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"Why are you so nervous?" Adelfa asked, though she could already guess.
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@Sola Yeah, that would be awesome!

@alexfangtalon Cool! And no worries, there's no rush in thinking up a character.

@LemonZest1337 @Blade17 Thanks guys. :3

@Everyone, I'll make the main thread in a few hours and post it here.
The testings probably happened over the span of some years, not just one specific time. So we could definitely make it work so Solomon was a young tot or something when he got tested on. Maybe he remembers and thinks they're just imagined though. His family wouldn't know that he was tested on though. They would've been told some sort of lie. Actually, he could have went to "specialists" for hearing, who turned out to be government agents and him and his family never found out.

Sorry for that rambling, just woke up. XD
The Story


Long Beach has always been known for its beach, shopping district, and overall sunny weather. Many events, such as the annual Long Beach Grand Prix, are held in this skyscraper city. It has also been known for its rampant gang activity, with new and old gangs merging and fighting, creating more trouble than the police can handle. Many people believe the police have been persuaded by money and drugs to let many of these crimes slip right under their noses.

Citizens have been getting fed up with the treatments from these thugs, but their Neighborhood Watch programs do nothing but put targets on people just wanting to help out. This is where our characters come into play. Our characters are all victims of crimes done by these gangsters and thieves. One day, while all of them are relaxing and hanging out together, one mentions a crime that happened to them recently. They all describe petty, or big, crimes that have been enacted upon them. The group decides that they've had enough of this and vow to protect the streets of Long Beach at whatever costs!

The problem is...

They don't have super powers.


Our heroes will dawn masks and capes, attempting to protect the city with whatever weapons, skills, or knowledge they can bring to the table. As they patrol the big city and stop crimes, they learn what it means to become a hero, how to balance their own moral with each others, and how the sacrifices can take a toll on their physical and emotional lives.

The Plot


The beginning of the plot will establish our characters as a close group of friends (ages 18-22, all out of high school) who have all been affected by the rising crime rate. It can be as simple as having a wallet pick-pocketed, to going Batman and having their parents killed right in front of them, to having their car stolen! They all express their anger and after discussion, come to the conclusion that because half of the police don't do much and the other half are crooked, they have to take manners into their own hands and become the force of good the city needs!

Their first patrol will have them clumsily through the streets at 1 AM in little more than exercise clothes and masks. They will encounter their first crime and learn that being vigilantes is not a joke!

If Interested...


If you're interested please let me know with a loose idea for a character! We will only need about 4-5 people total, at least to start out. Thanks for reading this, and I hope to write with you soon!
@Crossfire @King Tai

Alright! So I've kind of came up with a loose plot to go onto next.

Now they're aware that there are multiple people with powers, they need to decide what to do next. This will lead to them forming a team (even if Reaper disagrees, he'll be keeping an eye on them anyway, so, y'know, part of the team XD) and going on the hunt to see where these people are coming from.

I don't remember how Solomon got his powers, but Crossfire and I were discussing how Reaper and Agent are connected through their backstories, even if they don't realize it. We discussed this a long time ago, so the ideas might be a bit off or missing details, so please bear with me. XD

Reaper was in the military at one point, some sort of secret service team I think, and he ended up working with Agent's father who was on the same team. At this time, the government was up to some pretty sneaky experimentation, giving people who signed up for the program experimental drugs. They mainly targeted the children of the secret teams, pretty much with the idea that these children will have a high sense of nationalism and wouldn't go against the government. Anyway, Reaper and Agent's father- I'll just call him Estrada to keep it simple- were close partners. Eventually, while Agent was much too young to remember, there was a very dangerous mission and Estrada ended up dying. I don't think we came up with any details to this. I believe Reaper continued in the military until his wife and daughter were killed by a scumbag. We could develop on this and say that Reaper's daughter was experimented on as well, without his knowledge of course, and maybe the government knew she was going to fail, and so they sent someone to kill her. His wife ended up defending their daughter and she was killed as well. This led Reaper to retire from the military and to lead his life as a vigilante. Once Agent finally reveals her identity to Reaper, he'll recognize the name and possibly some of the facial features as Estrada's daughter. Reaper begins to make connections, figuring out the government's program for creating super powered people. This might lead all of them onto this huge adventure to find the government's secret operations and stuff. I'm not exactly sure, we'll figure it out. XD

Anyway, I know Solomon doesn't have an exact spot in this, but he can always have a parent/guardian as a military member which leads to him getting his powers. But he can always have something different too leading to his development of powers.

What do you guys think?
@King Tai @Crossfire

Flame continued to consume more oxygen as she intensified her burst of flame. She hoped that the heat of the fire would somehow evaporate the glass off of her face. This didn't work very well, only making the liquid gas more viscous and watery. The intense fire managed to melt the bullets, but not as well as before. The bullets hit her, immediately leaving welts on her skin. They had lost their power and toughness after going through the fire. This let some of the fire around Flame fall, but not completely.

Agent barely managed to catch Solomon's signal. She quickly covered her ears as best as she could. Then he unleashed his shout.

At the sonic sound, Flame dropped to her knees and covered her ears. The sound was unbearable. In a desperate attempt to drown out the shout, Flame began to scream. Nothing seemed to stop the pain from Solomon's shout. Finally, the fire completely fell. This was their chance! Agent exploded into an awkward sprint, her ears still covered by her hands. Within feet of the villain, she sprung, uncovering her ears and tackling Flame. It was quite terrible seeing the glass harden over the woman's face, to see the welts swell up on her skin, after all, wasn't Flame still human?

Flame did not struggle against the superhuman at all. Actually, she wasn't conscious at all. Agent did her best to get some of the glass away from Flame's vital points- her eyes, nose, and mouth- but some pieces hardened too quickly. Picking up the villain, Agent stood and walked over to both Reaper and Solomon. As if on cue, sirens could be heard from blocks away, at least by Solomon.
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