Those shall be fixed and explained, some of which right now.
His hair is naturally black and died white, will put into sheet.
the machete isn't in the sock it's tied on the outside of the sock (so it's attached to his leg) - could have explained this better, being edited into the sheet
And your right about the ability/weakness stuff, the stingers is a good idea, and i'll take away the exoskeleton and keep the wings.
For his motives,wants are things I wanted to keep in the IC, especially why he's been looking for and attacking people who run with The Pure. But I will add a personality.
Also only honey bee's lose their stinger when attacking something.
I don't want to sound snarky,rude or anything.thank you for pointing these out to me.
I spent like twenty minutes looking for the misaligned tag and after like 3 hours working on this (two twenty minute breaks were applied) I couldn't find it and I just REALLY wanted to get this out there before someone claimed this idea.
Murphy looks like someone you would see enjoying themselves in the middle of a mosh pit, He's 5'11 though he doesn't look it because he slouches often. His build is small but slightly muscular, though still considered 'soft'. His pale white skin is contrasted by his piercing green eyes which are always in an unintentional scowl, his white and black hair is usually up in a horizontal curved wave with a white stripe in it, the surrounding hair is white. Many scars cover his body, from small sting marks too long gashes, the most noticeable one is a deep three clawed gash stretching from the bottom of his right eye to his jaw line.
Attire:
Murphy's attire is always repetitive, usually the same sleeveless red sweater over a black undershirt, Baggy but tied to the waist sweatpants that are pulled up to the mid ankle and tied, his dirty and damaged white sneakers with the tongues sticking out and high black socks and his combat knife in its sheath tied to the outside of those socks.
Personality
Innate & Outward Personality:
Murphy is quiet, critical and judging on the inside, on the outside, he still is still a little quiet in unfamiliar areas or people but less critical, usually spouting jokes and having a good time anywhere he is when around friends sometimes being called "life of the party". Unless he's in a fight or on the job, while still having that whip like wit, he is a little more serious, he will be one hundred percent focused on the job at hand, completing/winning it at all costs. Murphy is also a bit of a daredevil taking any challenges that come his way. The words "watch me" usually escape his lips and is ready to do the impossible, which is dangerous, sometimes he ignores his own limits and most of the time his rush to get things done get's people hurt, sometimes innocent people.That being said Murphy doesn't have much room in his mind or heart for strangers.If there was a civilian casualty he would just accept it as a required loss. A friend or colleague on the other hand will be heavy in his mind for a long while, usually blaming himself, taking revenge on the person, place, thing or organization responsible until they are wiped out completely.
Hobbies/Interests:
Fighting,helping out the family,spending money and killing people of The Pure
Skills/Talents:
Growing up on the street Murphy has developed many Talents such as Street fighting,Lock-picking.But he also has been taught many things by his handler and longtime friend Joey Nabob,things like hacking,how to pickpocket and how to swindle money out of someone by just talking to them.
Prized Possession:
His red sleeveless Hoodie with a white kangaroo pouch pocket and a plus sign on the back. Don't even look at it wrong.
Quote(s):
"Have you met my loyal subjects?. No? well then let me call my Honey's over."
History/Bio:
Murphy was born into poverty, his mother a stripper and his father a construction worker,they both did the best they could for little Murph, the only problem was they were both heavily into drugs. They tried to quit so many times, but life always seemed to pull them under again. But one day Murphy and family were taking a walk through the park when some Crowns attacked, they were caught in the crossfire, both of his parents died and so would have Murphy, if it wasn't for his little friends, they came from all directions, hundreds of the little bastards swarming the wannabe gangsters climbing in and out of every one of their openings, killing them from the inside out. And once they were finished they all flew back to the hive and began taking it apart, some pushing the bullet wound out of his chest and patching it with what ever the hive was made out of. Keeping him alive until an ambulance showed up. He made a full recovery, that's when I took him in, he was about fourteen at the time when this happened, the next few years with me were quiet, except for the few bees that would be either in or around my place. Murphy would constantly come home with many bee stings I would ask him how he keeps getting stung. He would say "the Queens don't know how to let go, and force their loyalists on me". Once he started going to high-school I taught him how to fight, I wasn't going to let any Limp-dick kid mess with Murphy, but I couldn't be around all the time so He needed to defend himself. One day he got into a fight with some powered mother fucker, huge guy who could grow claws out of his nails. I was going to pick him up from school when I saw them fighting in the parking lot. Murphy was losing and the big guy slashed him across his face. I got out and shot the guy as many times as my pistol magazine would let me. Then the Bee's came in and I didn't need to do much else. After that he was kicked out of school and tried as an adult. He was sent to jail for manslaughter. When he got out though, he had changed. He seemed more quiet but it didn't last long. Anyway after this I brought him into the family and taught him the essentials,lock picking,hacking and how to make a living. And recently he's been taking an interest in taking down Pure boys, seeking them out and making them human hives,while trying to decrease there push on the city. If I didn't know any better i'd say it was personal. But then again, he doesn't like to talk about his time in the hole, so who knows?.
Relationships
Family: Joey Nabob - Caretaker/Handler
Dynamics:
Joey Nabob | Great | Good Magic Family | "Him and the family are the only things I Got right now. I love'em" |
Abilities
Power Class:Super-System,Beastial/Other
Power:
Anthophila Manipulation:When Murphy is around any type of Bee a pheromone is released subconsciously which causes any surrounding Bee's to become confused about who is the one they are to protect, and within a minute or so they decide that Murphy is the Queen. At this point Murphy has connected with any bee(s) on a hive mind frequency with this he can tell them all or just one what to do, though even when they are connected they are like sleeper agents, only coming when they are called and leaving when Murphy wants them too. They can do many things from recon and scouting to attacking a single or group of targets. While unconscious/sleeping if any bee's are still connected he can see through their eyes as they Patrol through the city.
Stinger Protrusion: Murphy can produce two stingers from his palms, if removed, they grow back, like a lizards tail.
Wing manifestation: Murphy can grow bee wings that extend from his inner shoulder blades to the bottom of his bum.
Limits:
His wings are just like any other limb on his body which get tired after prolonged use. The bees are just Bees. They cannot do complicated tasks on their own, if Murphy wanted them to bring something to them he would need to walk them through it. Murphy is limited when fighting someone one on one, his stingers and flying are the only things that he has when attacking, without his bees he can be quite easy to take down.
Weaknesses/Drawbacks:
Having too many Bee's connected could cause him to overload, Queens could cancel out the liberation ability Via Pheromones.His stingers,while not barbed like a honey bee's are still in danger of being pulled out.If he were to stab a hard or flexible surface they can indeed break/pop out causing a new open wound.
Other:
Sample Post:
I love it when they run. Murphy thought as he flew over two Pure boys who decided to start trouble in Las Palamas. Murphy landed a few feet in-front of them, their faces stricken with fear,anger and hatred "hey there limp dicks!" he called down the ally, Murphy's voice echoing across the brick buildings that surrounded them. It was around lunch time so the strip wasn't as active."You don't know who your messing with,Freak!" one of them called, pulling a gun. Murphy quickly flew to him, grabbing it and twisting the mans arm, taking it and throwing it down.The second man tried to stab him with a knife he pulled from his jacket, Murphy met the blade with his right hand stinger as loud buzzing noise coming from the other end of the alleyway.A swarm of Leaf cutter bee's flew towards them "just in time".with a knife he pulled from his jacket, Murphy ducked under the blade and with his right hand stinger stabbed the man in his lower stomach area.A loud buzzing noise coming from the other end of the alleyway just as Murphy landed his attack, A swarm of Leaf cutter bee's flew towards them "just in time".
Murphy jumped back as the two men looked to see what was all the commotion behind them. The Bee's surrounded them and started to attack, stinging them everywhere they could, many of them go into the Pure boys' nose and mouth, stinging their insides. They screamed and cried as the bee's stung and bit through their skin and rendered their flesh to something resembling Swiss cheese. As ordered specifically, they left the bodies, the two of them crying and grunting in pain as Murphy walked over and grabbed a cell phone sticking out of the back pocket of one's jeans.The one who owned the cellphone grabbed Murphy by the sweater weakly, Murphy sent more bee's after him, they resumed their work, leaving the ears untouched "don't get blood on my sweater". Murphy said as he lifted off the ground, flying towards where he was supposed to meet Joey for Lunch. The bee's broke off and went about their usual pollinating and patrolling duties.
Josh sighed out of some medical related fear "alright better get this over with right?, when do I take this MRI?" he asked cautiously. He saw Michelle look at him, he turned to her and stuck his tongue out at her playfully, trying to hide his nervousness "after this we will head to my place, you can use my car while yours get repaired okay?" he said smiling, "and don't you say no".
Now in the Doctors office josh grunted as he leaned against the cabnit infront of him "well Doc, my shoulder aching , my knee is in pain and I think I might have a slight concossion, happens when you fall off the school roof and onto the roof of someones car right?" he chuckled nervously. He never liked doctors, they always kinda creeped him out, but he would have to get this over with as quickly as possible " i think my shoulder is broken, really hurts" he said again, probably too fast for the doctor to understand let alone treat.
He glanced at Michelle for a second, then back to the Doctor "could you uh...do your thing?, with as little needles as possible?" he joked smiling. The Doctor raised an eyebrow to him.
Maybe not the best day ever but one of the best. He wonderd what his mother was doing right now. Probably cleaning or making dinner, I should call her. Josh reached into his pocket to find his cell phone smashed the screen mostly cracks and tiny peices of glass falling from it "great,' he tossed it into the garbage on the other side of the room, it landing with a thud. Reminding him of his fall onto the car.