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Oh, and as for the initial gathering, I'm thinking it will be a couple weeks into the start of the school year, and the media is abuzz with footage of an armored person fighting small groups of monsters. Many thought it was just some marketing campaign for an upcoming movie or something until the FBI started crawling all over Angel Grove and the greater Los Angeles area. The media has labeled him the Power Ranger, and then when footage of the Black Scarab host also surfaced, they dubbed him the Dark Ranger. So when my character invites your characters over to his house, they already know about the existence of these supposed super-powered individuals, but are shocked to discover their friend is the Power Ranger. Once they begin fighting as a group, the media switches the name to plural and begins referring to the original as the Red Ranger and all the others by their colors as well.

So, of course, since the FBI is crawling around, we have a strong interest in protecting our identities. Perhaps towards the climax of the first story arc, we can form some kind of agreement with the Agent in charge of the investigation and work together to thwart the Dark Ranger.
Cool! So, we have Red, Black, and Pink claimed. What colors are the rest of you thinking?
I've been away from RPing for a while now, but I've had an idea bumping around in my head that I figured I'd share and see if there was any interest. It's sort of a mixture of the suit from the new Blue Beetle movie and Power Rangers, wherein a group of seniors at Angel Grove High bond with different colored Scarabs. Beyond the references to Angel Grove and the Scarabs, this would be a completely original continuity that we develop as we write. Here's the trailer if you haven't seen it to get an idea how the suits work:



To keep the story from getting as convoluted as in my past RPs, I want to keep the initial plot fairly simple: My character spent the Summer before Senior Year visiting his archeologist father in Egypt, who had recently uncovered a hidden chamber in a tomb and unwittingly awakened a small swarm of alien robot Scarabs who had been locked away millennia ago. They used their cloaking abilities to become invisible and stow away in my character's luggage when he leaves to return to Angel Grove, and upon getting home and opening his suitcase, the Red Scarab jumps out and bonds to him. It tries to take over his body and command him to find hosts for the other Scarabs, but he is able to overpower the AI and maintain control of himself.

After learning to navigate the alien software of the suit, he is able to hack into the other Scarabs to reprogram their AI systems as well, except for the Black Scarab, which manages to escape. It later finds a host that will become the first major villain and begins breeding organic-cybernetic hybrid monsters. Knowing he needs to find willing hosts for the other Scarabs to fight off the growing armies of monsters, he invites his friends (your characters) over to his mansion and reveals the truth to them. Just then, the Black Ranger and the monsters swarm the mansion, and your characters bond with the other Scarabs to fight them off.

Feel free to pick any colors you all want, except for Red (my character) and Black (the villain). The suits all look like the Blue Beetle one in the movie, just imagine your chosen color instead of blue. The powers are similar to the movie suit as well. I'll leave it there for now, we can flesh it out more if there is interest.
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Would you be open to co-writing / co-gm? As I've said before, world building and lore are some of my favorite (and most experienced) facets of roleplaying. I'd be more than happy to help organize and consolidate ideas with you.


Thank you for the offer, but my issue lies more in communicating pages of information within only a few paragraphs rather than the worldbuilding itself. When it's just me writing one of my novels, I can create to my heart's content. Worldbuilding, characters, narrative flow - these are all some of my greatest literary strengths. But when it comes to communicating that to co-writers who are also actively developing the story and need to constantly remember everything I created while they are continually adding to the plot, that's where I run into issues. When it's in my own mind and my own personal notes, I can let everything get as bloated as I want and remember everything just fine, because in the part the reader actually sees, they are learning information at the same time the protagonists are. But when it's multiple people at the wheel, all that information needs to be known upfront and all at once to avoid creating plotholes and paradoxes.

I've never been a fan of co-GMing, but for the sake of getting this moving before everyone begins to lose interest, I think it's probably a good idea to hand the reigns over to you, Light. I'm gonna step away from this RP, but before I go, I'll share what I had for my characters and the info in this current re-write I was working on, and then you can salvage what you want from that for your thread.


Sorry it's taking so long, I keep writing, erasing, and then re-writing shit like: "No, damn it, that's still too much information for everyone to remember. I need to get more across with as little information as possible." I'm trying to define the school, the classes, the fundamentals of the three Side Stories and the Main Story, the magic system, the locations of importance, etc. But I keep finding myself with a wall of text comparable to a short story and realize most people are going to skim over it and it will need to be re-explained multiple times when something is posted that contradicts it.

I almost want to just make the Academy much smaller for only a small group of apprentices who are studying under a few mentors. Just have it be something similar to the Xavier Institute, place it in the Cascade Mountains of Oregon, and have the students take classes in the attic and go on field trips to various realms across the Mortal Planes. They can still fight in the Battlemancer League, which we can just say is like Pokemon battles but between teams of Magi, and some of the apprentices can still be part of secret dark arts lessons. If we go this route, then I can scrap the walls of text and get this shit moving faster. Otherwise, I am beginning to feel like the cycle of writing, erasing, and re-writing will never end, lol.
And if you're curious, I made the title in GIMP. Here's a screenshot of my desktop, but since the image is so huge, I'm just gonna link it: https://i.imgur.com/IRPIova.png
And here is the logo for Volume I as it stands now. May change it later.

EDIT: There was a little drippage of color in the image that was annoying the hell out of me so I removed it and reuploaded, LOL.







OLD IMAGE WITH DRIPPAGE

Just finished the map, figured I'd share it before heading to bed:

Okay, the visiting relatives left today, I should have the place to myself tomorrow (my sister and brother-in-law do live with me, but they'll both be at work all day), so hoping to get some uninterrupted work in and have the main thread up within the next day or so. I'm also using a blank map of Old Sharlayan act as the layout of the Academy and surrounding area. And I changed it from Feywood Valley to Feywood Island, surrounded by the Endless Sea. Now, instead of the forest looping back on itself, it's the sea. I'm also having the community on the main island - Feywood Village - be the headquarters of the Commonwealth and the location of the biggest Battlemancer Arena. I figure, since we're saying Qrowdell is basically one of the most prestigious schools in the Mortal Planes where everyone is super OP, it only makes sense that is also where the Commonwealth and Battlemancer League would be headquartered at XD.
When it comes to being from a plane/world other than Earth, we can just make up our own shit more or less, right?


Yeah, think of it like a multiverse. Each Mortal Plane is like it's own universe existing in the same space as other universes but at different vibrational frequencies. So races, culture, level of technology, if there are multiple planets accessible on that plane, what those environments are like, etc. are all in your hands. We don't need to set a predefined amount of planes - we'll just say there are "a lot," lol. At least several dozen.

For instance, one of my characters will be based on Ian Lightfoot from Onward, and he comes from a plane that has lots of magical creature running around, but magic itself is fairly rare there, so him going to Qrowdell is a huge deal, especially to his older brother, who thinks it's the coolest thing ever that they now have a Magi in the family.
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