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4 yrs ago
Current Steampunk or Cyberpunk decisions, decisions.
5 yrs ago
I've written and published two books before my 30th birthday, I'm happy but I should have started sooner.
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5 yrs ago
I stopped RPing for nearly a year because I've been self publishing novels, but maybe I should jump back in again.
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6 yrs ago
Stan Lee was able to create superheroes on the pages for us as kids, so we could find the superheroes in ourselves as adults.
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6 yrs ago
A local hairdresser was arrested for prostitution last night. I'm shocked. I was a customer of hers for years, and I didn't even know she was a hairdresser.
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UPDATE

Going to make a local 'justice force' type collection of superheroes who have been operating in the city for the last few yeas.


I decided to delete this post because it probably comes off as salty and unproductive.


Is there a specific problem? You can PM me.


Okay your character is still very powerful but I'm willing to see how it goes and we can adjust later in the RP after I've seen her in action. I'd much prefer one turret than 3 as I want her to be more of a superhero and less of a sci-fi mercenary. A lot of her powers are geared towards shooting and destroying things which is fine, but savior of the people should have more utility as apposed to raw power. Also a fully charged shot taking down a building is super strong and will need some proper drawbacks on attacks of that level (maybe a suit shut-down & reboot).

Also I'd like to see a weakness in regards to her living battery technique, like what happens when she expels too much energy to charge something?

Being 'only human' isn't really a weakness as a few of the heroes and villains are 'only human' because they don't have superpowers.

@Bone Father

Your character is far far too strong with multiple element manipulations, further up in the thread you can see what I said about the other character submission with similar abilities. I'm afraid you'll need a different character.
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I do have another possible thought, if you'd be willing. Any forms past the base form are inaccessible for the time being, with them being unlocked and earned as time goes on. Would this be an acceptable change?


No it wouldn't. This would just be a delayed overpowered state as apposed to an immediate one.
@DocRock Edit the existing and let me know when its done.
@snek dkles

Even with these limitations, access to this many forms and this many powers is still too powerful for what I have in mind for this RP. Let me know if you have any other superhero concepts.
@Bone Father Drop a CS in the OOC
@DocRock

Yeah machine mastery and living battery is fine.

After you decide on a final image fore the suit just add detas of what the suit can do and any strength and armor benefits (keep it reasonable). And what the cannon does along with any other notes.

Atter that you should be good to go.
@sassy1085@DC The Dragon

You two still up for this?
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