@Val, I am quite opposed to the wall of texts, but still have expectations in content and grammar so I decided Advanced. My normal level is High-Casual. However, you're right. That is the usual view of an Advanced RPer.
@Wonder, I noticed. No worries, we do what we can and it will be easier to get content when we get into the field. Dialog scenes are always difficult.
@Leo, there is. I'm trying to design the game to allow people to come and go fairly easily.
Azena Member
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STATUS: I'm more like a synthetic death machine alien boy cat with minor delusional worship of sophisticated stories of young murder and violent love...Issues. Lot's of issues. 8 yrs ago
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I'm more like a synthetic death machine alien boy cat with minor delusional worship of sophisticated stories of young murder and violent love...Issues. Lot's of issues.
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If I was a deadly sin, it'd be sarcasm.
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First day back in the Guild and I'm sick -.- Keep me entertained people :p
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'Ello folks! The name is Azena (Ah-zae-nuh). I'm a 26 year old man in EST (GMT -5, I believe). I've been role playing for over 10 years. I took a break from the Guild when I found a tabletop group to join with. I used the chance to improve my role playing and take on new concepts. Happy to report, I learned absolutely nothing! Nah, just kidding. I opened up and took on characters of different genders, orientations, and personalities. I've missed the friends I made here and am happy to be back and make some new ones as I try to track down my old ones.
I like the cooperation and connection on 1x1 RPs. Group just tend to move too fast for my frequency on this site. I at least try anything besides a modern slice of life game. I don't need to role play real life, I get more than enough of it off the computer. Tolkien Fantasy and Space Sci-Fi are sure hits with me, but I've also enjoyed apocalyptic, westerns, and modern magic.
I like the cooperation and connection on 1x1 RPs. Group just tend to move too fast for my frequency on this site. I at least try anything besides a modern slice of life game. I don't need to role play real life, I get more than enough of it off the computer. Tolkien Fantasy and Space Sci-Fi are sure hits with me, but I've also enjoyed apocalyptic, westerns, and modern magic.
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Valeric said
Awfully short posts for advanced... :P As long as Azena's not complaining. I'm having a little difficulty getting the writing juices flowing.
Nope. It's Advanced because of the level of detail for the RP I'm trying to put in it and the focus on character building that I want. A couple of good paragraphs is all I ask.
Not entirely a bad thing. Like my sig says, I'm really busy right now. It should be over next week, but right now I'm in the middle of finals and am moving tomorrow.
"So many questions. That's good. We need an inquisitive group." Dr. Frank spoke to Van Pelt directly, but didn't do much to hide the comments. Van Pelt looked over the group and motioned for the doctor to take his seat. Frank happily sat and pulled up his plate. He began to dig in as Van Pelt sat next to him. The Colonel didn't touch the food, but kept looking around at the group. Jade could swear he looked a little disappointed. It may not have been his call to bring them to island.
"As many of you know, Dr. Frank was the brilliant mind that perfected the Time Travel Equation. His machines allowed us to return to the past, but what you don't know is that the technology that derived from the formula has been stolen." Pause for dramatic effect. Jade shifted a little in her seat. Looking around the table, it didn't take a time travel engineer to figure out why they were here. The skillsets they had were diverse enough that they could only be a task force.
"Very unfortunate, but we'll get them back. The machines make marks in the time line. They're fairly easy to detect, but -"
"But, you need a few fools dumb enough to jump back in time and grab them for you." Jade proposed. Van Pelt looked to her and nodded. He wasn't going to argue it. Essentially, that was the idea. They're weren't the first team to join the operation and they probably wouldn't be the last. "Great, my field of study is ancient civilizations and I mostly excavate ruins. So where the hell are these people going that you need me."
"There are two dozen machines missing. They are being used to travel all over time and their purpose isn't known until they get there."
"As many of you know, Dr. Frank was the brilliant mind that perfected the Time Travel Equation. His machines allowed us to return to the past, but what you don't know is that the technology that derived from the formula has been stolen." Pause for dramatic effect. Jade shifted a little in her seat. Looking around the table, it didn't take a time travel engineer to figure out why they were here. The skillsets they had were diverse enough that they could only be a task force.
"Very unfortunate, but we'll get them back. The machines make marks in the time line. They're fairly easy to detect, but -"
"But, you need a few fools dumb enough to jump back in time and grab them for you." Jade proposed. Van Pelt looked to her and nodded. He wasn't going to argue it. Essentially, that was the idea. They're weren't the first team to join the operation and they probably wouldn't be the last. "Great, my field of study is ancient civilizations and I mostly excavate ruins. So where the hell are these people going that you need me."
"There are two dozen machines missing. They are being used to travel all over time and their purpose isn't known until they get there."
Not intentionally. I'm in the middle of finals and moving tomorrow morning. I should be able to get a post up this weekend. I apologize for the delay. I'm going to through up a short post to keep things moving for you all until then.
wonderlandalli said
You can, Eulalie is going to be mad at having to go to a servant's room in a brothel to have clothes ironed or her hair done, but at least she'll learn to dress herself.
Hahaha, oh the things she will see in the wee hours of a brothel xD
Yep lol and like I said, your maid can't actually join the guild so she'll have to leave or maybe take Red's spot as one of the brothel maids.
Off to a good start guys, I can all ready tell I'm going to like Devin. I like the devil may care attitude he seems to have so far. Definitely a fun scene of him on the upper floor there.
Again, Jolly, don't be afraid to get into it and treat it more as a narrative than a table top action. I know you got the creativity in you for it, that's why I left you the open door to show Eulalie's maid around the brothel. Will give you that freedom to write without interruption as I assume Eulalie and Devin will be following Ellie into the back.
I have a few things in mind, but I'm also open to suggestions for any creatures you're craving to hunt. With in reason for our skills. Taking on a Wendigo or something may be above your training for now.
EDIT: I threw up a few of the contracts to populate the Contract Board. Guild Supplies will come up next time I get a chance.
Off to a good start guys, I can all ready tell I'm going to like Devin. I like the devil may care attitude he seems to have so far. Definitely a fun scene of him on the upper floor there.
Again, Jolly, don't be afraid to get into it and treat it more as a narrative than a table top action. I know you got the creativity in you for it, that's why I left you the open door to show Eulalie's maid around the brothel. Will give you that freedom to write without interruption as I assume Eulalie and Devin will be following Ellie into the back.
I have a few things in mind, but I'm also open to suggestions for any creatures you're craving to hunt. With in reason for our skills. Taking on a Wendigo or something may be above your training for now.
EDIT: I threw up a few of the contracts to populate the Contract Board. Guild Supplies will come up next time I get a chance.
Ellie dropped her jaw at the sight before her. She had expected the young Eulalie, but not the half a house she brought with her. She quickly gathered that the extra girl was some kind of servant. She glanced at Snow, who merely sighed and looked to the floor. Non-guild members were not allowed in the hall. Surely, Snow would have explained this to Eulalie, her companion couldn't come with her.
"Um...Eulalie, dear, our group is very exclusive. I don't have the heart to turn away your friend, but she'll will have to live and work here in the brothel, then. She is not allowed in the back rooms with us." Ellie frowned. She really didn't want to be the bearer of bad news. If it was her call, she would gladly welcome the young servant, but as it was there were rules to follow. Only guild members could be allowed access to the hall and Paul knew exactly who was a member and who was not. He'd keep the girl out, even if it meant he had to drag her back out into the rain.
"Well, I see you'll have your hands full. I have to talk to Belle about something. Good luck." Snow was so coy as she spoke. As much as she hated having to go out and collect the new recruits that Merlin found, she hated babysitting them even more. She was ecstatic when Merlin appointed Ellie as the official trainer. It meant Snow could focus on her guild duties and stop dragging snot-nosed brats through the mud. She laughed at how literal the statement was. They've dealt with nobility before, but this girl took the cake on prudish. Much longer in the carriage and Snow might have left her in the rain somewhere. She caught the manly voice from up top and turned to look up.
"For the love of...put some clothes on Devin and get down here! Seems like your training is finally paying off."
"Oh, yeah. I almost forgot. Red and Devin are to come back today. Well, I'm going to take our newest member to her room and you two can meet us in the tavern." Ellie smiled at Red and Devin. She loved getting to welcome members officially to the guild. Many of the higher ranking members believe that you aren't truly part of the Kingdom Guild until you strike out on your first hunt. She looked back at Eulalie. Usually new recruits had a few months to adjust, but Merlin insisted she get the girl out in the field ASAP. Proper introductions would have to wait. "Let's go see your room. You can leave the bags. I'll have Paul bring them back later. I'm sure Red or Snow can find accommodations for your friend."
"Oh yeah, because I got nothing better to do. Red can show the servant around." Snow marched back around the counter and disappeared into the Guild Hall. Ellie gave an awkward smile to all of them and led Eulalie back into the hall.
"Um...Eulalie, dear, our group is very exclusive. I don't have the heart to turn away your friend, but she'll will have to live and work here in the brothel, then. She is not allowed in the back rooms with us." Ellie frowned. She really didn't want to be the bearer of bad news. If it was her call, she would gladly welcome the young servant, but as it was there were rules to follow. Only guild members could be allowed access to the hall and Paul knew exactly who was a member and who was not. He'd keep the girl out, even if it meant he had to drag her back out into the rain.
"Well, I see you'll have your hands full. I have to talk to Belle about something. Good luck." Snow was so coy as she spoke. As much as she hated having to go out and collect the new recruits that Merlin found, she hated babysitting them even more. She was ecstatic when Merlin appointed Ellie as the official trainer. It meant Snow could focus on her guild duties and stop dragging snot-nosed brats through the mud. She laughed at how literal the statement was. They've dealt with nobility before, but this girl took the cake on prudish. Much longer in the carriage and Snow might have left her in the rain somewhere. She caught the manly voice from up top and turned to look up.
"For the love of...put some clothes on Devin and get down here! Seems like your training is finally paying off."
"Oh, yeah. I almost forgot. Red and Devin are to come back today. Well, I'm going to take our newest member to her room and you two can meet us in the tavern." Ellie smiled at Red and Devin. She loved getting to welcome members officially to the guild. Many of the higher ranking members believe that you aren't truly part of the Kingdom Guild until you strike out on your first hunt. She looked back at Eulalie. Usually new recruits had a few months to adjust, but Merlin insisted she get the girl out in the field ASAP. Proper introductions would have to wait. "Let's go see your room. You can leave the bags. I'll have Paul bring them back later. I'm sure Red or Snow can find accommodations for your friend."
"Oh yeah, because I got nothing better to do. Red can show the servant around." Snow marched back around the counter and disappeared into the Guild Hall. Ellie gave an awkward smile to all of them and led Eulalie back into the hall.
Damn it, Jim! Anywho, that's better. Never be afraid to add more, even if it feel repetitive to what other players said. We want your characters perspective. Like I would have started Red cleaning one of the nasty rooms until she heard that familiar call from Snow that gets Red's blood boiling. Her and Snow may not be on good terms. Then she marches in and plays the dutiful maid and notices the new recruit that drips on her carpets. You'll get the hang of it. Just like table top, it takes some getting used to first.
Standard expectation is at least two solid paragraphs. The first should be 4 to 5 sentences reacting to what's going on. This is where you'll acknowledge any statements made to you, remark about an action, or just make observations. These can be done with dialog, inner monologue, or just narrative description. Think like we're all writing a fan-fic, taking turns from our characters' perspective.
The second paragraph should contribute to the posting. Your character will usually say or do something at this time that people can react to. Obviously, the amount of paragraphs and what you are actually saying/doing in them varies based on what is going on in the RP and what the other players may have posted. If we're in the middle of a fight or nobody acknowledged you while we stand around and BS, your posts may be shorter than if you are taking the lead on an investigation or just doing something alone, left to your thoughts.
The golden rule is never control another player's character. This includes conversation and action. You can suggest they do something, either with dialog or descriptive narrative, and continue writing. However, you should try to phrase the rest of your post to be a little open-ended and not assume they agree when they may do something else. Because of this, most players generally wrap up their posts with the said suggestion or engaging dialog with another player. Unlike table top, we don't meet at scheduled times. Instead, players are encouraged to check at least once a day and make a post.
I hope that cleared it enough to help you get your first post. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask here or text me. You can also check this link, which may have some other useful information for you.
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/4958/posts/ooc
EDIT: Hahahah xD other golden rule, never do one liners! Even if it's all you can think of, you B.S. like I said, here on advanced their is the expectation of at least two thought out paragraphs. My bad for not clearing that up, I have a lot to teach you about my neck of the woods lol
EDIT2: It is player preference. If it is still clear what is being said, you can write out the accent, but some accents can get choppy and difficult to read so most find it safer to just write in English and the accent is assumed.
The second paragraph should contribute to the posting. Your character will usually say or do something at this time that people can react to. Obviously, the amount of paragraphs and what you are actually saying/doing in them varies based on what is going on in the RP and what the other players may have posted. If we're in the middle of a fight or nobody acknowledged you while we stand around and BS, your posts may be shorter than if you are taking the lead on an investigation or just doing something alone, left to your thoughts.
The golden rule is never control another player's character. This includes conversation and action. You can suggest they do something, either with dialog or descriptive narrative, and continue writing. However, you should try to phrase the rest of your post to be a little open-ended and not assume they agree when they may do something else. Because of this, most players generally wrap up their posts with the said suggestion or engaging dialog with another player. Unlike table top, we don't meet at scheduled times. Instead, players are encouraged to check at least once a day and make a post.
I hope that cleared it enough to help you get your first post. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask here or text me. You can also check this link, which may have some other useful information for you.
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/4958/posts/ooc
EDIT: Hahahah xD other golden rule, never do one liners! Even if it's all you can think of, you B.S. like I said, here on advanced their is the expectation of at least two thought out paragraphs. My bad for not clearing that up, I have a lot to teach you about my neck of the woods lol
EDIT2: It is player preference. If it is still clear what is being said, you can write out the accent, but some accents can get choppy and difficult to read so most find it safer to just write in English and the accent is assumed.
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