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21 days ago
Current Do not kill the part of you that is cringe. Kill the part that cringes.
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12 mos ago
Sad to say I'm currently experiencing Writer's Block. Luckily I learned Writer's Kung Fu and I can chop the block in half with my hands like Bruce Lee
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1 yr ago
Why is the sun like bread? It rises in the yeast, and sets in the waist. Haha! Isn't that so cute? Join my RP or more puns will come.
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1 yr ago
What's the difference between a Hollywood actor and a piece of driftwood? One is Justin Timberlake. The other is timber, just in a lake. Hahathisiswhati'mdoinginsteadofwriting
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4 yrs ago
That moment when losing a character in a rougelike makes you want to shed tears. No backup. It's gone.
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Current RP I want you to join: roleplayerguild.com/topics/191461-car…

Hey y'all. I've been at this for about 12 years, and I've played a lot of kinds of RP. I like fantasy and sci-fi the most, just because they give me the most to worldbuild with, but I'm cool with almost anything. I just like writing.

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Oh, I love the dwarves. Approved. I can definitely see them building things for other nations, although I wonder if they'll struggle in typical gravity?
HECK YEAH THE GATEWAYS ARE OPENIN' BAYBEEEEEE
Here comes the green bois again, this time with a tad more oomph and just a smidge more psychological horror.



Avalon is approved, obviously. Dump it in the char tab whenevers. Always glad to have a complex Even nation onboard.
@DX3214

So, reading over this sheet, I can see what you're going for on the whole and I like the general concept. We're going very "warlord" this time around ;P

But I do have some concerns. Your writing style in this sheet often lacks grammar or punctuation, and that makes it difficult to understand what you're saying. Especially during the more complicated bits, I can't really tell what you mean, and it's making me feel hesitant about approving you.

Your worldbuilding itself is fine. You've kept to Gateways themes well. Having a mythological and a non-mythological history was really smart- it's the kind of thing I wish that I'd thought of.

So I'm not rejecting your sheet, or asking for a rewrite. But still, it's difficult to read, so I think I need some assurance that you'll run your future posts through, for example, an internet grammar checker before posting IC. Something like Grammarly, maybe?

Oh, and this is a smaller issue, but-

Possibly a disaster event unleashed by the sun that caused electromagnetic storms across the entire star system. Possibly combined with AI rebellions causing a full on collapse with the sun becoming the instability oddity that it is today


I'm not fully sure what this means. Are you saying their sun has become unstable?
@SgtEasy

Approved. Monkee.

The Khanapes were one of the highlights of G1, and one of the nations I remember the most clearly from that time. It's excellent to see them again.

One small thing tho:

On the 299th Year since Landing, an opportunity came with the sudden opening of the gateway.


500th year. The timeline is bigger now- we have 5 centuries from Earth instead of 3. Also, a lot of the stuff you say immediately after this feels like it should be in your first IC post, not in your nation's history
I remember the first iteration, but I didn't have time for it. Do I dare try again?


Dare you? Well, I definitely hope so. I see you around the guild pretty often. The Lorne Administration was fun.

If it helps at all, the first iteration of Gateways was unusually fast for an NRP. It's unlikely this will be as quick, and I don't enforce a particular posting order or speed.
Omg this looks like fun! I get to create a whole new type of race and world to throw into this! Yes please


Well, your username is awesome.

And yeah! Absolutely, we're glad to have you.

@BunniesOfDoom

Feel free to hop onto the Discord


>bunnies of doom
>"hop"

Aight
[reserved]
Through the Gateways: Inhumanity


In the centuries between Earth and now, how have you changed? What have you become?


Earth is gone. It passed away with a whimper, not a bang, in the throes of nuclear war, famine and pestilence. Whatever is left of that travesty can barely sustain life.

But it did give us one last gift before the end. Desperate world governments, equipped with the best of human technology and working in a bid for survival, threw the last of their resources into the making of the Gateway. A massive artificial wormhole, leading to countless different potentially habitable worlds. The creation of the Gateway was no less than a technological miracle, and it has never been replicated. Colony ships from all nations and cultures and peoples were sent haphazardly through, in the hope of finding another home. Humanity was scattered like seeds across the Milky Way: separated from each other, lost, but determined to survive.

And now, five hundred years later, we've found one another again.




General Idea


For me, the most interesting part about NRP has always been the interactions between different cultures. How does the warmonger from a brutal world react when he sees a pacifist utopia? What happens when a group of religious faithful meet a society of militant atheists?

That's what I want to focus on in this RP. We'll each be taking on the role of a different colony established by Earth about five hundred years ago. We were sent through an artificial wormhole generator to our current homes, but after the fall of Earth, the generator ceased to function, leaving each colony completely cut off from the rest of humanity.

Now think about how your colony might have evolved during this time. Did they land on a harsh world, and use cybernetic enhancements to survive? Are they ruled over by a technocratic dictator, by an incomprehensible alien authority, by a gene-modded racial hierarchy? Do they even consider themselves to be human anymore? I want this to be heavily divergent, so your imagination is the limit.

Now, for reasons unknown, the Gateway system has started to function again. All at once, an artificial wormhole has appeared again in the system of each of our colonies, and that Gateway leads both back to Earth and to every other system. For the first time in five centuries, our poor little colonies will be sending their ships across their Gateways and finding one another. And personally, I think it could be pretty fun to RP these early 'first contact' interactions. Seeing how our different people respond to one another. And I'm not opposed to anything; war, trade, diplomacy, or whatever else.

To conclude this overview, I'll leave you with a quote from my co-GM, Enigmatik:

This is primarily an RP about cultures and nations interacting with one another. In the hundreds of years since the closing of the Gateways, each colony will have developed and changed in unique and variable ways. Although nominally one people, humanity is now split into countless fragments, each led in different ways, speaking different languages, with different beliefs. In this RP, it is up to you if your people will face this new galaxy with optimism, or a smoking gun.




Prior Iterations and Theme


I wouldn't be surprised if the title of this game or this OP feels vaguely familiar to you.

This is not the first Through the Gateways RP. Coming up on 4 years ago, I posted Through the Gateways: Humanity. About another year later and my co-GM from that game created a second RP, Gateways: The Next Generation. (There was also a brief fantasy spin-off that I'm only slightly ashamed of.)

Both prior Gateways games were fairly successful, with a dedicated player community. But! This is a new game, starting fresh, and I'm hoping to emphasize the voices and ideas of new players in this one. So if you're joining for the first time, consider yourself very welcome. This is not a sequel. You won't need to know anything from the previous games to write with us. This is a fresh start.

The first Gateways game was named "Through the Gateways: Humanity" because I wanted to explore how human culture would have changed after centuries away from Earth. That is still a central idea here. However, this one is "Through the Gateways: Inhumanity," because a secondary theme I'm hoping to emphasize in this iteration is how humans might have had to modify ourselves, integrate with aliens, or develop completely new ways of living. So feel free to come up with your strangest ideas about what has happened to the colonists since leaving Earth. It is not at all necessary that all nation sheets fit this theme, however, it is merely one potential idea to start off your worldbuilding.



On Joining and Leaving:


If someone wants to join after the game has already begun, I will simply say that the Gateway leading to their colony has only now opened. Likewise, if someone leaves or goes MIA, we can say the their colony's Gateway just shut down as mysteriously as it had reactivated. In this way, the Gateways NRPs have always been able to accept new players whenever, and survive losses without grinding to a halt.



Interested?


Nation Sheet below.



Feel free to add new sections or change around NS formatting as needed.

Joining the Discord is strongly recommended, even if you don't intend to talk often, as it's where the majority of planning, news and OOC interaction about the RP will take place: discord.gg/6zAXNgzPWS



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