Blu

Naruto: Hikage no Ha (日陰の葉 / Leaves in the Shade)

Do you know how when you touch Dry Ice it's so cold it freezes your skin and really hurts? Maybe Chen's taijutsu style could revolve around that sort of effect instead. Like the Hyuuga Gentle Fist but freezing the skin instead of sealing off Chakra. Also, I just PMed you.

@floodtalon

There's still no drawback to it. With the Gentle Fist, the user injects chakra into each strike to attack the enemy's chakra points. At the very least, Chen should be required to maintain the effect with chakra which will mean he'll only be able to use it for a limited time. I think that would be a fair drawback.

Naruto: Hikage no Ha (日陰の葉 / Leaves in the Shade)

@floodtalon We've reviewed the CS and determined that there's an issue with your character's kekkei genkai ability to cause frostbite and/or freeze an enemy with every hit. There's no apparent drawback to this at all; it seems like a passive ability that he can always use. It needs to be balanced in some way to make it a viable ability to have. Furthermore, you haven't PM'ed me the details of the Ice Release: Abomination of the Infinite Tundra like it mentions you would in the CS.

Persona Ø (Accepting 1 Player)

<Snipped quote by Blu>

Done.

@floodtalon

Welcome to the RP, floodtalon! We'll have to go over the details of your dungeon via PM lster :)

Oh and make sure to post your CS over to Characters.

Persona Ø (Accepting 1 Player)

@Blu

I am okay with this arrangement.

@floodtalon

Okay, then. Final changes and you're accepted: add 15 more damage to both Agi and Garu. And since he's 16, change him to a second-year student.

Persona Ø (Accepting 1 Player)

@Blu

I'm done with the changes.

@floodtalon

I'll say this as a precaution before I ask for a few more changes to the character: you'll won't be able to post immediately after being accepted. It'll be a while before your character is introduced because we'll need to go through his dungeon. I'll PM you about creating your dungeon/boss/etc. after being accepted. The next dungeon is already set so your dungeon would be after that. Are you okay with this arrangement?

Persona Ø (Accepting 1 Player)

@Blu

Yeah, I think I have an idea. How about Sephiroth?

@floodtalon

XD Alright, sure, that'll work. Tell me once you're done with all the changes.

Persona Ø (Accepting 1 Player)

Hmm. . . I understand not wanting to change it, but I feel like I lose a Persona in the end. Ya' know?

@Pyromania99

I understand. I don't want you to have to lose a Persona either. What about it @floodtalon? You mind changing the character to something else?

Persona Ø (Accepting 1 Player)

Kazuo, Dai, and Bride would soon be joined by Gruffydd who asked about their general well-being. Kazuo explained the situation of acquiring an ice pack for Bride's cheek. During their conversation, Bride revealed that he was often sick as a child and that resulted in his nervous stutter. An usual side effect for sure but it's not like Kazuo can question it since he isn't a doctor. Kazuo turned to Gruffydd and asked if he would like to join them for a trip to the Wonder Mall; additionally, he mentioned food was involved. After a bit more conversation, Dai led everyone to the mall including Gruffydd, disregarding any plans he may have for the day.

-Wonder Mall-

-BGM-

"Welcome to the Wonder Mall, ho!" At the entrance to the Wonder Mall, the group was greeted by a giant Jack Frost statue that was a few feet taller than even Kazuo and Gruffydd. Jack Frost is a popular children's character and mascot; there's even an entire amusement park dedicated to him in the nearby Hitome City. An almost child-like grin formed on Kazuo's face when he saw the animatronic statue as it brought back sweet memories of his childhood. The mall is as busy as ever with hundreds of people wandering around the place to browse its shops. Impressive; it's even bigger than the mall back in Hitome City where Kazuo is from. Dai, Bride, and Gruffydd took over and gave Kazuo a grand tour of the place. They visited the numerous shops on all floors of the mall and, along the way, they saw their classmates. Johnathan was in Cafe Fortuna enjoying coffee with a good book. He seemed blissfully unaware of them however. It's best to leave him alone.

At Tee-Party, the group looked into the window to see Ito talking to the owner of the store. Well, it looked to be more of a one-sided conversation with the owner cheerfully chattering away while Ito seemed a bit overwhelmed. Kazuo couldn't help but lightly chuckle at Ito's helplessness in that situation. A bit later, they bumped into Saito who looked like he had just gotten off work or something. Kazuo greeted the tired individual with a friendly smile. Come to think of it, doesn't Dai have something to return to him? Looking off in the distance, Kazuo thought he saw Shinku wandering around the mall as well. Looks like all of them came here today.

Naruto: Hikage no Ha (日陰の葉 / Leaves in the Shade)

@floodtalon I'll be reviewing your CS later today. Need to post in my other RP first.

Persona Ø (Accepting 1 Player)

@floodtalon Since our characters had their HP/SP upgraded, you'll need to do the same. You have an additional 70 points to add to HP/SP however you'd like. If you'd rather not change the name of your Persona, I guess I can let you keep it. Personae have changed Arcana in the past. Hermes in P2 was Fortune but it changed to Magician in P3. You okay with that, @Pyromania99?