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8 yrs ago
Current My entire life is a series of egg puns.
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8 yrs ago
Workin' 9 to 9... Wait, that isn't right...
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8 yrs ago
I have too many passions to be able to commit to any one of them, but even though I want to commit to one, I can't possibly choose.
8 yrs ago
Was Scorpius half-Scarran, half-Peacekeeper? Frell yes!
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Free time is less 'free', and more 'extensive but highly regulated by various external sources' time.
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@beyond visions I'm quite intrigued as to your inspirations for this new alien language: '"Ettyk Strierots! Naqu henn eaq'yhru truotyrk freidrylst the Vruewrurd! Crub henn rapruk Vruari! Mesynn ybenn gneqreahshue, stouob kaxux klan!"

"C-Clieffyhsea glicea... Knis troukkilp phoess kaxux klan. Henn freidrylst gledrom otihr syxeolka freidrylst?"'

What languages did you draw from in creating this, or is this just random garble? Either way, it's convincing.

Also that green text is intimidating - that means a significant new character... whose text colour reminds me of a certain Doctor.

@TheMadAsshatter @Atrophy I think there is no reason to not begin a collaborative post from here - I'll make a PM?

Ailbeart Rend



Wednesday, the 16th of September 2037, was of particular note to one Isaac Ford, in that it was the day that he died. It was a usual working day for Ford: he got up at the crack of dawn, synchronised his online schedule with his ocular installation, ate a bowl of chocolate-laced wheat pellets and dressed for the day. He had a couple of appointments that merely required his consultant opinion, and these he attended to from the comfort of his own home laboratory. One woman was having trouble with the configuration of her wrist installation, and another had messed with her language settings in an attempt to practise conversational Spanish in real-life situations - yet now all she heard and saw was altered into Swedish. Ford guided the first through her configuration and helped the second out of her 'misstag', and soon after his personal assistant entered the laboratory.

"Excuse me, sir, but a means of transport has arrived along with a... significant lump sum." She walked over to him with a small tablet in one hand. Upon the screen was a bank statement from the same day that raised Ford's eyebrows up to his short black fringe and swung his mouth open loosely.

"Well," he replied, putting on a thick cotton jacket, "Make an excuse for my other appointments, I suppose. And arrange accommodation for tonight - I doubt I'll survive travelling a return journey from New York to Scotland in one day."


Rend watched Owen's burgeoning outburst with curiosity. Truthfully, he and the rest of the crew barely knew each other; he had only observed short, random videos of the five others and all they knew of him was likely Internet libel or news associated with any of his businesses. Nothing personal. They hadn't even met him properly before they had built up slander, corroborated between themselves and ultimately consented to kill - or at least squabble over killing - him the first chance they got. They attacked him over some kid who died hundreds, possibly thousands of years prior - some kid who didn't have any right to survive. Just another millennial who was part of the problem that brought Earth to it's knees in the first place. And instead of greeting him with the respect due to one their elder, who had experienced more success than all of them put together, they glared and shouted and crushed his neck. He hadn't even known they were in... space. Fucking hell, space. This thought had been reoccurring minute by minute since the truth had been revealed: since humanoid creatures had stolen him from his deathbed and shown him the expanse of space as they ripped into his flesh and bone without anything even resembling anaesthesia. He had screamed, to no avail, as incomprehensible pain tormented his body, while he was kept from the sweet release by blinking buttons and sheets of metal. His breathing had diminished almost completely, and he wasn't even sure if there was any oxygen in the alien ship anyway. Five of the creatures had crowded around him, like kids doing a fucking jigsaw puzzle with his neck. Then, he could breathe. And yet more technology afflicted his existence.

Rend sucked in a breath of air, ignoring the still terrifying sensation that emanated from his lungs, and was about to spit a hate-laced rant in response to Owen's, but the young girl - Echo - began to move toward him. Their eyes locked for a second. Rend's heart then sent a shock-wave through his body as a buried memory rose to the surface. She almost looks like... She passed him, giving him a sudden feeling of worry that quelled any chance of reminiscing. He had not forgotten that there were five alien monarchs positioned around the room - one from the race that had experimented upon him, and four other, less humanoid creatures - and though he was not clear of their alligiance in regard to the present humans, he thought that Owen's fit wouldn't give the opposing argument, that Owen and Tahlia were humanity's regents, any credence. In fact, he wasn't even sure what he was supposed to be saying for the aliens to approve of him and shun the rest of the crew. He wasn't even sure if he should be working together with the crew, to save all of their lives. The human facsimile that called itself Pseudo had just woke him up a couple of nights before, and without offering any support to help him transition to being in space and living amongst aliens, had said something about treason and asked if he was humanity's king. In a state of disbelief and confusion, with a human-faced robot looming over him, Rend had said yes. Hell, I would have confessed to being the fucking Loch Ness Monster if it got that thing away from me. But as he thought about it now, why shouldn't he be king? Between the six of them, he was their king. Rend spun to face Echo just after she spoke.

"No, girl, don't go doing anything stupid now," he took a step toward her and the throne and beckoned gently, "I am your king. Now, I am your king.

"Please, hear me! These other humans are young, inexperienced, and they do not know their place. This whole event has confused them, and whatever their actions have been so far, know that those actions were unregulated, for without my regal presence they bear an excessive amount of responsibility upon themselves. You can see plainly that this man,"
he gestured at Owen, and noticed Psuedo continually translating for the various aliens, "Who purports to be king, is in reality carried away by his own ongoing falsehood. He is immature, disrespectful, and has not come to terms with the fact that there is other life in the Universe. His own outburst proves this, and his so-called queen is equally guilty of these self-serving lies. These younger humans are all self-important, having had any and all of their desires handed to them without delay - they have never experienced a true challenge, or worked for the benefit of others, without having technology or some such other aid accompany them. This is why they have chosen to lie to you, in an effort to save their own hides. Instead, I truthfully state to you that I do not know of any instance of treason on the part of humanity, but I, humanity's one and only king, would be willing to talk and negotiate with you, and I thank you for your hospitality and mercy."

As Rend concluded his speech, his gaze turned to Owen, Tahlia and Yaz, and instead of the bitter glare that he desired to give them, his eyes were instead solemn and serious. If Pseudo and the aliens had not been watching, he would have said 'I am your king' once more - but for his own reassurance or for the good of the entire crew, only he knew.
I have a post in the works. Expect it either today or tomorrow.
Greetings, once more.
There is absolutely no rush. This only dies if we make it, time is not a factor. By the end we will look back and see a story, as well-crafted as possible, not just a list of time-stamps. We are waiting on me at the moment, but I'm pretty busy with other things, things that are draining my creative energies to write a good post, and my energy in general. I'm sorry to keep you all waiting, but I have to ask for your patience - as this is quite low down in my priorities for the moment, but I am by no means intent on just giving up on my character and our story. Good things come to those who wait.
@beyond visionsThis sounds good to me. @Eru IluvatarWould you want to go with this, and if so, wanna make it a collaboration?


That would probably be best. I've got a bit of a hectic work / work experience schedule over the next few days and I'm going out today for A-Level results / celebrations, so I'll set up a TitanPad and we'll just hash it out whenever we can.
I honestly don't know why I haven't posted again yet. I've had sufficient inspiration and time (though I have had to do a great deal of preparation for University, and I've been doing summer work experience and a job). I'll read through all I have missed and post as soon as I feel it's good enough.
Nothing like a bit of 80's nostalgia in a sci-fi space-faring futuristic setting.

Ailbeart Rend



Ailbeart Rend had made a friend when he was ten years old, one Frankie Lassiter, a boy five years his senior, yet the rich children often stayed in their cliques that took little notice of age differences. Frankie was wild-eyed and red-headed, with an appetite for destruction and a rebellious nature. He was disliked by most of the preppy rich kids who had their parents watch their every move, but Ailbeart and Frankie had things in common that brought them together - such as distant parents who thought money was a substitute for affection. Frankie took Ailbeart through side-doors in cinemas and showed him raunchy women in magazines. Their personalities differed, certainly, but Ailbeart was content to experience something of a hoodlum's life, as long as he always had a quiet house and a selection of books to return to in the evening. He was never particularly invested in any of the activities they performed, but there was some films that he gained a great interest in - James Bond films. Blockbusters where villains did as they pleased and controlled veritable criminal empires, and even Bond got what he wanted - but they all did it with firepower in their hand and a keen observation over everyone else in the room. Frankie only had the '83 instalments on video - Octopussy with Roger Moore and Never Say Never Again with Sean Connery. Ailbeart and Frankie would watch those films over and over, and the former gained a great affection for the commanding presence Bond or the villains took when they had a gun in their hand. Frankie got him a handgun, the Walther P5 - the same gun that was used prominently in both of the '83 films - for his birthday that year. It was one of Ailbeart's most prized possessions. Frankie Lassiter died in 1990 in a car accident, only sixteen years old - it was said that he was too short to reach the pedals and brake in time. But Ailbeart held on to that Walther P5. He held on to it tight.

This bunker or holding that they were being kept in was excessively small. Rend was used to grand, open spaces, entire rooms devoted to a single function - yet it seemed only a couple of corridors were needed to connect each room to each other, and each of the rooms were cramped with several different machines and screens with varying purposes. One would think Cryonautics would invest a little more towards the comfort of their project members. Feels like we're living in a damned futuristic caravan. Well, I'll make sure to get out of this hellhole - first chance I get. He had been stalking the metallic corridors, keeping away from the sound of voices and waiting for the cryotank storage area to be empty. His clothes - clean, pressed trousers, a rudimentary buttoned shirt and one of his old suit jackets - had first felt like garments composed of ice against his exposed body, but beads of sweat, formed from the warm, distasteful air and the hours of sneaking around had quickly changed that.

Earlier, he had waited outside one of the entrances to the cryotank room, one knee on the floor, being as quiet as he could be. It wasn't a practised skill of his, subterfuge. He was more likely to enter a room after a fanfare than to do so unnoticed. Still, the circumstance advised subtlety, at least for now. This was different than any challenge Ailbeart had ever faced before. His personality didn't take to it, but there were just five other people in this bunker: one whom he had already seen was unstable, another who had watched him like a hawk in their time together, one who was so involved with technology that he had no idea what to expect... This was the future, and until they could get back to the surface of the planet, he had to play it careful, gain allies where he could and be wary of all. He had shifted his weight onto his other knee, grunting audibly, when the unsettling young doctor's voice arose from within the cryotank room. Ailbeart held his breath and shuffled back slowly away from the window into the room. The woman who was already in there he was aware of, but she seemed invested in one of her machine friends and had been flirting with it for several minutes, from what Rend could deduce. The doctor was immediately unpredictable, though, and there was always the chance that a camera had Rend in its sights at every moment and the doctor was aware of him. What was his name...? Benjamin? No, Benji, that's the one, aye. The young man rambled on in trepidation and the girl seldom replied, or rather he did give her a chance to. Just listening to Benji speak was a task in itself, for he stuttered and the dynamics in his voice changed suddenly and often - his tone brought the ringing back into Rend's conscious mind, a subtle droning that swallowed his train of thought and made his nose and mouth twitch. He abandoned his task, rising to his feet slowly and tip-toeing back down the hallway. He could return later, and hopefully Benji would have departed.

Ailbeart had taken temporary solace in a bathroom further down the corridor. He had fumbled with the door until it had set itself to 'private' and a locking mechanism had made a sound in confirmation. The utilities in the room hadn't been spared from a technological overhaul either, unfortunately. Seems you can't even take a shit without interference now. The next one I take will probably be scanned and uploaded to some website where they rank the size of shits. He might have chuckled to himself, if the thought weren't borne out of a deep-set anger. He took a deep breath and strode in front of an oval shaped mirror. An un-groomed man appeared before him. This man had unkempt translucent grey strands instead of a head of hair. He had a nest of crow's feet and an audience full of rows of wrinkles. This man's cheeks were bereft of colour, and they sank down lazily. This man was a melting mockery of the man Ailbeart Rend should be. Water came thick and fast upon his initial hand movement towards the tap. It was cold and refreshing on his skin, but still it seemed a far cry from the quality of water he remembered. It was a more electric shade of blue, and needless to say Rend refrained from drinking any. He stepped back from the mirror and sink, hands raised and dripping, searching for some kind of towel. Then he spotted two hand-sized indents in the wall by the sink - luminescent and inviting, like a neon sign in front of a motel. Oh, you would like for me to put my hands in there, wouldn't you. You're just itching to prove your efficiency. Well... He lunged forward and chucked as much water as he could from his hands into the two hand-dryers. Of course, they didn't spark flames or lose power as Rend hoped they would. He smeared his damp hands across the pure white wall and adjusted his eye-patch quickly in front of the mirror before the door hissed open.

Ailbeart now had returned to the corner before the door to the cryotank room. He rejoiced in his mind as the room showed itself to be empty. Sparing not a moment, Rend dove into the room, almost crashing into the door as it slid open. He panicked for a second as his memory failed him and the six cryotanks surrounded him. God, damn it, which one of the bloody things was I in. He breathed in and immediately resorted to his simplest but most degrading method. Time was not on his side. He closed his eyes. A tiny blue flash. Rend jerked towards the one just to his left and felt the exterior of it, searching for some panel to pry open. He soon sighed again and shimmied round to the back of the tank, where of course there was a screen. He remembered vaguely some instructions from a scientist about a storage capability of the tank, what to press and how to open it. He jabbed his finger quite forcefully at the screen, scanning through each of the options and blindly choosing each one that had a word related to 'storage' or seemed like the right direction to go in. Cooling unit, respiration fail-safe, exterior casing - there! The scientist had stated, however many years ago, that the storage pods had not been prepared for proper use, but that long day Rend had spent in the bowels of the Cryonautics facility was a day when he got what he wanted. He had suffered through the compulsory videos and taken the injections, but his handgun had been cocked and aimed at someone the entire time. A hesitant release of air brought a panel within the tank open, and there it was - just as he had left it.
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