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"Creepy? The beautiful gems make it a bit lovely if you ask me. Unless of course you're just easily spooked from venturing inside small caverns. The other end is what I'm truly worried about..." Feyora said while clenching on to her Zanpakuto in a shivering like manner. The closer to the exit, the more memories of the past started to pop up in her head.

- Past -

"Go!!!! Get out while you still can!!! It's too late for me and this has nothing to do with you!!!" Heope shouted as blood ran down his right eye. Many dead Hollows laid before him and the one he was speaking with more coming from a distance. "Until you breathe your last breath then I won't be leaving anywhere!!!! So stop trying to get me to leave and help me kill these bastards!!!" Feyora gave Heope a stern look which made him sigh before focusing on the crowds of Hollows coming their way.

"Stubborn dumbass, you just wasted the only window of oppurtunity just to back up someone who's running on fumes. Levan's dead, Asture's screwed us while you choose to be the valiant hero in under futile circumstances. Well get ready and see you on the road that lies ahead." Accepting the end, his voice calmed as the beast was in arms reach...

- Returning to present time -

Feyora shaked of the thoughts as the exit was finally within reach. "This is it, I hope your prepared..." She said calmly as the shaking in her hands finally ceased. Past the exit revealed a large passage leading to a mountain but it was in the shape of a rocky tongue. The ominous vibe had intensified upon leaving the cave, indicating that the ominous was near by. The mountain itself was in the shape of a beast and apparently whoever shaped it must've had a very promising talent in that area. Reiatsu could be felt being expelled from someone on the very top of the mountain's peak. Be it Hollow or Shinigami was hard to tell from the current distance.

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Jangel13 said
You talk to much, when we're done you owe me" he said with a small smile patting her back twice before he went inside the cave first "suffering strengthen my resolve" he said as his sword changed into his spear walking inside and waiting for the Hallows to show up Angelo knew his talents would be put to the best of use in the narrow space

"I don't talk too much, you just talk too little and no I don't. That doesn't mean I won't help if you ask nicel-a Shikai!!?" Feyora questioned with a puzzled look as the man's weapon changed form. Her eyes couldn't help but stare in marvel before redirecting her attention back to the cave. She proceeded to unsheathe her Zanpakuto, following in after him with caution afterwards. "They shouldn't have any in here but things change with time." Feyora whispered so that her voice wouldn't be carried around every inch of the cave. Inside, the place held many colorful gems and stones along with some type of ancient language that can occasionally be seen written on the walls. A light on the far end of the could cave could be seen the closer one was to it but a dark and ominous vibe could be felt coming from the light.

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AbigailTenshi said
Well it probably is best that you revise them xD And maybe have that move an illusion type so that the target looks at the area and see it as the part being ripped out, the are around the fake wound become light weighted as if they're bleeding out and they feel the pain. That way the part isn't removed but the feeling of removal is there xD That seems more fair as it would be difficult to prevent small stains from staining the body or cloths. Or you could have it so that the stain burns constantly, maybe the red stain turns a Milton colour as it gives the target a constant burn xP Removal of limbs is just a little OP for me f(^_^') But I think Expllo should have a look, he knows what Kurisa would want.I didn't notice XD And Naaaa, my characters aren't as creative as yours xD

Hiezogawa doesn't deal with illusions, only spatial manipulation and fire so not possible. Your second has given me a thought but I'm gonna turn whatever move it becomes into a Bankai move so that I have more time to think. I believe that Expllo is right about it being over powered for a Shikai technique doing that means I have to find Shikai replacements. And yeah they are when one char's Shikai form changes depending on the card it chooses or something like that( XD They.don't look as creative as mine only because you're looking at them through your eyes ^_^

Expllo said
*Jumps in*Alright I'm lazy, tired, and Kat desperate so I'll try to keep it short.I wouldn't accept the move, yeah I know Axel isn't one to go all OP, but yeah the move is a bit OP.....Especially if the stain is in a certain area. As well there isn't really an restrictions on him using a move like that, or backfire to using it.And personally I think a move like this would be more acceptable in Bankai....Erasing things from existence instantly and completely? I think that's a bit too OP, especially for only a Shikai O.o now if it was just ripping that area then it'd be fine, or something other than erasing it from existence.So pretty much what I'm saying is that it'd be more....Acceptable in Bankai than just a Shikai, so yeah O.o

Yes it will be more acceptable in Bankai and delaying it will allow me to revise it to complete perfection. I actually wanted to use this Shikai move so that'll grant me the space needed to add it. With that said, I'm gonna get to work and thank you guys & gals for the assistance ^_^

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I will be back tomorrow!!!! And when I get back then I will assimilate you all!!! Naw, happy late ass Fourth Of July and I'll check any other post so I can respond to them when able. Until then ze Axel will remain in complete darkness till the moment of reckoning is upon you. In seriousness, hope you guys enjoyed your day and see ya later... *Vanishes*

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AbigailTenshi said
I'm at work and I'm trying not to laugh at thi XD But it's so hard not to XDDDDD LOL!!!

Well I do aim to please

AbigailTenshi said
LMAO!! XDWell, I've got to say, with that stain move, does it rip out chucks so that the area begins bleeding profusely? Or does it just disappear? But I'd say he's accepted, however we'll have an eye on him f(^_^') It's only that move that I'm abit iffy about but if you play fair then it'll be all good ^_^ We trust you to not make your characters OP, and personally I actually really like your characters over some others ^_^ They're creative xP

It's pretty much a blend of both. The area isn't ripped but erased from existence and since blood circulation is severed within that portion, then blood will continue to bleed out as usual. And when it comes to rping, I always try to play as fair as possible. Also, I'm thinking of revising the move so I prefer to wait on having him accepted. It looks like it'll work better as a projectile rather than an active skill. I'll have the reviser version probably finished sometime after the day Americans celebrate their independence. Well of course they're creative XD That's one of the major things I aim for when creating them. Your chars are pretty creative as well so don't forget about them ^_^

Yes I am so tired so if it sounds like a lazy post then you know why XD

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Zane620 said
Thats right >.> hes good again XD

Yay!!! Thanks bit-I mean Zaney XD

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"It's alrigh-wait it's not alright!!! I'm not going to just forgive your impoliteness so easily. If you actually want my forgiveness you have to be more nicer and less gloomy. And I'm in no way indebted to you for choosing to come along. That was your choice which wasn't influenced in no way by me. I just offered since it look liked it would take your mind off of drinking." Feyora halted in front of a cave lit by gems. Judging by the sounds it echoed that could be heard from this distance, displayed how spacious it actually was. "There's no turning back until it's done after this point so..." She turned to Angelo before speaking once more. "Are you ready? It's going to get dangerous from this point so you'll need to remove any extra doubts out your mind or just head back."

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Zane620 said
never mind hes denied.

*Coughs twice* I was joking!! You know that it's perfectly spelled, I was xust trying to get ya that's all. Oops, it seems that I'm the one that can't spell properly so bad Axel XD

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Zane620 said
Bitch I said youa sdd that and it would be good enough for me XD

Oh I didn't know that the "a" in add could be replaced with an s but alright XD

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Added, so good to go, clear to launch, car hot-wire successful, decapitation approved ok with that being done, is he officially approved? And ignore the scratched out nonsense, I just couldn't get myself to remove such good phrases XD