hatakekuro said
I remember. ^^ It's great to see you again.

Zane620 said
Well the backstory is okay, but I believe we dont want any canon character being mentioned, and we know who this Black spikey hair guy and pink haired child is XD. And having close to Zaraki's spiritual energy is pushing it a bit, this is the man that has been a Captain and fought many people with Bankai's, and beat them with sealed state. Other than that everything looks fine to me.

AbigailTenshi said
Wooo! ^_^ Yay! It's good to see you again too :) I hope everything is well with you

hatakekuro said
SHOOSSSSSSKEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

Zane620 said
Damn right ya will

Phobos said
How have you been?^.^Also, I'll reply soon Zane xD

AbigailTenshi said
Well it probably is best that you revise them xD And maybe have that move an illusion type so that the target looks at the area and see it as the part being ripped out, the are around the fake wound become light weighted as if they're bleeding out and they feel the pain. That way the part isn't removed but the feeling of removal is there xD That seems more fair as it would be difficult to prevent small stains from staining the body or cloths. Or you could have it so that the stain burns constantly, maybe the red stain turns a Milton colour as it gives the target a constant burn xP Removal of limbs is just a little OP for me f(^_^') But I think Expllo should have a look, he knows what Kurisa would want.I didn't notice XD And Naaaa, my characters aren't as creative as yours xD

Expllo said
*Jumps in*Alright I'm lazy, tired, and Kat desperate so I'll try to keep it short.I wouldn't accept the move, yeah I know Axel isn't one to go all OP, but yeah the move is a bit OP.....Especially if the stain is in a certain area. As well there isn't really an restrictions on him using a move like that, or backfire to using it.And personally I think a move like this would be more acceptable in Bankai....Erasing things from existence instantly and completely? I think that's a bit too OP, especially for only a Shikai O.o now if it was just ripping that area then it'd be fine, or something other than erasing it from existence.So pretty much what I'm saying is that it'd be more....Acceptable in Bankai than just a Shikai, so yeah O.o

hatakekuro said
I've been pretty busy with summer school and helping my mom garden. ^^ How are you?

Phobos said
Same here, been busy with work/school/rl shit, but good to see you back ^.^

Zane620 said
Irl shit being not getting laid over Monopoly and having some angry as shit sex

Phobos said
Nah we stopped playing monopoly, that shit can ruin marriages xD we just skip that part now

Phobos said
Same here, been busy with work/school/rl shit, but good to see you back ^.^