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Strange World

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@Balthazar007@Airalin@rechonq

Camilla fell through the door, expecting the worst but met with strangeness instead. Three figures stood inside, two men and Abby. She stared for a moment at each of them. Where the men there to help her and Abby get back to their home? Were they soldiers? Taking a moment to think clearly she realized they were wearing the same kind of clothes as Abby and probably from the future. The idea was strange, but more logical than the latter.

Before she could say anything a voice cut through the room, cold, and static. It had no ody, meaning it must be someone trapped in the wall. The man was very calm for being trapped in the wall. "Welcome," it said, directed at nobody, "I am glad you have came." He didn't sound glad, "By following the red girl, you have chosen to not be complacent. You have shown the curiosity needed to discover the truth about this world. But your journey has just began. The world outside the city you have arrived is nowhere as forgiving."

"wait, what was the first part?" Camilla asked, her words hard to decipher underneath the cold clarity of the recording.

"Beyond this room lies a series of trials that will test your resolve and harden your heart," it continued, "I assure you that your life will never be in danger, due to the miraculous healing powers of this land. But that is all I can guarantee. If you are ready to face the truth, please step forward. Otherwise, turn back now."

"wait, but what about you?" She asked just as his voice ended and the bright door opened. "What do we do?" She questioned helplessly.

Hogwarts; A new story

If your character is on the quidditch team please say their name and team position, I'm trying to update the characters roaster :0!

@TheHangedMan
Yup go ahead

Hogwarts; A new story

Alrighty I'm back :D!!
BTW any changes made to characters are pretty much fine (especially considering that everyone had sucked at potions)

@Always
The writing is all good so don't worry about that :>
The coloring is still a thing, you have to choose a color other than white, After words that are capitalized you need to go down a line. For year you need to choose one, You can be either cause she's 17. if you wan her being younger than most choose 7th year, if you want her older chose 6th. :>
Being in Slytherin is fine, It's actually easier for me if everyone is grouped up
Also if it's not to much trouble to choose one particular spell to excel at, I think there's a list online somewhere.
All in all it just needs a little cleaning up, otherwise it's good

@TheHangedMan
(the coloring is flipped, if you can fix that that'd be great)
Xolotles are great, I love the patronus,
Maybe chose a different pet, The crowned eagle is native to south America in addition to being endangered so maybe chose a different non-endangered eagle. The white tailed eagle might be a better choice ;>
so it's pretty much good just a few things

@Heathen
Flawless :0c
Go ahead and move him over.

@Ceta de Cloyes
The coloring is flipped, and it needs to be centered.
A description of the wands physical appearance would be nice Otherwise looks great
You can fix those things and move him over :>

@jetipster
lol it seems like hufflepuff has all the gays
I mean as long as personality/backstory is different from the others nothing is stopping you from adding one more into the mix ;>

Hogwarts; A new story

Sorry at everyone who is waiting for character sheet approval, I had a busy day. I'll get to them tomorrow, for now I need sleep :3c

Real quick though @Always@Heathen@TheHangedMan
Check the coloring of the app to make sure it lines up with the coloring of the example, your character has to have a color other than white. I'll read them tomorrow.

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@RumikoOhara
She looks good, the section headers need to be white and the other words colored(see example) the thing you did with the formatting is okay but needs centered.
I won't be able to read over anything until tomorrow but you can still move her over once those things are fixed :>

Hogwarts; A new story

@josephb
Yup looks great

Hogwarts; A new story

@josephb
The picture is fine
A few not picky things; he needs a middle name; some of the words should be white(see example), there should be a line between "in-depth information" and "appearance",
Other than that he looks good, fix those things and you can move him over to the characters tab.

Hogwarts; A new story

@Draconequis
Let's wait and see how many people we get, then we can decide if we'll do more than one character or not

@Always
At the bottom of the opening post there's a character sheet, do that one. It has more information than the last one. Also this rp is a bit different so you may want to read over the whole opening post :>

Hogwarts; A new story

@Always
You have to update it using the new character sheet though ;>

Hogwarts; A new story

@josephb
I can't wait to see what you come up with!