think this was where she was going to die. She took a deep breath, having recovered some precious energy, and returned to her titanium state. Immediately the radiating pain subsided into a slight ache as she stood straight once more. With the pain gone, she strode over to the large convict and his shrunken head.

"Please," she said, now standing right in front of them. She took another deep breath, unsure whether this was a smart idea or not, and reached up to the scarred convict, with some noticeable struggle considering their differing heights, and pushed some of his hair back, revealing more of his face. She hoped he didn't grab her wrist and snap it like a twig- she hadn't exactly forgotten the punch he landed earlier. She placed her hand on his arm, and looked down to the shrunken head, "Please tell me both of your names. I want to know the names of those trying to kill me."

At this point, she forgot about the morphing demon nearby, the hurting Percy on the ground, and the other convicts waiting through the arena to kill her. Rigbt now she was focused on the obese convict and the shrunken head.
@forums Thanks! I'll get the description soon. :3 Also I did wrestling too, and I was at 17% body fat at 132 (wish I was at 10 though XD) but I can definitely put it down if you want. Maybe it's different for women wrestlers? XD
@Crossfire Always amazing my friend. Of course you're accepted. :3 Also I love how you used Dare Devil. XD

@Conscripts That sounds pretty awesome! Can't wait to see your character!

@candlelitcraft Everything looks great! You can put her into the character tab and get your IC post in whenever you can. :3
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