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Alright! I finally finished my boy Kite!!
Tell me what you think! I'll change or edit anything necessary @ProPro
I'll be posting today
@Demon Shinobi Well the first thing that instantly jumps out at me is that he's missing the ambition entry. Probably just a simple oversight due to how late you were working on this, but You'll need to add in whatever his dream is. Apart from that, just a little more on history detailing what he did to get caught and locked up by Krabbe, and the Kite 2.0 will be good to go!


OH SHIT!!!
lol I mean I technically have him a dream I just gotta detail it. I KNEW I was forgetting something. I also wasn't sure if I should go further into detail on later history after he left because of the original rule stuck in my mind about not talking about there becoming a pirate or stuff like that. But I can definitely add this stuff in! No worries whatsoever!!

Side note: I fell off reading the ic, but has anybody made a "are you feeling it now mr. krabs joke/reference/meme. Cause if you haven't that's a wasted opportunity and you know it lol
I had a couple changes in mind, but at the end of the day, I came back to Kite. I couldn't help it honestly. He's not the same. Somethings are, but I'm hoping i managed to change him enough so that he is better. I'd like to think he is anyway. So, without further ado,



Hopefully you guys like it. I can change it anyway I need to. He's a little thrown together, partially since I stayed up so late cause of a mess of distractions and what not lol
That's what I'm thinking would be best.
I can't wait either. But it might take a bit longer. I've needed to reread the characters and I hit a snag thinking up new ideas and now I'm no longer sure on whether I'm making a male or female which could change a number of things. REGARDLESS! I'll be done before I go to bed lol
I was gonna PM this, but why do that when I can talk here. I can likely get a character ready and up by tonight. I've been thinking up ideas for a while now, so it should be relatively easy. I won't let ya down.
It seems funny because I legit wanted to kick nobu's teeth in throughout the post lol

And shun in a cinnamon roll XD
You can clearly see the immense difference of character between nobu and shun lol
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