Don't worry. As a fellow student, I know the pains of being busy. :P
I very much like you're style of writing I have to say. There is just one tiny thing I need to check to see if we're on the same line. The world itself is not a void. Things do exist around us. But they only start 'existing' in the story, as we our characters mention it or visit it or happen upon it or... well, you know.
From your post I get the feeling you think that the world is literally void of everything. If I'm wrong, do forgive me of course. I'm just checking.
Also, I hope you're okay with the name Shan. If you had something else in mind, I can always change it. :)
I very much like you're style of writing I have to say. There is just one tiny thing I need to check to see if we're on the same line. The world itself is not a void. Things do exist around us. But they only start 'existing' in the story, as we our characters mention it or visit it or happen upon it or... well, you know.
From your post I get the feeling you think that the world is literally void of everything. If I'm wrong, do forgive me of course. I'm just checking.
Also, I hope you're okay with the name Shan. If you had something else in mind, I can always change it. :)