Arcarius

Star Wars: Coruscant Undercity

@TheUnknowable Ok, I can see what you mean, I'll Rethink and Rewrite.

Star Wars: Coruscant Undercity

Jensaarai Cyrix Vulcan

Name: Cyrix 'Cvett' Vulcan

Appearance: Standing at 6'0" and is well fit, Cyrix's peach colored skin is lighter then most Kel Dor, He has silver colored eyes, and wears Jensaarai saber armor beneath his cloak but over his normal attire.


Race: Kel Dor

Age: 20

Skills: Dual Saber Combat, Piloting (Fighters/Frigates), repair (Minor ship parts and droids), computers.

Force powers: Farseeing, Memory Walk (Learned from Master), Telekinetic, Jump, Push, Heal (Learned from Master).

Personality: Cyrix is well mannered, polite and well spoken, and lives by the Jensaarai code. Even at times when his is unnervingly quiet he is calm and does not let things deter him from his goal easily. Even in anger he tries to mean well and put his voice before conflict. Even with the lose of his master, he still tried to find the good things in the universe.

Bio: Born and raised on the Kel Dor home world of Dorin, it was noted that Cyrix was born with silver eyes and a had a unique tune to the force, before the Jedi or Sith could get to him, he was approached by a female Twi'lek who spoke to his parents for a few days before taking him off world to the planet of Dantooine where she trained him as a Jensaarai in secret, at the age of 15 he received his armor after a trial by fire, shortly after he skills would be put to the test when he and his master where out on a mission on the planet Jedha where they we're ambushed by a pair of Dark Jedi that was with a few bounty hunters while they where looking for a holocron, there his master parishes and he was forced to flee. Over the past few years he was constantly pursued by the Dark Jedi he had encountered on Jedha.

Eventually he managed to eliminate the one remaining Dark Jedi before finally escaping them, now with no master he follows his own way and lets the force guide him where he needs to go, as of recent he has been pulled towards Coruscant and is determined to find out why.

Equipment: One lightsaber (Silver), one double bladed lightsaber (Taken from his fallen Master)(Silver), All Temperature Cloak (Black), R2 droid (Black and white) Jensaarai body armor (blue), Backpack (Inside: 4 Holocrons, 2 Sith, 2 Jedi, Spare Clothes, a handful of credits, a small case with a few saber crystals, extra mask parts and air containers.) Modified Delta-7 interceptor (Black and Cobalt Blue) Dual Blaster Pistol's.

Edited and Redone

Star Wars Force Training RP?

I'm interested.

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@thetank1 That's fine, If you ever wish to join back you can.

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@Crimson Raven Ok thank you for the quick response.

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@Claw2k11@Crimson Raven Are you two still interested in this RP?

@thetank1 How is your Character Sheet coming, have any more questions?

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@iHxzardx UAV Mechs could work as well, Mechs are cool either way

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So I was thinking, Why not make the world by each players perspective, but the teams would be set out in a certain direction. so the map could be like a circle or an oval-ish land mass

Red's could be on the north part of the continent, Blue south, Green west, Yellows east and the grey's in the middle which would connect them. But at the same time there would be borders between them as well, like Red could be connected to Green and Yellow but not Blue. Ect.

Just an Idea.

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@thetank1

1. It would be wise to slow down when making you character, this does not need to be rushed, for example the Co-GM has been working on his for three days now, detail while it is not needed, I do encourage it, this RP is going to have detail in it, three to four paragraphs if possible, Not to be mean but what I see here is you character is nothing more than your average infantry unit, there is nothing that makes them stick out from the norm, he would be at a major loss if going up against either of the other two characters if it where to happen, and most of all it seems very rushed. This should not look like a throw-away character.

2. A picture for your character is not needed, but is encouraged, if you don't want a picture then describe your character, tell me what he looks like, I would like to visualize him if I could.

If you need help ask, I'm sure anyone here would help you if you asked.

Character Denied.

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@thetank1

That will work, and you can be anything humanoid, just because the only two characters we have up are Anthropomorphic dose not mean you have to be one of you don't want to, you could be a Standalone AI if you wished.