Artymis

The New Shinigami: A Bleach RP

@ArtymisI changed the pictures, and the age but what exactly are you looking for in terms of strengths, and weaknesses? I also couldn't find proper katana designs so I made do with what I could by using other swords from different animes.

@vancexentan

Swords are fine if that's what you had in mind for their design. The strengths and weaknesses I'm looking for enhanced details. If you'd like an example to what I'm looking for exactly, something akin to those in Loki's sheet would be optimal. That's kind of what I had in mind for that section if that's fine for you.

The New Shinigami: A Bleach RP

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@vancexentan

Your character is good, but as you said you have limited knowledge of bleach so there is a few things that you're going to need to clean up.

- As a whole, Shinigami can live for a long time. However, 740 is bordering on one of the oldest characters in the entire soul society never mind the group, so you should probably shorten the age to the 50-300 range if possible.
- The picture you are using for your Zanpakuto is from the show itself, so I'd like if you change that if possible.
- I'd like to see a few more details in the abilities/weaknesses section. Whilst you've stated what is actually the case for your character, I'd like some more intricacies and expansion in this section.

You did a good job though, just fix those details up and you'll be alright to jump in.

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@BladeSS4

There's little explicitly wrong with this character and I'm fond of some of the design points although I'd like to see more detail as a whole(it's entirely optional if you want to add it). However, there's a few things that are going to need fixing from a balancing of power perspective

- Change your Zanpakuto's ability to "absorb reishi that is below or equal to the spiritual pressure of the user." The design is slightly overpowered even with this quirk, but if you were able to simply destroy captain's kido based zanpakuto at this stage in the rp then it'd push it a little far.
- In abilities, add more detail to how your character can do. Just give some intricacies and more flavour to it so that we can get a better feel of what your character is capable/incapable of.

Once you fix these up you'll be good to go.

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@Loki Odinson

I love this character. It's exceptionally well made and I'm pleased with the level of thought and detail that's been put in. However, because I'm myself, I'm just going to nitpick something just because it's bothering me.

- I'd like you to change Master of Shunpo to something else. Shunpo is an exceptionally difficult thing to sort of learn within the Bleach universe and to say that you are a master implies that you've perfected something, and given that the roleplay is centred around young/new blood, it leaves you little room for development in this aspect. A word like adept would be better suited in this case I feel.
- You may wanna lower the age a little bit. 344 is slightly old for a rookie Shinigami. Maybe 50 years or so, but this is up to you.

Change that for me and you are accepted(sorry for being annoying!)

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@KawaiiKyouko

Oddly enough, this is the same scenario as Loki's character. The design and everything is great and I enjoy the overall theme. However, there are a few things I'm going to nitpick just because they annoy me.
- I don't like the term master this early. Use adept, a master would imply that the ability is perfect and they have nothing to improve on. Also, tone down the usage of kido. Perhaps 50 without incantation and 60 with incantation and specify what kido she can use just so that we know what she could pull out, given even the kido masters are not capable users of every single kido.
- The age is a bit high for a young shinigami. Unless your character spent like 350 years in the Rukon district, tone it down to the 50-300 range.

I do love your character however and I feel it's a fairly balanced concept. Fix those two things and you're all good with me.

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Reviews are done, I'm sorry for the nitpicking everyone but I'm kind of obsessive over the smaller details so I just had to point them out so please be patient with me on this!

If you fix what I asked you to, just pm me to let you know here or on discord and I'll verify it so you can post it in the character sheet thread.

Also would like to let you know that Syn is going to co-gm. He's a cool guy so just ask him about anything if I'm not online.

The New Shinigami: A Bleach RP

I'll review these sheets once I'm home from college today.

The New Shinigami: A Bleach RP

@vancexentan @Kaesus @Queentze @KawaiiKyouko @Loki Odinson @Jynmi88 @Suku @BladeSS4 @RumikoOhara

This is for those that expressed interest in the check, just doing it twice to make sure that the ping goes through.

Bleach RP interest check(haven't decided on a name yet)

roleplayerguild.com/topics/169560-the…

TO THOSE OF YOU SUBSCRIBED TO THE THREAD, YOU SHOULD GET A PING. IF NOT, IM GONNA START THAT GROUP PING

@Loki Odinson @Jynmi88 @Suku @BladeSS4 @RumikoOhara @vancexentan @Kaesus @Queentze @KawaiiKyouko

The New Shinigami: A Bleach RP

_{C H A R A C T E R L I S T}

Wallace Hakuno - Squad 7

Araragi Mia - Squad 7

Baili - Squad 7

Bakuto Hokori - Squad 7

Hato - Squad 7

Kizu Keigan - Squad 7

Rumi Moriko - Squad 7

Naoko Yamakazi - Squad 7

Juliet Chosha - Squad 7

Sayuri Takashi - Squad 7

_{OFFICERS OF THE 13 COURT GUARD SQUADS}

Squad 1 - ?

Squad 2 - ?

Squad 3 - ?

Squad 4 - ?

Squad 5 - ?

Squad 6 - ?

Squad 7 -

Captain Isao Hidaka

_{I S A O H I D A K A / Z A N P A K U T O N A M E}

Name: Isao Hidaka, Captain of Squad 7

Gender: Male

Age: Visible Age: 26 / Current Age: 360

Appearance:

Personality:
If one of his squad members were to describe Isao, it would be stern but patient. He's a no-nonsense type of guy who holds a very adult, businesslike mentality to his every day life and to his duties as a Shinigami. He falls very heavily into the lawful neutral scale of things and sees everything as more of a judge rather than a person, often hanging his true feelings out to dry in order to try and uphold the justice, whether that is right or wrong. Despite this, he still holds a pretty stern code of honour regarding combat despite being a captain and he upholds this at all times, regardless of his opponent.

In some sense, Isao is perceived as kind of like a robot, but this is far from the truth. Whilst he puts the rules of the soul society above everything else in his life, he is still a real person and this is notable when he has had a good drink. Alcohol tends to release his true thoughts and feelings and the rigid, cold attitude that he usually holds dissipates. He becomes much friendlier and far more open about his feelings/thoughts towards other people, regardless of how it happens. His filter is essentially removed after he has consumed a particular amount of alcohol.

Isao also opens up around his younger relatives. His younger siblings/cousins/nephews/nieces are all precious people to him and he can often be found playing games with them to keep them entertained. This carries over beyond just family to older children, as he has grown a soft spot as he has aged. Beyond this, Isao has very strong feelings. He strongly dislikes those who are lazy and do not seek to improve, and tends to favour hard workers.

Biography: ?(will be added onto once the first arc starts)

Former Life: Isao was a samurai in feudal japan. He suffered fatal injuries in a battle where most of his comrades died. Prior to the death, he was a bit of a philanthropist for his time and had a fairly vast family.

【Zanpakutō】

Ryōken

Zanpakutō Name: Ryōken(Hound)

Zanpakutō Spirit
Zanpakutō Personality Ryōken's personality is definitely moreso on the true side of Isao. Whilst maintaing a less than appealing outer image, it is definitely more on the playful side and enjoys a variety of children's games such as hide and seek and other such things.

However, it is more sinister than Isao in the sense that it definitely revels in combat and enjoys crushing and grinding the opponent down with superior strength and ability. It definitely plays more of a sidekick role to Isao however and acts more like a pet toward him than a fellow being like the other zanpakuto, being loyal to a fault in that instance.
Zanpakutō Inner World
The Wilds
Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance
Zanpakuto
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【Shikai】
Release Command Funsai suru, Ryōken! (Crush them to dust!)

Appearance: Appearance is as seen in the appearance picture with a slightly smaller blade.

Abilities Ryoken is a primarily combat based Zanpakuto. It is not kido based and as a result does not hold many special abilities. However, it does hold unique properties that makes it effective in it's first release. Firstly, Ryoken posses a moving blade. It cannot be seen by the human eye as it is constantly vibrating and grinding together thousands of times per second allowing for much easier cutting. The second property is that the blade slowly turns whatever it touches to dust as long as it maintains contact due to the first property. This is lessened with Zanpakuto but still present.
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Abilities:

- Master Swordsman
- Kido Expert
- Shunpo Expert

Weaknesses: ?

Squad 8 - ?

Squad 9 - ?

Squad 10 - ?

Squad 11 - ?

Squad 12 - ?

Squad 13 - ?

The New Shinigami: A Bleach RP

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Hundreds of years have passed in the Soul Society since the capture of Aizen Sosuke. Whilst many sacrifices were made in order to destroy one of the greatest threats that the Soul Society had ever saw, nobody has forgotten the history. The memory of those who had stopped him and his subordinates is freshly written into the history books and remembered well by the Shinigami of the new generation. Names of former captains were passed down as legends, awe inspiring godlike figures after their departure from the Soul Society.

Much of what was lost has been rebuilt thanks to their great efforts, and no longer are there the gaping holes left by the vast conflicts caused by Aizen himself. However, little of what once was remains, and nearly everyone who had previously existed in the realm of the society is no longer present. New faces have taken over what once was, and that includes you. Whether you are fresh from the Shin'ō Academy, or have been a seat for a year or two, the fact of the matter remains that you are a relative newbie in regards to those in the Seireitei.

How your life starts as a Shinigami is up to you to an extent. Whether you try to ascend the ranks, or remain fiercely loyal to your squad in spite of a promotion is for the most part up to you.

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Shinigami or Soul Reapers as they are otherwise known are the regulators of souls and in some sense, the keepers of balance between the world of the living and the Soul Society. Their primary role is to purify hollows(corrupted souls) and help ensure the safe passing of non-corrupted souls to the Soul Society. In essence, their primary role is the governance of soul, and balancing the total number between the two worlds in order to maintain order.

Primarily, this is done through the usage of a tool known as a Zanpakuto which roughly translates to Soul Cutting Sword. Given by the name,
they are the weaponry of the Shinigami that are capable of combating spiritual beings as in Hollows or other Shinigami. Another fun fact is that no two Zanpakuto are the same and every Shinigami carries one. Even those who do not possess the spiritual pressure in order to know the name/release their sword, they still are unique to that said Shinigami. They are reflections of the Shinigami's power and soul, and the name gives the weapon the ability to empower the Soul Reaper that wields it. More often than not, they have distinct appearances and often have personalities that are similar to that of the owner.

It is important to note that Zanpakuto have two releases, Shikai and Bankai. Shikai is the first release of the sword and requires the Shinigami to learn the name of their Zanpakuto. Upon learning the name and communicating and harmonizing with their Zanpakuto, the sword effectively is able to attain the first release, which is activated by a release command. This changes the shape of the blade and more often than not gives it special abilities. The release commands can vary, from a word to a short poem. Bankai however, is vastly different. It is the final form of a Zanpakuto and is obtained once the user is able to materialize and subjugate their swords spirit. Very few attain this state.

Zanpakuto

Unreleased Zanpakuto


Released Zanpakuto of former Shinigami Renji Abarai

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I suppose I owe you all an apology for making you wait this long, and I will give it to you. I've had an exceptionally busy time over the holidays, but never the less, I apologize. Now that that's out of the way, I suppose we can get this show on the road.
I'm going to leave this welcome for new people to come and create sheets for a while, but once we reach a certain level of people I'll eventually cut off character creation until we stabilise.

Some things to cover however given the lack of clarity within my interest check. This world will be taking place many years after the original arc of Aizen Sosuke although the human world has not moved a hair. You do not need to know much about the series from the show as many of your questions can be answered by the fanmade wiki, but if you have any that they do not cover, then you can ask me. This RP will primarily be based in one squadron up until a certain point where people reach the level that they will be promoted to the rank of seated officers and thus start deferring from the squad if they so wish. We'll be running an original plot that'll slowly unveil itself made by yours truly.

On a final note, I'm going to need a co-gm. If you'd like to volunteer for this herculean task, just hit me up with a PM. Unfortunately, I have no friends otherwise I'd burden them with the task but given the situation I'm going to need a teeny bit of help managing things.

Below is the character sheet that will be used for this RP. If you are interested, please fill it out below and post it for me to review later this upcoming week. Just remember: a quality character sheet makes for a better RP so take your time with it and don't rush concepts if you don't really want to create them. RP what you want to RP.

Character Sheet

_{C H A R A C T E R N A M E / Z A N P A K U T O N A M E}

Name: (Doesn’t have to be Japanese)

Gender: Male or Female.

Age: (Include your visible age as well for clarity, given how long Shinigami live.

Appearance: (include a description if you want. It gives a better image of your character if your picture isn’t exactly what you had in mind. Height and weight would be nice to have as well)

Personality: (Be descriptive. Include your characters likes/dislikes/tendencies/traits/hobbies. Nothing is off limits here. What makes your character themselves?)

Biography: (At least 2-3 paragraphs minimum with enough detail. This should be about your characters life in the soul society/how they became a Shinigami)

Former Life: (I don’t expect a full backstory if you don’t wish to write one, but a short summary of what your character was before entering the soul society would be interesting to hear/valuable to the story)

【Zanpakutō】

Name

Zanpakutō Name:

Zanpakutō Spirit
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Zanpakutō Personality
Zanpakutō Inner World
[url=http://][/url]
Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance
[url=http://][/url]
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【Shikai】
Release Command
Appearance
[url=http://][/url]
Abilities
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Abilities: (Give us a rundown. Is your character an expert swordsman, a kido master, a master of Shunpo. Try to leave some room for development.)

Weaknesses: (Everyone has their demons. What are they lacking ability in, what is the thing holding them back?)

Theme: (I guess you can throw this in here if you want. It's optional but it gives flavor.)

Other: (Anything that my unnecessarily long sheet didn’t cover? Write it here!)

Also, heres a link to the discord so you can communicate easier: discord.gg/PYdEA23

Bleach RP interest check(haven't decided on a name yet)

Are we going to start this soon?@Artymis

@vancexentan

I'm going to look to get the ooc up tomorrow. I've had quite a busy time the past week with new years and all but we'll be starting after the oocs out and people make their characters. Sorry for the wait.

The Walking Dead: Belgium

I return from the dead to bestow upon @Artymis the FN Five-Seven with its' five rounds remaining. Have fun.



_{(Poi said this was okay)}

@Grim

What have I done to earn this great privellege, my lord Pepe?

♦ A New Era ♦ - A My Hero Academia RP

Ezra Jasekade

Ezra listened to what Jett had to say. It made sense. The kid wasn't dumb, he definitely had insightful knowledge. However, he didn't like the approach. Whilst he didn't exactly plan to go in and let them get worn out, Ezra had other plans. He'd speak up about this once everyone was finished, but he would listen for now and be intrigued. It turned out that Jett didn't have his quirk, which was a major blow. Whilst he did go toe for toe with Ezra(even though he wasn't using his quirk either), it still wasn't optimal. It put them at a disadvantage, and that wasn't ideal for them in an exercise like this which required multiple parts working at high efficiency to secure a victory.

It was around this part that his mother came. Ezra did all he could to hold himself back from laughter. That was, until another woman locked eyes with him. A beautiful woman, albeit older than him accompanying the mother of Jett. He had no idea who she was, but she could tell that they did not share blood regardless of how close they were. For a brief instant, it felt as if he connected with her and he could tell that they were one of the same as he gave a slight nod of recognition before moving on. He forgot, that it was almost time for Tomoe's antics.

She'd already had an entire sequence with the others before he could blink. He had no idea what was wrong with this girl, but she had lifted Jett's shirt up and put her head against his stomach. He put his hand over his face not out of embarrassment but out of disbelief that this much comedy could surround him every day. It was quite a spectacle as she went along in typical Tomoe fashion, doing things her own way. He kind of respected it and at the same time was weirded out, but it didn't matter. What mattered was that she was about to fall asleep right before a match. Realising quickly that this might be a good thing for them, decided to fulfil her request.

"Make sure you use your quirk once the thing starts. I don't want a 3 person team, Tomoe." he spoke as he picked her up as if she was a baby. She was exceptionally light, and weighed less than a few of his younger relatives. It wouldn't be an issue in the short term, but even he had a limit to as much extra weight he could carry around and it would definitely test his stamina.

"Alright, I doubt Tomoe was going to listen anyway, but I partially agree with Jett's plan. Letting themselvves wear each other out is a good idea, but we should incorporate some strategy into this. I don't exactly know about Tomoe, but us 3 are all pretty fast, even Jett without his quirk is up there in speed. What we could do is hit and run attacks, and use some of our equipment to get people out the way and trap em'. Sitting there idly won't do, since we need to have momentum in this." he spoke as he began walking out with Isshin. He awaited his teammates.