I got a one little paragraph that was sandpaper for the eyes. Don't ask to see as it long gone. I've thought about using the emperor's speech thingy. Just not sure how to pad that out with out solely going into Maxwells past. Which I planned on doing anyway but not so much as I keep thinking I'll have to. Don't want burn all my S grade crap right out of the gate. I'll will keep trying until my new laptop get nearly launched across the room out of mind melting frustration. Maybe some sle... that things human are meant to get each night would help.
Might try again to work out a scene later that night...
Might try again to work out a scene later that night...