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A very brief overview..

I guess I should clarify from the start that Ewin Rysell, along with Ragnest Starkweather are, of course, not real names but simply my writing names. I won't reveal my real name for obvious reasons.

I'm currently at university studying history so I have some experience in writing and in political concepts, both of which I love, otherwise I would not be there studying them. In particular I love the eras of colonization, imperialism and history in antiquity (especially Greek and Roman governments).

Ultimately I would like to get involved in rp's relevant to politics and territories (I didn't mention, I love maps too XD). I'm also more of a casual writer, I tend to get bored quickly if the concepts are too drawn out and dull in question.

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Ragnest and Tyron / II


Ragnest slept very little that night, he was far too busy with his thoughts and plans to possibly shut it off for fear of missing a sudden burst of inspiration. Tyron slept uncomfortably beside him, occasionally grunting as he stretched out, reminding himself just how small the cave was by the sharp bursts of pain he felt from kicking solid rock. It was relatively early, and the sun, once again clouded by fog, shone dimly through the small ground-level opening at the mouth of the hole. It was time to get going.

Both Ragnest and Tyron knew far too well the people of the mountain pass were not friendly, not in any manner of meaning. They had read various explorer's accounts of travelling through the mountains, many of whom had seen horrific and barbaric practices such as cannibalism and painful execution. Therefore it was only natural for Ragnest to want to leave the hole as soon as possible for fear of being discovered unprepared, and ultimately eaten alive like many of those brave explorers who had never made it back.


"Tyron, are you awake? we must be going, we cannot linger here too long" said Ragnest, obviously quite eager to leave by the quickened tone of his voice. He realised this, and began to speak more slowly.

"Tyron?" He gave him a slight nudge and Tyron turned from facing the wall to Ragnest, his eyes struggling to adjust to the light coming in at the hole's entrance which was illuminating the space between them.

"Yes m'lord", it took Tyron a second to work out where he was again. "We are to be going then? I have everything packed from last night and we can set off at a moment's notice."

"I should have guessed. Yes we will leave now, I do not trust these mountains and neither does my gut. We will continue until sundown. Thankfully we are nearly out of the mountain pass so we may be able to return to much friendlier lands soon".

"Thank Tyche for that."

Both Ragnest and Tyron then began to struggle in the mayhem that first involved finding their packs, and then turning themselves around so that they could emerge head first. In this frenzy both were kicked more often than not, but they laughed at one another and continued in patting the floor to find their items; Ragnest did anyway, Tyron was mostly all set. Because of this Tyron was the first to emerge, leaving the dark dimly-lit hole in favour of an unnaturally bright, misty and bitterly cold morning. He looked about, squinting his eyes and holding a hand above his head to block out the sun.

Below him was a huge valley, at the bottom of which green pines stood diligently accompanying a winding river right up till the valley turned behind a mountain to the left of the hole, out of Tyron's view. He was stood on a narrow mountain path, protruding a scarce few inches from the side of the mountain. He did not realise how dangerous they had been last night as they had ran along this very same path out of desperation to escape from the cold, such desperation and a misplaced foot a few inches off could have gotten them killed. He turned around to face the hole and looked upwards at the mountain they had stayed in. It was pyramidal peak, from what Tyron could tell, and they were stood on one of the outer edges of it between two corries that seemed to act as bastions of support for the gigantic pyramid of rock.

It was beautiful, minus of course the cold and the potential for a sudden death. Tyron continued looking about him, doing his best to take in every inch of the beauty and praising himself on his earlier learned knowledge which allowed him to name various features and formations. While he was doing this Ragnest had emerged from the small opening in the side of the mountain, quite clearly flustered as he had spent so long trying to find various elements of his apparel and weaponry; despite staying up most of the night.

Like Tyron he stood for a second, admiring the harshness and beauty of the soaring mountains and deep valleys surrounding him. But, he was quicker to rouse himself to and regain his primary objective.

"Lets go, I'm sure there are a few taverns where we are going" Ragnest said merrily as he walked past Tyron and slung his backpack over his shoulder.

"Very well, it would be a marvel if they could bring the tavern here though" Tyron sighed as he lumbered after Ragnest.

* * *


Four and a half hours later and both Ragnest and Tyron were still going. By this point the cold had settled into their boots and it felt as though their toes had frozen into one cumbersome foot. They were no longer high up in the mountains and had just descended down into the valley Tyron had been admiring earlier. It was no better really, the dangerous paths had simply been replaced by deeper snow on the valley floor, plus the views were not as impressive by any measure.

They were largely surrounded by tall white forest pines and so it was difficult to see too far ahead, but Ragnest knew the general direction to travel in, largely thanks to a Vaolosian sun dial gifted to him by a travelling merchant which he infrequently glanced at. It is what you would expect from any tabletop sun dial, only that it was miniature in size, handheld, and had a dark green base, on which brown numerical figures were printed and it was crowned with a straight golden wedge to measure the sun's rays. It was quite magnificent.


As they marched along, Ragnest began to muse over his thoughts. Was he doing the right thing, was he just a coward for leaving? These thoughts troubled him often, but the further away from Vaolosian lands the less intense they became, so he continued marching. He remembered the people he had left back home, distinctly one Sir Daniel Westforth, whose company he longed for and enjoyed considerably. Westforth was not like himself, he did not care much for the peasantry, nor did he take much to learning of the world and admiring its beauty. He was a warlike man, continually caught up in all the small and large revelries of the kingdom. Why then did Ragnest care so much about him, he could not quite put his finger on it, after all Westforth was as different as any man could be from himself. He also smirked as he remembered Ghaedra Joy, a simple peasant wife who was not a holder of any status or influence, but he greatly respected her strength and purpose as she worked continually to keep her family fed and clothed; she was also known throughout Pharen for being quite the bitch to her husband too.

Just then, as Ragnest sought to move onwards with his next line up of depressive thoughts, a quick and quiet crack sounded just ahead of him, the sound emanating from behind a tree. Ragnest stopped dead, only to be barged forward by Tyron who walked straight into the back of him.

"Ugh", "stop" Ragnest whispered sharply, not glancing round to look at Tyron but keeping his eyes scanning the forestry ahead of him. "I heard something, a twig, I don't think we are alone."

Both Tyron and Ragnest reached for their sword belts, laying their hands on the handles of their swords and grasping them firmly. Tyron was quite shaken, and after the sudden bump and realization that he had let his guard down, began to grow faint.

"Tryon, back-to-back, holler if you see anything, anything at all" whispered Ragnest, still scanning the forest in front of him.

"It could be nothing th... though m'lord" Tyron replied in a shaken whisper. Nonetheless he obeyed and squared up behind Ragnest to cover his back.

Just at the moment two more twig-snaps were heard, both of which came from behind and in front of Ragnest. At this both men tensed up, Ragnest half drawing his sword and expecting an imminent attack.

"Oh, Fucks sake" Ragnest muttered.

"What, what, oh..." Tyron had realised what Ragnest had. They were in a Bardeshian trap, explicitly recorded by numerous explorers. The Bardesh would deliberately snap twigs to draw their opponents back to back, and then, when the Bardesh were in position, they would fire poison darts from the side, bypassing all armour and striking straight into their victims necks. Even if their victims stood to counter this, they would simply move again to re-counter, it was hopeless.

By this point both men had sweat running down their necks and backs, despite the harshness of the temperature, and Tyron trembled, scarcely able to hold onto consciousness. They began looking frantically, to their sides, to their front, in a desperate search to find the oncoming darts and move out of the way, but no darts came. They had been standing there for what seemed a couple of seconds, but in reality was almost a minute, and they began to wonder what was keeping the mountain people so long.

Just then, Ragnest breathed a sigh of relief, "Ah, oh my, oh okay".

"What, what is it?" Inquired Tryon, a frantic tone to his voice.

"A deer my friend, nothing more" Ragnest replied quite triumphantly; after all, he had diligently stood his ground and kept his breathing expertly controlled, despite his adversary being a deer.

Tyron turned slowly, and let out his own sigh of relief after spotting the deer. "I.. It is always good to have practice" mentioned Tyron, coughing slightly to clear his throat. Ragnest turned to give him a look, not a mocking look, but a more empathetic look just to check his dear friend's well being.

"Well," Ragnest turned back to look a the deer, "I believe we have caught dinner, we deserve it at the very least". He stood for a few seconds, still staring at the deer which was only a few meters away from him. Slowly, Ragnest drew a small dagger from his pocket and launched it quickly at the deer, the oblivious deer that continued to stand in front of them foraging carelessly through the undergrowth. The dagger struck true, piercing the deer's neck, which fell with a groan into the soft snow blanketing the ground beneath it.
You'll just have to wait until the prince is available


No problem, I'll keep up to date with the dialogue.
Ragnest and Tyron / I


The wind wound through the mountains, screeching at every crevasse, and flicking snow from the highest most peaks. This was the Vaolosian Mountain Pass just south of the border, and through it marched two men against the wind, heavy backpack bearing and exhausted in appearance. These men were Ragnest Starkweather and Tryon Hearkdale, great friends and masters of one another, constantly sharing information and wisdom to the betterment of the other. They had been marching for little over two weeks now and had hitherto had green pastures and cloaked forests to walk through, not anymore.

The mountain pass was treacherous, with narrow paths skirting the edges of various mountains and long overburdened bridges connecting occasional points between two mountain edges so that they could continue on. There was little sun to guide their way, clouded largely by the mist of the mountains which had risen earlier that day, it was now late afternoon and both men had to find shelter fast or else suffer considerably in the biting cold.


Ragnest was sick of the crunching of snow under boot, he longed for green pastures and tavern stops once more where he could indulge and relax to sweet music and drink. But no, here he was, forced out of his own country for the protection of those he loved. Why is the world so unfair?

Tyron was just behind him, also looking considerably gloomy for the losing of his personal library and the abandonment of an early relationship that was long in the making, but his duty to Ragnest who had made Tyron a great man was far more important. He remembered clearly what Yunri (his to-be wife) had told him, Look after that Ragnest wont you, he has helped us all here and we owe that much to him. Look after yourself too, and don't get up to any mischief while you are gone!. Tyron looked blankly into the snow as he remembered the look on Yunri's face, it was filled with dread and a false hope; she thought she was fooling Tryon, but he knew what she knew, that she may not be there when he got back. At this Tyron came close to shedding a tear but stopped himself just in time as Ragnest had turned around to check on him.

"Hey" Ragnest said calmly only to be duly reminded by the blank expression on Tyron's face that he was in a loud noisy wind, Tyron had not heard him. "Hey!". This time Tyron's face lit up a little, he always admired the empathy Ragnest could display. Everything about him was empathetic, the way he spoke calmly and reassuringly, his caring eyes and calm features.

"Yes M'lord"

"Are you okay? I'm rather cold up in front but I wondered how you were faring back here!" Ragnest shouted, still struggling to be heard over the howling wind.

"I'm okay Ragnest, you know I will continue going until I fall alongside you". Tyron made himself slightly smaller, suddenly realising that maybe he was being slightly too dramatic, but he was in a dramatic environment.

"I hope not my old friend, I would rather you continued over me than die next to me! After all, you will have to keep Yunri's bed warm when you get back!" There was hope in his eyes as Ragnest said this, but Tyron could tell he was being wishful.

"Very well" Tyron responded with a slight grin. "If you would wish me to desert you in such un-forbidding circumstances to return to my lovely lady, I'm afraid you would be wishing loneliness on yourself, how I do wish to return to Yunri".

"Then why do you not, good friend" Ragnest countered with a cheerful jest in his voice; talking to his closest friend usually lifted his spirits.

"Because you can pay me some for this" mocked Tyron, followed by laughter between the two who had, since leaving home, gradually experienced a breakdown in all hierarchy of status since leaving. After all, if Tyron had said this while at home, such a statement could be punishable by death; not that Ragnest would, he understood the sanctity of life, but for other peasants and nobles for one lowly man such as Tyron to question a knight was a great crime.

"Never mind this, we must find some shelter" Tyron continued, quite lifted by his recent remark which gave him a new burst of confidence.

"Agreed, I think I saw a small cave only 5 minutes back, we shall camp there tonight until tomorrow." In saying this Tyron shot Ragnest a look as if to say, in jest, how dare you take the authority back so quickly? To this Ragnest shot a stale look back at Tyron, mocking him in jest as if to say, I'm still in charge 'wanker'.

* * *

The two men found the small cave hidden carefully in the rocks, shown only by a small gap big enough to crawl through. Inside it was rather roomy, tall enough for both men to sit up and long enough for them to lay completely outstretched. It was definitely cozy. They both lay there for a few minutes, looking curiously at the rocks and minerals exposed above them, after all they both shared the same course of academia, why not interests too?

"Feldspar, Mica, hmm, quartz, olivine maybe" remarked Tyron, trying hard to make out the minerals on the roof.

"Hmm, I don't know, it is far too dark to see anything, did you not teach me not to jump to conclusions?" Ragnest replied.

"Of course definitely, but alas, I said maybe."

A brief silence followed, interrupted once again by Tyron.

"So do you really believe we can just live off the land and found our own city, or is that just wishful thinking?".

"Of course I do, it is the only thing I have left, and I know you have a to-be wife but one day we could bring her to it if things don't get better at home. You could raise your children there without fear of slavery by a local lord, we could have a rich and bountiful life". Ragnest said this in a whisper, both because it was quiet, and also from a fear of his own idea, believing it to be of such importance that someone else might steal it.

"You are right. I too myself, do also believe we could do it Ragnest, I really do, I just sincerely hope we don't have to."

"I agree, but such is the way of the world" Replied Ragnest, a bitter sadness in his tone.
Okay how do you want me to enter the scene? I'm thinking about entertaining an audience with the prince, but he is currently busy. Or would a three-way conversation be more interesting? - It might be an idea to do it in an outside chat if it is, then just copy and paste the chat into IC.
With a motion of his hand the metal coin flew into the guard's hand, where he looked it over before sending it back using the same method. Although he was unable to read the characters it's symbol was easily recognized.

With another stomp the stone walls returned to the ground, seamlessly mating with the brick pacers. With a steep bow the guard said "I apologize for the hostilities good knight. I was over zealous in my duties. Sir Ragnest you have permission to request and audience with his Majesty"

Looking at the other man with some suspicion he asked "Do you vouch for your companion sir?"

Although Xi'an was a very isolated nation they were well aware of the knights of Vaolos. Their reputation for honor had earned them the coveted honor of being allowed to request an audience with the court, an honor denied to anyone below an Earl from outside their borders.

Quite taken aback by the rapidity of the situation unfolding before them, Ragnest and Tyron were once again startled. It took Ragnest a good few seconds and head shaking before he could reply to the guard's question.

Ragnest replied, "Yes, I vouch for Tyron, friend in life and in death and my fellow traveler."

"I wonder, how long will his majesty take to grace us with his presence, I have heard rumors he is quite casual in his formalities." At this Tryon gave Ragnest a shooting glance, as if to say, stop with the formality and subtle rudeness, I know what you are doing. Ragnest suddenly realizing this possibility that he may have unwittingly insulted his host, lowered his arm to his waist, his sword would probably be of little use against magic, but it made him feel safe.

It was unusual for Ragnest to make diplomatic slip ups like these as he was often personally chosen by the king to lead them. Perhaps it was the sudden walls that had sprung up which jolted his nerves, or maybe it was the fact that he was seeing a prince whom he greatly admired.
Well I'll have to edit my post.

I'll do it when I get off work. Sorry about that


No problem! That faults on me, I should have clarified in brackets or something. Jeez you are going to work, I'm the UK and I'm about to go to bed haha.
What? I thought it was his coin?


That bit: ""I am Ragnest of Pharen, and this is Tyron, my greatest friend and also my mentor in matters of historical nature." Ragnest then took the coin from Tywin's hands and held it above him, keeping one finger placed across the breadth of the coin. "This is my insignia which I sincerely hope is recognized in these parts"."
What? I thought it was his coin?


My bad! I should have clarified, the coin is Ragnest's, Tyron just carries it because, well he is his loyal servant and Ragnest chooses to carry more food. Ragnest is a Knight and a lord, Tyron is his servant. Whoops XD
It's both because he is human and because he is a knight


But Tyron is not a knight! XD XD XD
Because in Xi'an warriors of esteem, such as knights, rank higher than any other human, regardless of income.

Since y'all aren't technically human Ragnor is actually considered lower ranking than a poor human.


Yayyyyy... XD. So is it because Tyron is a Homo Sapien and Ragnest is the other one that makes Tyron of higher rank?
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