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1 mo ago
Current Do not kill the part of you that is cringe. Kill the part that cringes.
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1 yr ago
Sad to say I'm currently experiencing Writer's Block. Luckily I learned Writer's Kung Fu and I can chop the block in half with my hands like Bruce Lee
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1 yr ago
Why is the sun like bread? It rises in the yeast, and sets in the waist. Haha! Isn't that so cute? Join my RP or more puns will come.
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1 yr ago
What's the difference between a Hollywood actor and a piece of driftwood? One is Justin Timberlake. The other is timber, just in a lake. Hahathisiswhati'mdoinginsteadofwriting
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4 yrs ago
That moment when losing a character in a rougelike makes you want to shed tears. No backup. It's gone.
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Current RP I want you to join: roleplayerguild.com/topics/191461-car…

Hey y'all. I've been at this for about 12 years, and I've played a lot of kinds of RP. I like fantasy and sci-fi the most, just because they give me the most to worldbuild with, but I'm cool with almost anything. I just like writing.

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"The Earth is the cradle of humanity, but mankind cannot stay in the cradle forever.”

- Konstantin Tsiolkovsky


In the depths of space, ancient machines whir to life. A signal has been received, written in a language of code that only the Gateways know, that says: Come back. And they do. From one end of the Galaxy to the other, overlooking worlds of deep ocean or alien jungle, they come back. First with a spark, a wavering in space- and then a flash of blinding light and heat, a storm in the void, a celestial crescendo like a sun being born. And then only a steady light. Billions of lifeforms witness it. They wonder for a moment, perhaps, but then they go back to their lives, not knowing that over their heads now sits a portal to countless other worlds.



) ---(**) || (**)--- (


There is a new star in the sky, and only one man cannot see it.

That man is a revelator and, though he is a priest, he is practical. His temple is made of hard white stone, which stands out starkly in the half-darkness of this part of Acerbus, close enough to the Night that the stars shine overhead faintly. It’s a large, rich temple, politically important- he cares about that more than he does spiritual matters.

He is performing a ritual, the Third Birthing Remembrance, an overcomplicated affair which supposedly represents mankind’s journey from Earth to Acerbus. Revelator Andrea does his job dutifully, but internally he scoffs at it. His theology is the same as his mindset: grounded, skeptical, a religion with all of the fluff taken out of it.

Unlike the stereotypical revelator, Andrea is not a man of the supernatural or other flights of fancy. He scorns the sacrosanct myths the others hold to so strongly as “only metaphors,” and delights in the scandalized reactions of his fellow clergy when he tells them so. He did not choose to be a priest, he was raised in it. He would doubt the existence of Earth itself if the evidence for it wasn't so great. Everything about that old story of humans blazing across the cosmos in the wake of a dying world sounds like the kind of tale a storyteller would come up with three smokes in. He supposes it must be true, but with a suspicion that it’s all been rewritten by his more myth-minded peers.

This is ridiculous, a voice in the back of his mind complains, as he carries out the ritual. First he was burning incense and letting the smoke smudge up the open stone courtyard, now he is lifting his hands and scattering dirt on the ground. He does it all mechanically, routinely- he has done it countless times before and it is mandatory, but this time in particular he starts to sense something… off. It is a few moments, in which he stands with his hands held high, before he notices: the worshippers aren’t looking at him. This is both strange and a little upsetting. They’re leaning over to each other and whispering, they’re staring up into the sky with slack jaws and looks of awe- they’re not looking at him. He raises his arms a little higher. But the congregation does not notice, their gaze is at something over his head, in that faintly starred sky.

When he turns to look, it takes him no time at all to see it.

There’s a new light in the sky, outshining the stars. It sits right above the peak of the temple, bright and burning and reminiscent of the stories about-

“The Gateway!” someone behind him cries out, completing the thought, and the light of someone else’s device invades the holy space. “Look,” they say, fast and overexcited. “People think it’s- the Gate, the portal thing, from the stories!” It has only been a few minutes, yet the Acerbian people are already connecting the dots. But Andrea isn’t. He is staring, slack-jawed as one of the worshippers, at the burning light in the sky. And the story is flashing through his head with a weight it’s never had before. Could it be?

“Revelator! Do you know?” one of them is asking now, pulling at his shoulder. He does not answer; the words may as well be coming from a trillion miles away, from across the cosmos. “Revelator,” they say again, and now they’re saying “Revelator, are you alright?”

With a rumple of fabric and a thud on the stone, Revelator Andrea falls to his knees.

) ---(**) || (**)--- (


The Gateway is open, and only one man cannot see it.

That man is Oscaro, and he is not a priest. This is the second most important fact about him, and he has to tell it to everyone he meets. It’s because he looks like one: usually dressed in ceremonial robes, with an apparent air of spirituality and sophistication about him. He is indeed a part of the clergy, but his role is as a fidel: a specialized monk of a particular deity, who serves under the revelators, but only when that revelator’s duties connect to the fidel’s chosen deity. When they are not aiding the revelators, they live lives of contemplation, study, and service to their fellow believers.

The first most important fact about him is that he’s blind.

Completely blind, from birth. His particular condition could be cured with Acerbian medicine, and that is precisely what Oscaro’s parents wanted for him. But he refused. The law was that a child could not be “healed” of blindness until they were old enough to make that choice for themselves, and as soon as Oscaro was of age to understand his own disability and what it meant for him, he knew he wanted to remain blind his entire life. His mother, crying about it, begged him to change his mind.

But she never asked him why. She didn’t need to.

“Hallowed Oscaro,” says a woman’s voice over intercom, “the captain wishes you to know that we are approaching the Gateway. Departure in estimated two hours. He…” the voice hesitates. “He suggests you should get some rest before we reach Earth.” In his private quarters aboard the battleship, Oscaro chuckled. She’d only hesitated because he was titled Hallowed. Even military types couldn’t get over Oscaro’s special place in the clergy. Especially military types, in fact. Many times he’d noticed with amusement that they were less nervous around actual revelators.

Oscaro comms back: “Understood. They’re sure I’m the only one qualified to be our first diplomat?”

The answer came back in the affirmative, of course. Fidels, like priests, are social creatures, but they are further educated. In times past, when Acerbian technology wasn’t so reclaimed and the education system not so developed, they served as the early Temple’s only true scholars. Oscaro is more educated in history and language and politics than anyone else on this battleship, where he’s been serving as a spiritual guide only because no true priest is willing to work on a ship patrolling so far out from Acerbus.

It was the closest vessel when the Gateway opened. As such, it is the one first entering the Gateway, and Oscaro is now the one who must play diplomat if anything is still alive on the other side of it. He wonders about that. And about the other colonies, if the stories about them are true. And about- many things, so many that it sets him to repeating holy poems for peace. His goddess is the Swallower, who it is said is better worshipped by the blind than by any other humans, being called Hallowed once they embrace her, and who it is said offers the peace of oblivion to those who understand her.

He slipped into visions at his desk reciting poems about her. When he awakes, the Acerbian battleship has passed through the Gateway. They have arrived safely in Sol, not far from the Moon, not far at all from Earth. Earth! The long abandoned womb of humanity. The crew is excitable, amazed, ecstatic, all the words. They are in shock. They are gazing at the viewscreens and speaking longingly about their long-lost homeworld, however gray and ruined and empty they say it looks now. Oscaro cannot see it. But he smiles.


Oh, I love the dwarves. Approved. I can definitely see them building things for other nations, although I wonder if they'll struggle in typical gravity?
HECK YEAH THE GATEWAYS ARE OPENIN' BAYBEEEEEE
Here comes the green bois again, this time with a tad more oomph and just a smidge more psychological horror.



Avalon is approved, obviously. Dump it in the char tab whenevers. Always glad to have a complex Even nation onboard.
@DX3214

So, reading over this sheet, I can see what you're going for on the whole and I like the general concept. We're going very "warlord" this time around ;P

But I do have some concerns. Your writing style in this sheet often lacks grammar or punctuation, and that makes it difficult to understand what you're saying. Especially during the more complicated bits, I can't really tell what you mean, and it's making me feel hesitant about approving you.

Your worldbuilding itself is fine. You've kept to Gateways themes well. Having a mythological and a non-mythological history was really smart- it's the kind of thing I wish that I'd thought of.

So I'm not rejecting your sheet, or asking for a rewrite. But still, it's difficult to read, so I think I need some assurance that you'll run your future posts through, for example, an internet grammar checker before posting IC. Something like Grammarly, maybe?

Oh, and this is a smaller issue, but-

Possibly a disaster event unleashed by the sun that caused electromagnetic storms across the entire star system. Possibly combined with AI rebellions causing a full on collapse with the sun becoming the instability oddity that it is today


I'm not fully sure what this means. Are you saying their sun has become unstable?
@SgtEasy

Approved. Monkee.

The Khanapes were one of the highlights of G1, and one of the nations I remember the most clearly from that time. It's excellent to see them again.

One small thing tho:

On the 299th Year since Landing, an opportunity came with the sudden opening of the gateway.


500th year. The timeline is bigger now- we have 5 centuries from Earth instead of 3. Also, a lot of the stuff you say immediately after this feels like it should be in your first IC post, not in your nation's history
I remember the first iteration, but I didn't have time for it. Do I dare try again?


Dare you? Well, I definitely hope so. I see you around the guild pretty often. The Lorne Administration was fun.

If it helps at all, the first iteration of Gateways was unusually fast for an NRP. It's unlikely this will be as quick, and I don't enforce a particular posting order or speed.
Omg this looks like fun! I get to create a whole new type of race and world to throw into this! Yes please


Well, your username is awesome.

And yeah! Absolutely, we're glad to have you.

@BunniesOfDoom

Feel free to hop onto the Discord


>bunnies of doom
>"hop"

Aight
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Through the Gateways: Inhumanity


In the centuries between Earth and now, how have you changed? What have you become?


Earth is gone. It passed away with a whimper, not a bang, in the throes of nuclear war, famine and pestilence. Whatever is left of that travesty can barely sustain life.

But it did give us one last gift before the end. Desperate world governments, equipped with the best of human technology and working in a bid for survival, threw the last of their resources into the making of the Gateway. A massive artificial wormhole, leading to countless different potentially habitable worlds. The creation of the Gateway was no less than a technological miracle, and it has never been replicated. Colony ships from all nations and cultures and peoples were sent haphazardly through, in the hope of finding another home. Humanity was scattered like seeds across the Milky Way: separated from each other, lost, but determined to survive.

And now, five hundred years later, we've found one another again.




General Idea


For me, the most interesting part about NRP has always been the interactions between different cultures. How does the warmonger from a brutal world react when he sees a pacifist utopia? What happens when a group of religious faithful meet a society of militant atheists?

That's what I want to focus on in this RP. We'll each be taking on the role of a different colony established by Earth about five hundred years ago. We were sent through an artificial wormhole generator to our current homes, but after the fall of Earth, the generator ceased to function, leaving each colony completely cut off from the rest of humanity.

Now think about how your colony might have evolved during this time. Did they land on a harsh world, and use cybernetic enhancements to survive? Are they ruled over by a technocratic dictator, by an incomprehensible alien authority, by a gene-modded racial hierarchy? Do they even consider themselves to be human anymore? I want this to be heavily divergent, so your imagination is the limit.

Now, for reasons unknown, the Gateway system has started to function again. All at once, an artificial wormhole has appeared again in the system of each of our colonies, and that Gateway leads both back to Earth and to every other system. For the first time in five centuries, our poor little colonies will be sending their ships across their Gateways and finding one another. And personally, I think it could be pretty fun to RP these early 'first contact' interactions. Seeing how our different people respond to one another. And I'm not opposed to anything; war, trade, diplomacy, or whatever else.

To conclude this overview, I'll leave you with a quote from my co-GM, Enigmatik:

This is primarily an RP about cultures and nations interacting with one another. In the hundreds of years since the closing of the Gateways, each colony will have developed and changed in unique and variable ways. Although nominally one people, humanity is now split into countless fragments, each led in different ways, speaking different languages, with different beliefs. In this RP, it is up to you if your people will face this new galaxy with optimism, or a smoking gun.




Prior Iterations and Theme


I wouldn't be surprised if the title of this game or this OP feels vaguely familiar to you.

This is not the first Through the Gateways RP. Coming up on 4 years ago, I posted Through the Gateways: Humanity. About another year later and my co-GM from that game created a second RP, Gateways: The Next Generation. (There was also a brief fantasy spin-off that I'm only slightly ashamed of.)

Both prior Gateways games were fairly successful, with a dedicated player community. But! This is a new game, starting fresh, and I'm hoping to emphasize the voices and ideas of new players in this one. So if you're joining for the first time, consider yourself very welcome. This is not a sequel. You won't need to know anything from the previous games to write with us. This is a fresh start.

The first Gateways game was named "Through the Gateways: Humanity" because I wanted to explore how human culture would have changed after centuries away from Earth. That is still a central idea here. However, this one is "Through the Gateways: Inhumanity," because a secondary theme I'm hoping to emphasize in this iteration is how humans might have had to modify ourselves, integrate with aliens, or develop completely new ways of living. So feel free to come up with your strangest ideas about what has happened to the colonists since leaving Earth. It is not at all necessary that all nation sheets fit this theme, however, it is merely one potential idea to start off your worldbuilding.



On Joining and Leaving:


If someone wants to join after the game has already begun, I will simply say that the Gateway leading to their colony has only now opened. Likewise, if someone leaves or goes MIA, we can say the their colony's Gateway just shut down as mysteriously as it had reactivated. In this way, the Gateways NRPs have always been able to accept new players whenever, and survive losses without grinding to a halt.



Interested?


Nation Sheet below.



Feel free to add new sections or change around NS formatting as needed.

Joining the Discord is strongly recommended, even if you don't intend to talk often, as it's where the majority of planning, news and OOC interaction about the RP will take place: discord.gg/6zAXNgzPWS



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