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8 yrs ago
Current The hidden benefit of wearing 8 rings total? They double as a pair of brass knuckles in case you get into a fight.
8 yrs ago
Just as we would turn around and condemn or laugh at our ancestors for their barbarism, our descendants will do the same.
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8 yrs ago
I'm happy with participating in a single RP - Something tells me I'm the only one?
8 yrs ago
In Batam for a month after quitting my job. Been powering through my writing since. I guess this is where I call myself a full-time professional writer.
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I'm sorry. I don't know what's gotten into me. No matter how many times I read what you wrote I couldn't interprete it any other way and I got a bit peeved. Recently, it's as if the world hates me for graduating from university. First, a company I've been freelancing for accused me of ineptitude without evidence and then tried to cut me off and cut my payment in half (when they made their editing process a one-way street when it should be two way between all parties). Then, one of my professors basically kicked me in the teeth when I'm down (I missed an appointment we had but it was because I had a much needed epiphany and breakthrough in my FYP and I kept writing until I forgot all about it), when I'm struggling with all my deadlines which came all at once. I still have 2 more deadlines to go. And this afternoon... The least of my problems so I won't mention it.

I hope I didn't come on too strongly. I did want to present my character a bit better.
We all need a little totally-not-clementime in our life.


I'm not sure. I'm under the impression that we need more Mr.Not-Policemen and Mr.Not-Soldiers or simply a few more Misses/Missuses.

I would have thought that Valentina is different from Clementine considering:

1) She is of Russian descent, not African-Japanese.

2) She actually has a very clear character background.
a) she's very good at the arts, particularly singing/acting.
b) she has a toymaker father who was from Soviet Russia, not some nondescript father who's a zombie.
c) she used to have a family with backstories beyond being on vacation before being zombified.
d) has backstory

3) Her family/friends/guardians were all long dead, leaving her alone for the majority of her life after the end.

4) As such, she develops differently from Clementine; while Clementine gets the benefits of having adults protect her and is only darker much later down the road, Valentina gets incredibly dark incredibly early due to the lack of... everything.

5) She is mentally scarred to the point of being half-feral and half-insane. Requires years of psychiatric help, most likely.

6) She is physically scarred beyond repair, unless you could print a new, functional eyeball for her using a 3D Bioprinter and some skin. I don't see that happening.

7) Therefore, she is far more likely to be violent and unreasonable.

8) But she knows far better how to survive, perhaps a bit too much. Unlike in Clementine's case, it wouldn't be ridiculous for adults to trust her.

There, I hoped I marketed my character better. I could go on and on but there you go.
Herro!


Hi! What do you think of my idea for a character?

I'd like to add that she's not a new creation of mine. She was used in a successful zombie RP until the GM disappeared without a trace. She's pretty well received, one of my award winners, as she is a pretty unique and... interesting character.

EDIT: Basically, here she is. Holy cow! It's been a year already! That means I'd retired from roleplaying for 11 months (not that it's the first time) Anyway, the link: http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/15678-surviving-the-end-character-centric-modern-zombie-survival/ooc#post-362424

Look for Valentina Vetrov.

Needless to say, I'll be modifying the character extensively to fit this universe.
I was in no hurry to join a new RP as my deadlines are all lining up to punch me in the face, but it seems that I've made a mistake there. Do you guys still have room? Although I'm in no hurry because my character won't be part of the condo group initially. Basically, I wanted to create a feral boy character at first, but since there's gender imbalance here I'm thinking of create a feral girl character instead. Anyway, you know what I'm aiming for; basically part of the demography that's been left out: the desperate outsider and the minor, and partly the female XD.

So... Got room or is it a tight squeeze? I won't join immediately, and I'll take my time with the CS. All I know is that... That feral girl is crawling in the vents of the tower right now, knife in her mouth and SMG in hand, looking for a way in, and she might drop in on someone asleep or the kitchen, and she's willing to kill even for a scrap of meat.

Oh hi @DJAtomika, nice to see you again.
@Darkraven totally understand, sorry to see you go! If you ever feel like fantasy again feel free to return! We'll definitely fit you in. Good luck in your endeavors!


No problem. Good luck with yours!
Hi Mokley, before I go ahead and ruin your RP, I'm afraid I'm going to have to drop out of it. Somewhere along the line of my essay writing, my interest in fantasy has died. Doesn't help that the novels I'm analysing are set in India, although not a fantasy world, functions somewhat like one the way the novels are written. I've always been the nitty gritty RP type of guy, though I'm not sure if I'd even join another RP again until... Don't know when.

Someone could maybe salvage my character, or you could always use it for something. I hope you understand.
In No Hope 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Everyone would be dead if he doesn't show up ever again.
I don't know why, but I tend to avoid describing the face in cases when I don't use a picture. Sometimes I'm just afraid that I'm 'moulding' it wrong hahaha. The face is the hardest thing to describe for me.
@MokleyI need some time. I'm in the middle of a battlezone in university. I have several deadlines to complete. I'll probably work on my character sheet in what recreational time I've decided to give myself.

By the way, I don't mind if Sofre is used in the plotline. But I need at least partial control of her. Strange though, I thought that the GM, by definition, have the right to control any character? :D Just not to the point to pretty much writing a book on his own of course, no, that would be rude. XD

My last deadline is on the 21st, so I would understand if you decide to cut me loose. Best to decide before anything actually starts.
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Name: Pedre Trinketeer
Alias: Pedre the Trustsome, Pedre the Nightwatcher. (Enemies of his town would tend to call him Pedre the Butcher or Pedre the Watchful if they weren't dead)
Age: 35
Apparent Age: 40 (Responsibility, danger and their accompanying stress has taken its toll.)
Height: 1.85m (Officially one of the taller men around)
Weight: 72kg (Light for his height, but still better fed than others because of his position and contributions)
Eye Color: Grey
Hair Color: Brown with strands of grey (Due to fast aging)
Physical Identifiers: Pedre, like the rest of his kin, kith and town, is a relic from a bygone era. The way he carries himself in a socially cautious manner, the way he handles himself with discipline, and even his (mostly) ancient pattern of clothing and equipment were largely unchanged representations of what used to be.

Despite being a trinketeer, shopkeeper and craftsman on the side, he is a decorated defender of his town, a nightwatcher and townguards who protects the town from the encroaching ravagers of the outside word and the self-defeating elements of internal strife. His armour is decorated as such with emblems denoting his position and achievements. He is the lieutenant of the captain of the townguards, lifeguard (having saved many lives), trusted man and citizen-for-life. He would have been awarded a seat in the town's council, but he rejected it as he felt that he had no talent in managing a town; he felt he belonged in his trade and field.
Appearance: Tanned with hardwork in his shop's yard and in the field, scarred from his battles to keep out the forces of nature and wrinkled and greying from the toll it took from him, he used to look like an unremarkable citizen of his town in his younger years. Relatives who had not come to visit for many years would not have recognised him. Despite being something of a local hero, he did not have the stature and muscles to match unlike his peers, but he made up for it with a certain presence that transcends such physical considerations.

Equipment/Personal Possessions: Back in town, he has a shophouse and yard to his name, as well as a relatively large store of trinkets and wares of all sorts; tradeable goods. He tend to wear a set of simple vest and pants with an apron for work at the shop, a simple toga when he is out and about in town. He tends to mix and match them with his sandals and boots, whichever is more comfortable for whatever unpredictable weather nature throws at the town. When on duty as a town guardsman and nightwatcher, or when on a foray outside, he would be dressed in starch-hardened shirt and long pants, leather boots, a skull helmet, a leather vest with a layer of chainmail. If he is to embark on an expedition, he tends to carry a bag for necessities with a sleeping bag on top; this pattern for expeditions has been derisively called the 'mule' by tribesmen, who favour lighter gear. He carries a short-shafted pike (comparable to a long spear) and a short sword for backup.
Pets/Companions: Sofre, daughter of Pedre, his daughter, who is 18 and therefore of age for 4 years, has always begged to accompany him on his duties and travels. She worships her father, unlike the son, who is a bit rebellious. As such, she has been volunteering extra duties as a townsguard and nightwatchman, though her choice of weapon differs from her father, as she prefers using the bow and arrow with a short sword for backup.

Tribe/Village: The Town of Bluebanner
Titles/Occupation: Pedre's family trade is as trinketeer, shopkeeper and craftsman. He is the lieutenant of the captain of the townguards, lifeguard (having saved many lives), trusted man and citizen-for-life.
Languages Spoken: Common Tongue, Bluebanner Dialect, Several assorted tribal and town languages for trading.
Languages Written: Only the Common Tongue and Bluebanner Dialect, but only functionally. He has no taste, skill and compulsion to delve in poetry and the arts.

Opinion of the Ruse: He and his town hates the Ruse with a passion, associating them with nature and their current plight.
Opinion of Outsiders: He tends to look down on outsiders, though he tends to keep this to himself as he relies on them for part of his income. Outside, beyond the walls, however, it would be a different story, especially when lives and honour are at stake.

Hopes and Dreams: A better world for his family, one that isn't a reality filled with constant danger and strife.
Likes and Desires: His family is the centre of his life, and his town his allegiance, his extended family. He desires nothing but a wholesome life until the day he dies in bed of old age, though that is actually hard in this world.
Fears and Dislikes: The loss of his family and town, and anyone who threatens them or anything to do with them. Otherwise, he keeps his honour close, and would hate to be considered anything less than a noble man.
Secrets and Regrets: He has killed sometimes without being sure if the deaths he brought actually meant anything. He was part of an expedition to massacre a tribe that threatened the town. Children who were about to come of age and tribespeople just 14 or 15 years old were some of his victims, as they would have been of age or about to be, and therefore are threats. He had lost a child and his first love (before he is married to his wife) to the wild, not to mention some of his old and newer friends.
Personality: He is a family man, who held family and kin as far more important than the individual. Above that, he is loyal to his town and its allies. He takes his honour and reputation seriously, and would try not to stoop low even if forced to.
Religion: He and his family and town swears the Oath of Old; basically to preserve what is human and to bring to present what was past, to beat back the Ruse and the forces of nature that attempts to extinguish them. Ancient kings, queens, princes and princesses form the many deities that they worship.

Relatives: Pedre is a father of 3 children, one deceased, one 18 years of age and another 16 years. He is married to the daughter of a fellow townguardsman who is also a blacksmith. His father-in-law is long dead, however, having succumbed to disease a few years after their marriage. His father-in-law is survived by four children, who were his sibling-in-laws, 2 of whom took over the blacksmithing trade while the others tried farming. Pedre's own parents and his first love had died two decades ago just after he had come of age, which was a source of deep pain for him, balanced only by his meeting his wife and having his children.

He and his younger brother shares the trinketeering trade. As his younger brother wasn't as notable in the townguards, he tended to the business more, and hence became a better trinketeer. His younger brother is married, as almost all people are in Bluebanner, and has sired a nephew and niece to Pedre.
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